Love the banter between the two of them. It's so cute and playful. I'm real curious what happens when the news comes out, she meets Karen, etc. Good stuff ahead!

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In the words of my favorite 90s hit, “two enthusiastic thumbs up!” Yes, yes, yes to the fake married trope. I am living for this!
The almost marriage to Ryan - oh god, was not expecting that. I love how you’re using everyone in so many different roles in this. It adds a fun little twist to just about every mention of another supporting character.
Your use of “it’s a date,” was perfect. The tone was so different, but so great for this story.
I love this Pam, she’s got that fancy new Beesly sass in droves! It’s probably my favorite thing about this story.
As always, I can’t wait to read more!

Author's Response:

I will always accept a Clueless quote!

I don’t know what it is with the Ryan thing but like.... I can’t stop throwing him into these roles now? I’m not even sorry about it. And I LOVE so much that you’re on board for the fake marriage trope. I worried it would seem to soap opera-y, so I’m really happy that it’s going over so well so far. I’m also glad to see this Pam is working too - she’s definitely different than Canon Pam because she’s seen some stuff, ya know?

Thank you so much for reading! 

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"Do you know the Prince family?" I cackled, literally cackled.

I like how this is playing out. They really don't like each other much...which will make it all the more explosive later on.

Oh, and I pictured Tony's therapist - was that right? :-)

Author's Response:

The Prince Family would totally be in the mob!

Im so glad their dynamic is working for you because yeah... just wait. ;)

Ohhh, we’ll be meeting Pam’s therapist soon enough. One of my favorite characters thus far, and that’s saying something, given how much I love Security Dwight.

Thanks for reading!  

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OMG!!! so when’s the next chapter??? I’m hooked !!!

Author's Response: Merria! Thanks so much for reading, I’m glad you’re coming along for this rollercoaster of a story! :)

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So, ya know, I KNEW this was going to happen but I didn't know how perfect (but I'm also not surprised even a little). I hate/love the cliffhanger. Like a lot.

Here are a few other things I am really into with this chapter:
Kind of neurotic Helene who is also grieving (when she had to turn away because Pam reminded her of Mr Beesly *swoon at that emotion*)
Wild Larissa - like I'm here for that spin off but also hoping she gets a bit of redemption
Good natured guilt-trip-giving, baiting Betsy. I can't wait to see how you write Betsy further in this story.
Katy would send needy messages. Whatever works for you, Jim. For now...

Funny thing, I always fall asleep when Carrie's Russian lover shows up too...Hmmmm... But really, the entire Sisterly Support theme of Pam and Penny in this story is wonderful. I look forward to where you will take that.

But let's go back to that ending. WHAT?!?! I need this update, like yesterday. Please please please. I need it like air. Please.

Author's Response:

I’m so glad you’re loving Betsy and Helene! I’m actually really loving all of the women in this story for so many reasons that’ll be come clearer as we go on, but it’s so great to see that you’re on board with them all so far. 

Katy WOULD send needy messages. Doesn’t mean Jim has to answer them though. And yet...

As always, thank you! :) 

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I swear to God if Jim is on this scheme I'll lose my *BLEEP*.
(But won't stop reading, give me more :p )

Author's Response: SG19, this is my FAVORITE review this story has gotten so far. It makes me grin like crazy every time I see it. Thank you for reading! 

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Don't make promises you can't keep.

Lovely chapter. I like the Jim/Karen friendship and kudos on Penny. Very good characterization.

Author's Response: I’m not going to lie to you, I’ve got big plans for Karen and it’s entirely different than any way I’ve ever written her. I think you’ll enjoy it! Thanks for reading :) 

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Slow start? C'mon, Coley, I never thought I would be craving for a mob Office story. Nevertheless here I'm, with so many questions in my head and already in love with mob!Jim.
(I really liked the taser scene, wonder where else this kind of dynamic might show up... ;) )

Author's Response: Thank you! I’m absolutely delighted the taser in jello scene went over well, it was one of my favorite parts of writing this chapter. And yay for getting you excited about Mob!Jim! He’s going to be pretty great, I promise. ;) 

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Oh I am so pleased with that cliffhanger ending. Am I out of line if I'm hoping this was an inside job on at least one end? I like Jim and I like Pam and I want his POV so bad but here I think you're totally right to only give us hers. Nice worldbuilding details, and I'm a big fan of your using Penny. Keep it up!

Author's Response: So I can tell you that you'll get some Jim POV in the next chapter and that the POV's will alternate pretty evenly throughout the rest of the story. What I can't tell you is who did the killing. What fun would that be?! ;) Thanks for reading!

You're right. After all the anticipation and hearing about Coley's Mob story, it's here. Good set up so far. The characters are familiar, yet there's enough of a difference to them that makes them unique within this world. Lots of suspense in this initial chapter. Not the usual fluffy banter between Jim and Pam to be sure, but it is banter nonetheless and it works well. I did enjoy the addition of the jello prank. Great way to but in a familiar detail, but with a new twist. Can't wait to see how this all plays out.

Author's Response: Thanks warrior! Yeah for now at least, the banter is gonna be a little darker and tense, but it’s still there because I can’t imagine a banterless JAM, even if they don’t really like each other right now. Glad you liked the jello prank! I’ve had a great time figuring out how to work key show moments into this world, and I’m excited to start sharing them! Thanks again for reading! :)

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I screamed, literally screamed, when I saw this was posted. It's almost midnight. Dogs and husband grumbled; I told them to shush. It's finally happening.

Veronica Mars. Nancy Drew. Father Flenderson. Security Dwight. Various weapons including a PINK stun gun. Diamonds and pearls and vodka sodas and quoting Paul "Big Paul" Castellano and...

Hi, I'm dead. This is so good and I love where it is going. I will never stop harassing/encouraging/sending inspo quotes and pics if this is what we are going to get. (As I expected, of course.)

Oh my god. It's finally happening.

Author's Response: It's happening! Tell Duke Cupcake I'm sorry for interrupting his beauty sleep. As always, thank you so much for the inspirational pics and of course, for reading! (But mostly the pics, let's be honest.)