Date: March 07, 2025 04:33 am Title: Chapter 5
the only bad part is that it ends. This was so good. 🫶
Author's Response: Thank you so much for "finding" my story and saying such nice things. It's so cool people are still reading my fics.
Date: March 07, 2025 04:15 am Title: Pam/Jim
Awwwwwwwwwwwww my heart MY HEART
1 [Report This]Date: March 07, 2025 04:02 am Title: Jim
Awww i love bed sharing hihi
Date: March 07, 2025 03:46 am Title: Pam/Jim
Oh jesus ðŸ˜
1 [Report This]Date: March 07, 2025 03:27 am Title: Jim
Yeah i Really liked that beginning. I have my own frustrations with his departure, as much as I understand it so this really smoothed that over. The premise alone was great but this start was even better. The acknowledgement is just so so good. The fighting for her, being there for her. UGH it's very balanced between making them both come to terms with this huge shift in their relationship. Im really excited for more
1 [Report This]Date: May 06, 2023 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh, well done! Adored every moment (ok, maybe not entirely Jim being hurt, but it worked in the story) and am glad to have stumbled on it while browsing stories!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed this. I hope you check out my other stories, or the many other fandoms I write for at fanfiction.net, also under Donnamour1969.
1 [Report This]Date: May 04, 2021 01:18 pm Title: Pam/Jim
OMG 😱
Author's Response: I'll take that as a compliment. Thank you :)
1 [Report This]Date: April 01, 2021 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 5
You did really well balancing the romance and the sexiness and the humor in this chapter and in this story in general - feels like them!
I liked this one a lot. Please come back soon?
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Very cool that you went back and read this, and that you were so kind and encouraging in your reviews. I'm afraid my Office muse has escaped me for now, and I've moved on to other fandoms. If you like my writing, I've written for many other fandoms over at fanfiction.net. I'm Donnamour1969 there too. Thanks again :)
1 [Report This]Date: April 01, 2021 09:49 pm Title: Pam/Jim
This was just adorable.
1 [Report This]Date: April 01, 2021 09:38 pm Title: Jim
I love the line about how they're once again five feet away with each other. And the description of Pam waking up in the night and dragging her IV cart with her to climb in bed with him is beautiful. (The ending is fun too... nice to not forget the consequences of Pam's drunken revelry...)
1 [Report This]Date: April 01, 2021 09:35 pm Title: Pam/Jim
You did well with pam's warring state of mind here - I really liked her wanting him to say that he loves her again even if she's not ready to acknowledge it.
And I absolutely love this scene with drunken Pam and Jim in the back of the limousine. I'm always a fan of Drunk Pam, and this was both hilarious and very much in their voices.
1 [Report This]Date: April 01, 2021 09:29 pm Title: Jim
I like this a lot, and I'm not a big believer in this scenario (my headcanon is always that if Jim doesn't leave, Pam goes ahead and marries Roy). I do think I can buy that if Jim had gotten more of a signal that Pam was interested he might have changed course some... and certainly it's nice to see him give five seconds thought to how much he dropped on her at once. ::fistshake:: I think you address part of my thoughts here by having him make it clear that she is facing losing him if she doesn't choose him - that was a good choice.
This is a really interesting take on Jim. There are times in this chapter I'm not sure I like him much... there are also times when I want to stand up and cheer for him.
1 [Report This]Date: January 30, 2020 05:43 am Title: Chapter 5
Aww. Nice ending. I've enjoyed this a lot. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks for all the great reviews for this story! I'm so glad you liked it and took the time to let me know.
1 [Report This]Date: January 30, 2020 05:37 am Title: Pam/Jim
I liked this, although honestly not sure they'd be that ok with him not pressing charges after the second threat in public; but I'd still buy Jim refusing that pressure so it works.
1 [Report This]Date: January 29, 2020 09:49 pm Title: Jim
Aww. I mean, screw Roy, but nice Penny and great Pam/Jim interactions.
1 [Report This]Date: January 29, 2020 12:29 pm Title: Pam/Jim
Well that went a lot of places I was not expecting. Good work though. I like the bachelorette party idea.
1 [Report This]Date: January 29, 2020 08:10 am Title: Jim
Well Jim's taste in movies is clearly terrible, but I do like this. He's taken tack #2: not running, but pressuring her. Still not the same as pre-Casino Night pining but more likely to result in something (even if that is a definitive rejection).
