1 [Report This]Date: May 10, 2020 05:27 pm Title: Sketch Books and Phone Numbers
Precious!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
1 [Report This]Date: May 10, 2020 03:31 pm Title: Sketch Books and Phone Numbers
Very cute. And yes, that is correct Jim: the line between romantic and creepy is very thin.
Author's Response: Haha exactly, Jim has to be careful
1 [Report This]Date: May 10, 2020 03:13 pm Title: Sketch Books and Phone Numbers
Very cute. Nice to get some info on what Jim's doing. The sports marketing internship seems to fit well. Lots of good introspection on his part as well. I really like that he and Pam hit it off so well. It's also sweet that she remembered him too. Looking forward to seeing how their coffee date turns out.
Author's Response: Thank you! I’d imagined them to be a bit younger in this AU, so Jim being an intern for something he’s actually interested in seemed to appeal to me, especially since Pam was following her dream too.
1 [Report This]Date: May 10, 2020 12:13 pm Title: Sketch Books and Phone Numbers
Awwww what a sweet chapter! Can’t wait to read how their coffee date goes
Author's Response: Thank you!
1 [Report This]Date: May 09, 2020 06:46 pm Title: Subway Expert
I like this AU so far! Nice to see Jim and Pam's first meeting since we didn't get that in the tv series.
I love that Jim takes the time to drop change in to the hands of those that ask and acknowledge the people he sees around him. Nice detail. :)
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Thanks for writing!
Author's Response: Thank you! I’m so glad you liked that little detail, I figured Jim might pay a little more attention to people than usual.
1 [Report This]Date: May 09, 2020 02:12 pm Title: Subway Expert
Interesting premise, I look forward to seeing where you go with it!
Of course on Dwight watch he's the one wishing for another plauge.
Author's Response: I figured a busy train would be perfect for Dwight to say that in this context, thank you for reading and reviewing!
1 [Report This]Date: May 09, 2020 09:01 am Title: Subway Expert
Oh boy. This is going to ruin me, isn’t it? I’m here for it.
Author's Response: I can promise decent amounts of ruining, and I’m so glad that you’re here for it
1 [Report This]Date: May 09, 2020 04:33 am Title: Subway Expert
Excellent beginning! I can't wait to see where you take this.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I’ve got so many ideas floating around so I just need to get them on paper, I hope you like them.
1 [Report This]Date: May 08, 2020 10:04 pm Title: Subway Expert
I'm excited for the next chapter! Awesome setup here!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
1 [Report This]Date: May 08, 2020 07:02 pm Title: Subway Expert
As soon as you mentioned the man with hair parted down the middle, I knew it was Dwight!!
What a great start to the story. Looking forward to reading how this story develops
Author's Response: I couldn’t help myself, I had to have a Dwight cameo. Thank you so much, I hope you like what’s to come!
1 [Report This]Date: May 08, 2020 06:48 pm Title: Subway Expert
Yay the plague-Dwight! And this is interesting--is Jim totally AU or just at Dunder Mifflin Corporate? I'm intrigued!
Author's Response: I’m thinking total AU right now, but Dunder Mifflin keeps coming up as an option, but it’ll be revealed next chapter for sure. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: May 08, 2020 06:39 pm Title: Subway Expert
Oh Dwight was easy enough to spot. Nice little bit in there with him.
Very interesting story you've got set up here. Really looking forward to seeing how it pans out.
With that welcome to MTT! Always glad to see a new author post their first story.
Author's Response: Thank you for the warm welcome! Yeah I thought Dwight would be easy to spot, perhaps he’ll make some more appearances
1 [Report This]Date: May 08, 2020 06:26 pm Title: Subway Expert
Oh, I love a good meet cute! This has all the makings of my next favorite romcom! Some very nice touches throughout - I especially liked that Jim thought “fancy” in response to art school. A nod to Fancy New Beesly? Dwight’s cameo was also great.
I’m so looking forward to seeing where you go with this. I love the premise!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It was a nod to Fancy New Beesly, I’m so glad you noticed. I couldn’t not have him in there, it would be a crime.
Date: May 08, 2020 05:38 pm Title: Subway Expert
Ooh I like where this could go! Looking forward to future chapters.
Author's Response: Thank you! I’ve got lots in mind so I hope it all goes well