Reviews For An Ode to May
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Reviewer: Anne-Rose Sweetkins Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2023 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow that gut punch ending! Love how you use the five senses.

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 20, 2020 09:38 am Title: Chapter 1

Okay. Ow. This one stings. A lot.

Reviewer: HonestAndCourageous Signed [Report This]
Date: February 21, 2020 05:03 am Title: Chapter 1

Great contrast with the beauty of spring and the emptiness she's feeling. I love the 55 word challenges- they are like poetry!

Reviewer: NobleLandMermaid Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 19, 2020 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

I can only imagine this is how Pam felt that next day, that maybe spring can mean a new beginning but then that desk was empty and a part of her heart was gone 😭 there are many great Mays to come, Pam! Great work is such few words!

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 17, 2020 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

Nice response to the challenge. You could also call it 55 to leave Scranton (which I think is a challenge) but this is correct. Nice work!

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 17, 2020 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is just perfect! So achingly beautiful in so little words!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 17, 2020 06:23 am Title: Chapter 1

Great use of economy of words. Lots of depth for so short a story. Hits right in the heart. Nice job.

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