1 [Report This]Date: February 26, 2025 05:48 am Title: Chapter 6
Oh god no Pam why would u not tell him about what you said to Helene that just put such a uncomfortable feeling in my stomach.
Oh god that last moment was even sweeter than their first kiss im gonna tear my hair out they're TENSION is so well written.
I know it's been forever but im going crazy, in my mind she tells him the story switch immediately the next day i cant stand the betrayal if she waits any longer OH GOD
This is really Really good. Im glad to have read this even if it unfinished. Although Im not above begging for more. But i just hope you've doing well and that you know that there are still people here eagerly awaiting any updates you may want to add. You're an incredible writer,thank you for sharing this.
1 [Report This]Date: February 26, 2025 05:32 am Title: Chapter 5
My stomach is all in knots bec i know the next chapter is all we have left but OH NY GOD this is so incredible š oh Pam i just want to wrap her up in my arms and i love how your balancing Jim's impatience but obvious fondness for her. That ending cliffhanger was intense. It's so juicy the way these two only really have each other and maybe Maybe a few allies? Damn this is so good
Date: February 26, 2025 05:11 am Title: Chapter 4
Their almost hate and love dynamic here is so interesting and again, your placement of the canon characters has me so curious. And wow both of them with tattoos and omg What is the history between her and Ryan?? Just all such good and juicy details omg
Date: February 26, 2025 04:49 am Title: Chapter 3
1. Very interesting quick dispatching of Roy thank god. I love the idea of Bill putting the fear of god in him and now im so disappointed this version of her father is gone. I absolutely adore how you made Pam His daughter. Very nice touch.
2.damn i love their back and forth
3. The repurposing of the "it's a date" moment omg šš
Date: February 26, 2025 04:24 am Title: Chapter 2
Again: JUICIEST PREMISE AND OMG i was waiting for Karen but i wasnt expecting Katy im so so excited to see more of these versions of them UGH
1 [Report This]Date: February 26, 2025 03:25 am Title: Chapter 1
Im SQUEALING the premise is fucking AMAZING and omg i love these versions of Jim and Pam. And very interesting take on Helene.
1 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2023 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 3
Jam in a pretend relationship is becoming one of my favorites thanks to you!
1 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2023 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 2
Karen as Jim's BFF?! Yes, please!!!
1 [Report This]Date: February 18, 2022 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 6
For the love of everything JAM, please update this story soon. š
1 [Report This]Date: September 25, 2021 09:04 am Title: Chapter 6
God this is so good. I never read fics that aren't mainly canon/set at Dunder Mifflin, but this is a fantastic exception and I couldn't help myself. I hope you continue this at some point in the future.
Author's Response:
Oh, Iām so glad you found this story and that you like it! I know itās been forever since my last update but I promise that I havenāt forgotten about this one and that the next chapter will very much be worth the (already too long) wait!
Thank you for reading!
1 [Report This]Date: April 23, 2021 11:01 am Title: Chapter 6
I love this story! I hope you update soon because it is amazing.
Date: October 07, 2020 04:11 am Title: Chapter 1
I hope you will update soon! I love this story!
Date: October 06, 2020 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
I hope you will update soon! I love this story!
Date: September 30, 2020 07:08 am Title: Chapter 6
I'm obsessed with this fic! I really hope you are still writing!
1 [Report This]Date: September 13, 2020 05:12 am Title: Chapter 1
This story just keeps getting better. Canāt wait for the next update!
Date: September 01, 2020 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 6
I vaguely remember there was once a mafia JAM fic I read in some distant life...
But seriously, this was really good. I'm a little worried that Jim and Pam now have asymmetric information about Helene's thoughts, but I suppose it's not really JAM if you don't have plates flying in the air with the potential to crash down ala The Secret or Beach Games. I still really enjoy this world, and I'm glad we got Betsy in this chapter. She's awesome.
1 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2020 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 6
OMG! I LOVE this story. I just started reading it and have to say.... PUHLEASE DONT WAIT SO LONG FOR AN UPDATE. I saw in your notes that some updates took 8 months, omg I canāt wait that long (I have so many stories that donāt have updates and this is probably one of my favorites so please update regularly!).
I love Mafia Jim and the interaction with him and Pam - and want to see them fall in love as it seems they clearly are on the road to doing so. Iād love to hear some of Jimās perspective as we see Pamās.
Youāre writing is so great and the subtle little things these characters, especially Jim like with the kiss in the garden, is just amazing.
Thank you for writing and so glad I found this fic!
1 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2020 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 6
Iāve been dying to read this all day (stupid work) and finally got the chance and literally couldnāt tear my eyes away. I am SO CAPTIVATED by this world and these versions of Jim and Pam! It all read as si believable and real and I just know things arenāt going to always be this easy for them, and I am so excited to read more.
And girl. That tiny, sweet, mostly for show kiss killed me. And then HIS TEXT and his SOFTNESS and just. Mafia Jim could give me concrete boots and send me to sleep with the fishes and Iād say thank you.
1 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2020 11:22 am Title: Chapter 6
All of this, so good. All of the dialogue, and the intrigue. I love it. And that kiss! I was a little breathless myself. How do you do it? So simple yet so effective.
1 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2020 11:10 am Title: Chapter 6
COL- āI forgot how to writeā -LEY. That was so good! Everything about their situation is so intense and exciting and this chapter flowed with the last like it was all written in the same time period. The Jam chemistry is real and that whole scene in the backyard was very entertaining and cute. And the way you ended it? So sweet. Love Jim just letting her sleep. Your writing is as good as ever and I canāt wait for the next chapter!
Date: September 01, 2020 11:02 am Title: Chapter 6
I really love this fic and got super excited to see it updated again. I'm literally biding my time for more witty and sexy banter and them falling in love. The mix of reactions from Betsy and Helene were great. Ah man got so excited to see this. Can't wait for more.
Date: September 01, 2020 10:52 am Title: Chapter 6
Yeay!!!!! This story is back. Itās so much fun. Iām really looking forward to Jimās brothers reacting to this. So great you updated
1 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2020 08:25 am Title: Chapter 6
You really had to throw in that "Not a bad day, Beesly" in there, huh? As if I wasn't already dying just from this story being updated, now I'm pretty sure I'm deceased.
Also, their little show for Betsy? I also cannot wait to see what Jim can do when his mother isn't watching. And then he drove around Scranton for a couple of hours while she slept in the car? You're literally going to kill me, Coley. If I don't leave a review on the next chapter it's because I've died from this one.
1 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2020 07:36 am Title: Chapter 6
AH. I'm so happy you updated this!
I am very much here for more-clever-than-anticipated Helene and Betsy, and of course no matter the universe Pam and Jim can't quite manage to communicate well. The banter around the kiss was *perfect*.
1 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2020 05:48 am Title: Chapter 1
DEFINITELY STILL HERE FOR THIS! I love the setups you create and the tension. Hoping the next chapter is quick in coming b29;a039;