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Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2020 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

Probably not legal, just plausible enough to be done anyway. Very nice premise and an interesting mix of canon elements resized for this situation. Love it.

Author's Response: That's why it's called fiction, right? ;)

Reviewer: nicemorningtoo Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2020 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 1

Okay, a couple of things.
One: You took Casino Night, flipped it on its head, and stomped on it.
And Two: You turned Jim Halpert into Ryan Howard.
In the words of Kelly Kappoor, how dare you.

That being said... I am very interested in how Jim is going to react to this and just how quickly they're gonna fall for each other. I cannot wait for some Pam sass to a hot shot Jim.

Author's Response: Oh, girl, this is going to be a BALL of sass. I accept the "How dare you" and I'll raise you...well...every chapter where I kind of destroy Jim.... :)

Reviewer: GreenyshEyed Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2020 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 1

Your AN cracked me up. Can't wait to see where you take this!

Author's Response: Hey, at least I'm honest, right? Thanks!

Reviewer: SprinklesTheCat Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2020 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is fun and crazy and I really want to believe you'll write another chapter. Pretty please?

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, there will be more :)

Reviewer: beth9501 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2020 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

Halfway through I thought, "Wait, Ryan?" Before remembering you'd already introduced him at the office. Then I realized that Jim hadn't been mentioned. Then you started writing about a big hot shot and I lost it! I'm so excited to see how you write him in this AU. I already know he's going to be such a jerk (with a big heart later maybe? I can't wait. I bet you'll have a lot of comments on here from those who were in the chat on Friday. 😂

Author's Response: Oh, I'm going to have SO much fun making Jim a big douche for the first half of this story, no doubt xD

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2020 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

You're just going to mess us all up with this one too aren't you? Very unique situation there. Nice to see that even without Jim in Scranton, Pam still gets away from Roy. However, she's also a bit more sharp around the edges. Also however, without Jim in Scranton, Jim seems a bit over the edge without Pam.

Thing is I think all these experiences have given her the spine to deal with this Jim.

Ok, let me set myself up to have my guts pulled through the wringer with another one of your stories. *buckles up*

Author's Response: Messing y'all up is always the plan!

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