1 [Report This]Date: November 25, 2019 02:56 pm Title: I'm Just A Holy Fool
Oooooooh, I’m intrigued... very intrigued :)
I always love a darker take on the characters so thank you for having the courage to post your story.
I’m looking forward to seeing how this journey progresses, hopefully with some positive experiences for poor Pam :) and yes, I’d definitely love to see Jim in this AU too!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I'm definitely better at writing angst style-wise and I find it more interesting to read, so I'm in the same boat with you there. Jim will find himself in this story too, I promise!
Date: November 24, 2019 11:05 pm Title: I'm Just A Holy Fool
Welcome to MTT!
This is definitely a different take on Pam. But it’s not altogether inconceivable that she could have gone down a road like this had Roy been more like the Roy you’ve described here.
I understand that it’s very AU, but will there be elements closer to the show, i.e. will Pam still somehow end up working at Dunder Mifflin? More importantly, will there still be a version of Jim?
I suppose time will tell (so feel free to view these questions as rhetorical if you like).
You’re telling an interesting story here & I’m curious to see how it plays out...
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! As I said to warrior4 I know the story might be kind of hard to match with the actual characters in some places but I’m hoping that future chapters will tie things together. As for your questions, I’m working on a way to hopefully make the show be a part of this story so it’s not completely unrealistic. This is just my version of Roy for the purposes of how the plot will unfold.
Date: November 24, 2019 09:33 pm Title: I'm Just A Holy Fool
Kind of a dark view on Pam here. Not the most favorable of ways to see her or her relationship with Roy. I can't say I'm looking forward to seeing updates for this, but I am also curious to see where it goes.
Very real writing, and good descriptions as well. Tons of emotional beats that fill things out. More dialogue would be good. There was a lot of narration, but hearing more of their actual words could fill in a lot of blanks as well.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I’m aware it’s kind of a stretch but thank you anyway for your interest! I’m not the best at dialogue and I wasn’t totally sure how to incorporate it into a flashback situation but future chapters will hopefully have more to round things out.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I’m aware it’s kind of a stretch but thank you anyway for your interest! I’m not the best at dialogue and I wasn’t totally sure how to incorporate it into a flashback situation but future chapters will hopefully have more to round things out.