Date: December 26, 2018 05:15 pm Title: Paint by Numbers
Very intense chapter here. I do like how Pam finally told off Roy like this. Good for her. I also like how you described Pam's painting. Very vivid considering all the stress she's been under. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! I wish we'd seen more of Pam's art in the series, so I try to incorporate it where I can.
1 [Report This]Date: December 26, 2018 05:10 pm Title: Ice to Meet You
The night is always darkest just before the dawn. Though the fact that you have Pam thinking about all these things is good. Get all the confusing angsty emotions out of the way before the sun rises.
Author's Response: Introspective chapters are my favorites to write, so I'm glad this landed effectively for you.
Date: December 26, 2018 05:04 pm Title: So Call Me, Maybe
Awww Pam, to be stuck cleaning up after everyone, being sad about being alone, then Roy calling to further remind her of that and not even letting her get a word in edgewise. Great writing though to convey all those emotions.
Author's Response: Thank you! I value your opinion on my writing of emotions because your own is so good.
Date: December 26, 2018 04:59 pm Title: Ugly Is As Ugly Sweaters
Interesting take on why Jim and Pam might get mad at each other here. Very realistic too. You've got everyone in character nicely too.
Author's Response: Thanks! This was the chapter I was most concerned about because I was bringing in multiple other characters and worried about the in-character nature of the interaction, so I appreciate hearing this.
1 [Report This]Date: December 26, 2018 04:53 pm Title: Battering Ram
Very cute here. I love how you've got Jim so easily making Pam happy. Onto the next.
Author's Response: Appreciate the feedback! The S2 Jim/Pam dynamic is probably my favorite in the whole series.
Date: December 26, 2018 04:48 pm Title: Radio Silence
Very good introspective chapter here. I liked seeing Pam's thought's leading up to Christmas. Roy is a fool as usual. I also like the quick reference to the teapot.
Author's Response: Thanks! This is how I usually see Roy: an idiot, but not actively malicious. Just dumb.