1 [Report This]Date: June 16, 2023 04:21 am Title: Room 7
Awwwwww!!!! Fist pump in the air for all the wonderful ways you have brought canon moments into your AU and twisted their personalities just a smidge to tie it all together! Well done and thank you for a wonderful read!
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you for all the awesome reviews of this fic! So glad you enjoyed it!
Date: June 16, 2023 04:11 am Title: Room 416
Holy caboly…. Great chapter, come on Pam…. Make with the happy ending!
Date: June 15, 2023 08:26 pm Title: Room 303 (Revisited)
HOLY CRAP! What an ending… next…next …
Date: June 15, 2023 06:06 pm Title: Room 214
OMG THAT CHAPTER WRECKED ME! Excellent push and pull between them!
Date: June 15, 2023 10:08 am Title: Room 1011
Nice communication about compartmentalization and trying not to hurt anyone more.
Date: June 15, 2023 07:25 am Title: Room 222
Awwwwww…… I adored this AU… I don’t think they are deeply flawed any more than every other human on the planet. Just two people trying to figure things out. Love it!!!!!
Date: June 15, 2023 06:53 am Title: Room 620
Ooooo… Pam giving out the fake names & numbers? That minx! Or, did she give an accidental wrong number???
1 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2022 01:53 pm Title: Room 620
This fic is off to a fabulous start! Cannot wait to read the rest.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! So nice that people are still discovering my fics and taking the time to review.
Date: September 24, 2020 07:58 am Title: Room 7
Aww. I love that you kept this in Niagara. It's very appropriate as an ending. Thanks for sharing this story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yes, it had to be Niagara :)
Date: September 23, 2020 05:32 am Title: Room 7
This was a super sweet end to a rather angsty tale! I’m glad they worked through all the mess and chaos to come so smoothly out the other end. The Niagara elopement was a very nice twist on canon!
Author's Response: I'm all about those happily-ever-afters. Thanks so much for all your support of this story. Your reviews are always appreciated.
1 [Report This]Date: September 22, 2020 11:20 am Title: Room 7
I lovedddd this! A perfect way to end. I love all the references to canon like the pranks and getting married on the boat and making it work in this universe, it was great. I loved this story and can't wait to see what you come up with next!!
Author's Response: Thank you! So glad you enjoyed the ending. I really appreciate the kind review.
Date: September 20, 2020 09:32 pm Title: Room 7
What a wonderful resolution! I somehow missed getting to read chapter 9 when it updated so that was a real treat. The story wrapped up really beautifully. I loved the moment when Pam and Betsy talked, as well as how Jim and Pam played it so low key that nobody even remembered they were together. I like the idea of their love being a secret but not secret. Big, true love doesn’t always have to be paraded around and that’s what that felt like to me. It was enough for the two of them to have it, and the rest of the office didn’t need to be a part of it. I wish more of that had happened in the show, but then we wouldn’t have the wealth of material we have to work off of. Anyway, I got away from myself—another wonderful piece of writing, Donna! Can’t wait for your next!
Author's Response: Thank you! And I feel like I should give you an award or something for being my 100th review--first time I cracked a hundred on this site! Here's a virtual hug for you :) So glad you enjoyed this fic, and how it ended. I really appreciate your kind words.
1 [Report This]Date: September 20, 2020 07:32 pm Title: Room 620
I have loved reading this!! Very well done. :)
1 [Report This]Date: September 20, 2020 07:22 pm Title: Room 620
A perfect story from start to finish!
Date: September 20, 2020 07:14 pm Title: Room 7
This was a wonderfully fluffy ending to an angsty journey!
Author's Response: Thank you! I almost always go for that happy ending.
Date: September 20, 2020 06:33 pm Title: Room 7
So sweet. I remember reading the first chapter and being so hooked that I couldn’t wait for you to finish so I could binge read it all together. I could go on and on and on about how fun a read this has been but I’d be here all night! I loved the ending and I can’t wait to see what you write next ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed this fic. You have made made my day.
Date: September 20, 2020 04:53 pm Title: Room 7
Nice way to wrap this all up. Lots of fun moments from canon of course. I also really like that once they're completely free of anything, they just start being together in a way that's so much better than anything prior. No more sneaking around. Very good to see all that.
To end it like that with a Niagara Falls wedding was just wonderful. It was a rough road to get here, but it's very sweet once they do.
This whole story has been a huge rollercoaster. Great writing throughout all of it.
Fortes Fortuna Adiuvat
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing the last 2 chapters. I'm so appreciative of all your kind words. You're the best reviewer ever :)
Date: September 20, 2020 03:22 pm Title: Room 7
Awwww...
Wait a sec.
AWWWWW
Loved this final chapter and loved their banter. Great ending for a wonderful story!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it and took the time to let me know :)
Date: September 20, 2020 02:35 pm Title: Room 7
Awww. What a great ending! I like how you incorporated so many elements from canon. It felt soooo Jim and Pam.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the reviews of the last 2 chapters. I'm so glad you enjoyed this ending.
Date: September 13, 2020 02:48 am Title: Room 416
Why do I love the imagery of Dwight macing everyone, himself included? Very nice tie with Cocktails (in completely different and yet still very similar situation).
“a can of grape soda” I love a sweet, little gesture.
Okay, a drive-through pharmacy is a brilliant idea & I wish they existed here. I’m sort of mad that they don’t... (This is a weird detail for me mention, but I really, really wish we had them now that I know they exist).
Honestly I think it’s pretty brave of Pam to spill it all to Jim’s mother. That’s a bold, fancy new Beesly sort of move.
Bit of a grand gesture from Jim at the end there. With only chapter to go I’m really hoping that it pays off!
1 [Report This]Date: September 10, 2020 09:28 pm Title: Room 416
I love that you've given Pam a chance to get some things off her chest to Jim in this version of The Negotiation, and the flower gesture at the end is perfectly Jim-big-gesture-corny.
Date: September 09, 2020 05:46 pm Title: Room 416
Awwww. I love that the pepper spray made an appearance again and that Pam got to meet Jim's mom and get some woman-to-woman advice. The end part w/the roses was so sweet too. Way to leave us hanging! Sad this is coming to an end but another fantastic chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! So glad you enjoyed chapter 9. I hope you've gotten a chance to read ch. 10. Thanks again for your kind words.
1 [Report This]Date: September 07, 2020 06:57 pm Title: Room 416
Hi! I just recently made an account but I've been reading this fic since it was published and I love it so much! It's so wonderful and you're such a great writer :)
Author's Response: Thank you! You are too kind. So glad you are enjoying this fic. I've posted the conclusion--hope you get a chance to check it out.
Date: September 07, 2020 06:20 pm Title: Room 416
Well that was dramatic. Good bye Roy and good riddence. Though he does have a bit more of a leg to stand on here, him just attacking Jim is never a good thing. Glad Pam won't have to deal with that temper anymore.
Lots of heavy emotions thoughout everything. Especially since it was all brought out to the light of day. Pam going back and forth about everything seems very in step with her. I'm glad she had the wherewithal to tell Jim she needed sometime to think before she made a final decision. Nice of Jim to give her that time too. That is until that last bit there.
Though that's also somewhat in keeping with Jim. The overly cheesy romantic gesture. Which was sweet. It seems Pam's heart has softened a bit too. Really looking forward to seeing how this wraps up.
1 [Report This]Date: September 07, 2020 01:53 pm Title: Room 416
I have to admit, I didn’t ever think Roy could initiate a breakup. I thought he might try to manipulate Pam into staying with him, but you really made it work in this chapter. Nice touch with Dwight and Hank and all the security details.