1 [Report This]Date: February 12, 2023 02:25 am Title: Chapter 1
Do not apologize. I never saw angst connected so effectively with smut. You've got some amazing writing skills!
1 [Report This]Date: October 11, 2020 07:43 am Title: Chapter 1
There is an awful lot to love about this, especially since "Pam and Jim working through their old insecurities in a sexy way" is pretty much my kink. But specifically, I think that you've nailed the way they fight - they are absolutely the kind of couple that's trying to make each other laugh even as they're trying to annoy each other. And I *love* that you brought back the Booze Cruise headbob.
Date: May 14, 2020 10:16 am Title: Chapter 1
I need you to watch ALL of the deleted scenes because you keep giving us these gems. So clever and who doesn’t love makeup sex?! And that title and ending 😂😂😂 Well done!
1 [Report This]Date: April 20, 2020 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
I JUST watched this deleted scene the other day for the first time. I can't believe it escaped my notice for so long.
And oh yes, please continue to turn deleted scenes into smut. It clearly benefits us all. ;)
1 [Report This]Date: April 18, 2020 08:34 am Title: Chapter 1
I don’t know how you think you’re repetitive when you put out stuff like this. You put them in real life situations that they absolutely would have gone through and work them through it in a realistic way that just happens to involve a lot of hot sex. And the sex part is great, but like others have said it’s the characterization and dialogue and buildup thats so good about these one shots. Keep writing them, please! You’re so talented and I’m always excited to read something you’ve blessed us with, and I know I’m not alone!
1 [Report This]Date: April 14, 2020 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
I was so not expecting this. I thought this was going to be a nice romantic one shot and then boom. Romance and smut combined into one amazing story. The dialogue when they're fighting is perfect. I love how your Jim and Pam have these incredibly hot...times together, and then they're so sweet afterward.
1 [Report This]Date: April 14, 2020 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Can we just agree that turning deleted scenes to smut is the superior quarantine talent...
Way to take that Katy line and turn it into this. There’s a part of me that loves the angst that Pam & Jim go through, even after they’re a couple (hello Season 9) because it’s realistic. Couples fight & drive each other nuts sometimes. It’s natural that they both still kind of have some insecurities about the past & these little gibes quickly turn into real hurt feelings. And then to build it back up with some honesty? Perfection.
1 [Report This]Date: April 14, 2020 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
As much as I'm here for Aggressive Jim (who I'll come back to in a minute), I'm so here for Passive Aggressive Jam. I loved every single bit of their fight once they got home, but especially this line: "He stood, his scowl deepening as he purposely moved Cece to the hip away from Pam and brought her with him to the kitchen in retaliation." Wow Jim, using Cece against Pam? Cold. And I love it a whole lot.
I don't know what I loved more - Pam and her mocking 'be aggressive cheer' or Jim, you know, being aggressive. You write that better than anyone, and I just really want you to keep writing that.
I'm never going to be able to watch Legally Blonde without thinking of this fic now.
Date: April 14, 2020 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. I need a drink. Or maybe a cold shower.This was A-W-E-S-O-M-E
1 [Report This]Date: April 14, 2020 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well that's certainly one way to get over an argument. Seriously though, the sniping back and forth at home after work, was a good touch. It was a great way to show that they have a real relationship, one that has ups and downs. Not a fairy tale ride off into the sunset type of thing.
Also great way to have Jim be aggressive and at the same time reassuring to Pam. Sometimes one needs a bit of a jolt to break through things and that worked good. Also glad they reverted back to laughter there at the end when Jim realized that she was the one who did start everything. Yet another way to show the strength of their relationship.
Great job as always.
1 [Report This]Date: April 14, 2020 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
First of all, I read the description to this and went to youtube to remind myself of the scene, and the deleted scenes for this episode was the second video in my recommendations, so if that's not the government watching me then idk what is.
But this was great, I also wondered what made Pam bring up Katy in that scene since Jim and her were so long ago. I'm glad they at least got something out of it though (;