1 [Report This]Date: June 06, 2020 04:24 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh my goodness! More please! We’re just getting to the really good stuff... I’m so sad this chapter is over!
I loved it, so many great moments. But Jim increasingly getting frustrated with Packer’s creepy advances on Pam well and truly takes the cake!
Author's Response: Thank you! Your wish is my command--just posted ch. 3. So glad you liked this one.
1 [Report This]Date: May 31, 2020 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like this premise! The bits of angst and hope, I’m SO stoked for more!
I’ve always wondered what DM would be like with one of these auctions.... hmm...
Can’t wait for more!
Author's Response: Cool! Glad you are onboard. I did a search before I wrote this, surprised no one else seems to have written something similar. Oh well, sometimes you get lucky. Thanks for the kind review. I hope you continue to enjoy this. Ch. 2 is up now!
1 [Report This]Date: May 31, 2020 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awesome premise. I always love your stories.
I really hope Pam lets Kelly make her over .
Author's Response: Thank you! And your wish is my command with Kelly's makeover of Pam. Check out chapter 2 to read all about it :)
1 [Report This]Date: May 31, 2020 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
This sounds just all sorts of interesting. At times a little confusing since we seem to be bouncing between several peoples thoughts, but when reading carefully it becomes clear who is thinking about what.
Other than that, the characterizations were all right on par. This looks like it could be a bit of a roller coaster.
Author's Response: Thank you! Sorry for the confusion. I went back and fixed it a little to make things more clear. It's hard when you are using the entire ensemble and want to get their thoughts in. I hope you enjoy the rest.
1 [Report This]Date: May 31, 2020 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
A great first chapter and I love the premise! I can't wait to see where you take this.
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you continue to be entertained. Ch. 2 is up now :)
1 [Report This]Date: May 31, 2020 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh I am here for this. I read the story intro and was like YES and then I read your actual chapter and was twice as excited. So yeah. Lots of potential here and I do love a good Karen gets her comeuppance (that will happen, right?) almost as much as a Karen friend. Good start!
Author's Response: Oh, wow! Thanks! I hope I can live up to your enthusiastic expectations. Please check out chapter 2 and let me know :)
1 [Report This]Date: May 31, 2020 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yeah, I'm hooked. Perfect angsty details and a great setup.
Can't wait for the next chapter!keep them coming!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I hope you continue to enjoy this. Chapter 2 is up now!
Date: May 31, 2020 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
So excited to see where this is going
Author's Response: Thank you! Please check out chapter 2!
1 [Report This]Date: May 31, 2020 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is a very fun setup! Just the right amount of Season 3 angst at the corners. Loads of Michael being delightfully Michael. Plus, a perfect sprinkle of Kelly’s enthusiasm. Looking forward to seeing where you take this!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the vote of confidence! I hope I don't disappoint.
Date: May 31, 2020 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is a cool idea for a story. Interested in where this goes.
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you enjoy what's next.
1 [Report This]Date: May 31, 2020 11:46 am Title: Chapter 1
That's a good hook, I'm in to see how this goes.
The tone for this chapter felt right on the money with Jim's hot/cold reactions to Pam.
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you! So far, so good then. Chapter 2 is up now.