Date: June 04, 2021 04:12 pm Title: 1. A Week-Long Trip
Are you going to write any more of this? It’s really good.
1 [Report This]Date: August 13, 2020 09:18 pm Title: 1. A Week-Long Trip
You may think you're bad at writing but you're not! It's a cute setup. I especially like the changes of perspective; I think they helped flesh out how the characters are doing. I'd love to see more!
1 [Report This]Date: July 23, 2020 11:01 am Title: 1. A Week-Long Trip
I'm excited to read more of this...
Super, so far!
Date: July 12, 2020 07:22 pm Title: 1. A Week-Long Trip
Yeeessss. This is going to be great! A week of Pam and Jim forced to be together and Jim with all those muscles...!
1 [Report This]Date: July 12, 2020 02:30 pm Title: 1. A Week-Long Trip
'Holy fucking shit. Oh my God. Oh my God. Oh my God. Jim is ripped. What the Hell is this? Am I dreaming? This can't be right. If this is a dream, then I need to wake the fuck up. Jesus Christ, this is a weird dream.' Pam just stared at him with large eyes.
THIS. THIS HAD ME DYING. I can totally imagine how nuts that would have been for her to see him. Then Jim just plays it all casually as if her hair is sending him through the roof.
I'm excited to see how you get these two together.
Date: July 12, 2020 03:47 am Title: 1. A Week-Long Trip
Pam’s nervous energy at the end there was a whole lot of fun. I will gladly picture jacked JK/Jim for the purposes of this story!
Date: July 11, 2020 09:11 pm Title: 1. A Week-Long Trip
Very nice. More please.
1 [Report This]Date: July 11, 2020 11:28 am Title: 1. A Week-Long Trip
No you're not bad at writing things at all. This seems adorably cute. Heading out for a weeklong office retreat to a camp seems very in keeping with something Micheal would do. I used to work at a few placed like this. Brings back lots of good memories.
Jim and Pam in the same cabin with all that tension in the air? Holy cow, yeah, this is going to be one heck of a week. Loved seeing Pam get so flustered there. She's seen him be active in the office vs warehouse basketball game and it was clear she was checking him out there. Now that she's seen a little more, yeah, things are looking to get very interesting.
Nice set up. Can't wait to see where we go from here.
1 [Report This]Date: July 11, 2020 11:24 am Title: 1. A Week-Long Trip
Great start!! I LOVE stammering Pam. I really can’t wait to read what shenanigans they get into. Hope you post the next chapter soon!
Date: July 11, 2020 10:16 am Title: 1. A Week-Long Trip
I’m hooked. It says that this story is completed but it seems like it could continue,please keep writing!