1 [Report This]Date: December 07, 2019 05:26 am Title: Chapter 5
Very sweet way to end it all. Personally I would have like some more closure with Roy. He's still out there and still probably pissed off. It would have been nice to have that resolved. So that's really the only critique I have for this chapter.
Other than that, it's all very sweet and steamy to see them start out their relationship this way. I really liked it that they got most of their previous miscommunications out in the open. Great way to start building a nice solid foundation for the rest of their relationship.
Great job with this story. I've really enjoyed coming along for the ride.
Fortes Fortuna Adiuvat
Author's Response: You are too kind. I guess, honestly, just like Roy disappeared from the show soon after he attacked Jim (except for his wedding later), I was done with him, as I think was Pam, so that's kind of my approach here. Roy was released and hopefully is moving on with his life. Glad you still enjoyed the rest of this story. Thanks so much for your helpful critique and praise. I always enjoy hearing from you.
1 [Report This]Date: December 06, 2019 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 5
Nice to see this wrapped up so well! I love the idea that this was how things could have gone without Jim running away to Stamford. I’m also a sucker for the old someone is injured and someone has to care for them trope so this hit the mark. Thanks so much for sharing.
Author's Response: Thanks for your last two reviews of this fic! I'm so glad you liked what I did here. It was certainly fun to write.
1 [Report This]Date: December 06, 2019 03:31 pm Title: Pam/Jim
Another lovely update. That whole section about the muggers made me laugh. The way that Pam just goes along with it. So very Pam and Jim and such a fun inclusion. Can’t wait to see how you finish this one off.
Author's Response: Sorry I'm late in responding to this. Thanks so much for reviewing. Glad you liked my Pam and Jim here.
1 [Report This]Date: December 05, 2019 10:51 am Title: Pam/Jim
No book throwing at Roy? Ah well, probably for the best in the long run. Very cute chapter. There's still some things that need to be dealt with clearly. Roy is still pissed and Pam needs to really get closure for all of that.
However, the rest is all turning out nicely. Nice of Pam to clean up the bachelor pad. I get she's willing to help while Jim is healing, but hopefully with this stronger backbone of hers she won't let Jim off the hook to long about having her do all the cooking and cleaning. If she's finally realized everything that was wrong with her relationship with Roy, letting any guy take advantage of her like that would be one of the first things to go. Still it's sweet that she offers to help out.
Nice hint of steam there at the end. Clearly they're both leaning into their shared connection now, and it's a wonderful thing to see. Can't wait to see how this all wraps up.
Author's Response: Don't worry, Pam is just being nice. I don't think she would allow herself to fall back into old habits. I think it's in Jim's character that he wouldn't want to hold a grudge against Roy, especially for Pam's sake. Thanks for the review. Final chapter up soon!
1 [Report This]Date: December 05, 2019 10:37 am Title: Pam/Jim
Really enjoying this! I really enjoy stories which explore what might have happened if Jim hadn't run away, and this is great. Looking forward to seeing how you finish it.
Author's Response: Ah, thank you! I'm glad you liked this premise. The final chapter will be up soon!
1 [Report This]Date: December 04, 2019 01:55 pm Title: Jim
This was so damn sweet! And filled with just perfect one liners, i.e. jinx. I loved it!
Author's Response: I appreciate your review so much! Hope I continue to entertain.
1 [Report This]Date: December 04, 2019 01:14 pm Title: Jim
Being the medical professional I am there's one big thing here that stands out to me. In general hospitals don't allow male and female patients to share rooms. That's the real world poking it's head in. That Pam and Jim are in the same hospital room like this we'll just chalk up to artistic licence because it does make everything very sweet.
Seems like the previous night was just the kick Pam needed to clarify her feelings for both Roy and Jim. Nice to see her come to that realization and reach out to Jim like this.
As for Jim, I hope he throws the book at Roy.
Author's Response: Interesting about the rooms. My parents were both in the same room in our small town hospital. It must just depend on where you are. Thanks for the input.
Date: December 03, 2019 09:54 pm Title: Pam/Jim
Ah, there’s the Roy that we all know and... know. It was nice to have that brief interlude at the beginning with the sweeter side of Roy. I like to think there was something a little more than just a general sense of commitment that made it so difficult for Pam to pull the plug on her relationship with Roy...
You’ve definitely left us on a bit of a cliffhanger here - looking forward to seeing what comes next!
Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, we did see glimpses of sweet Roy, especially after they broke up. I'd like to think Pam really did love him at one time. Just posted chapter 3. Hope you get a chance to read it soon.