Reviews For First Sight
Reviewer: Comfect Signed 
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Date: September 21, 2019 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
1 [Report This]Date: September 21, 2019 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
I think you've done a very good job here with the turn in Jim's enthusiasm--I like Pam getting a phone call as a trigger. Good work with the inner monologue too. Thanks for posting it!
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 21, 2019 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
1 [Report This]Date: September 21, 2019 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
So there's a lot going on here. The initial hesitance of Jim starting at DM which is blast aside when he meets Pam. It's fun to see him light up like that as they talk and converse over lunch. Till it all comes crashing down when she gets that phone call. Kind of a microcosm of S1-S3 in a short package. Still it's heartening to know how that it'll eventually turn out right for them.