Date: December 04, 2018 11:58 am Title: Gone, Daddy, Gone
An interesting concept to be sure. Very detailed writing too. It'll be interesting to see where this one goes.
1 [Report This]Date: December 03, 2018 06:24 pm Title: Gone, Daddy, Gone
Oh man! I did NOT see that twist coming but let me tell you, I am here for this!
It feels weird to say "this is a fun new take on our favorite characters?" like kidnapping and attempted murder are "fun" topics but you know what? This is a fun new read and I'm very intrigued! I love the characters you've brought in and given something to do so far - they all fit really naturally.
"I obviously have some anger issues" made me chuckle.. great line right there. I can't wait to see what you do with this :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I've been playing with a believable progression of the plot and more serious versions of these characters that DON'T feel ridiculous in my head for a few days now. I have a pretty good idea of where I'm going with this, can't wait for more feedback :)