Date: March 23, 2021 10:06 am Title: Chapter 5
You’re killing me! This is story is so great. The tension, the flirting between them. I REALLLY hope you post the next update soon. I can’t wait to read what happens on their date.
Many jellybeans
Date: March 23, 2021 07:12 am Title: Chapter 2
This story deserves to be on my bookshelf for this line alone.
“Pam, I want you to seduce me.”
I'm so glad you are back on this. I did have to go back and re-read from the start. Please don't take that as a complaint; it's not. The last line in this chapter had stopped all cognition so I had forgotten all of Isabel's great lines in Chapter 3.
Date: March 23, 2021 04:45 am Title: Chapter 5
Jim seems to be enjoying this seduction thing Pam's got going - and I think it's bringing out something in her as well. The anticipation you built up here for them - very hot, ending with a very suggestive text. Next chapter I expect will be fogging up everyone's computer, tablet and phone screens.
1 [Report This]Date: March 22, 2021 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 5
Lady! This slayed me. The patience, the sleeves, the break room banter, it’s all so perfect. You have such a gift at throwing in these sneaky little sexy lines and they’re so in character and so right for the moment, I’m always in awe. I love the build up to the next levels of seduction, you tease!
1 [Report This]Date: March 22, 2021 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 5
"Cyber Medic 4, report priority one.
Medic 4, go ahead.
Medic 4 report priority one, report of a MCI, repeat multi-causualty incident reported, multiple patients down, caller states there are laptops, phones, and tablets all open to the same fanfiction website, priority one response.
Medic 4 10-4 enroute.
Medic 4 to dispatch, on scene, you can cancel the MCI, all patients on scene have expired, we'll need the Medical Examiner and an ice truck.
Copy Medic 4 how many patients are there.
Medic 4 to Dispatch, all of them."
That, that's what you've done with this. You've just killed us all. I mean, just everything. How does one even go about picking out a favorite anything when it's all this great? And the date hasn't even started yet!
Even if I could revive everyone, we're all doomed again. But damn, what a way to go.
Date: March 22, 2021 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 5
I just love this story so much. You write flirting so damn well. Every chapter leaves me smiling and as giddy as a teenager with a crush.
1 [Report This]Date: January 13, 2021 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 4
I will die every single time I read this. '“Now, we’re going to text these to Jim and get his opinion,” said Isabel, as if that was a logical next step.'
I love this ENTIRE chapter, but that ending... That ending is absolutely THEM. I can't see where this goes!!
1 [Report This]Date: January 13, 2021 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh, Sprinkles. I love where this is going.
This line makes me swoony a bit. Just the imagery is beautiful and simple and THEM.
"Neither of them moved. The look between them deepened, and she had that falling sensation again."
And then THIS! Damn, Pam. Get it.
"She drew back and whispered with a little smile, “Get ready to be seduced”."
And, of course, I LOVE that you put the focus of this chapter on the girl friendship. LOVE it so much. I can't wait for more.
1 [Report This]Date: January 06, 2021 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wha---? I literally ended this chapter with my jaw HANGing open, ma'am.
I love this. Their dynamic is so good and the easy switch from teasing to serious is THEM. I can hear it entirely.
Also. "This is me trying." Okay, ma'am. I see you...
1 [Report This]Date: January 06, 2021 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, man. I love this whole premise and love to see where it's going.
You always capture the Pam/Roy dynamic in such a real way. There's this real understanding about why this was so complex for Pam, really defining why she couldn't just bail on Roy even when Jim is It for her. But this line in particular:
"It was love brought on by comfort and routine and duty. With one kiss, Jim had shown her a love of passion and heat and desire. "
It's so right and so good and please don't ever stop shining light on this complex piece of Pam.
1 [Report This]Date: November 25, 2020 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 4
Great story. Really enjoying it
1 [Report This]Date: November 23, 2020 03:40 am Title: Chapter 1
I love love love the way they talk to each other in this. It is perfection. The entire convo about lingerie just about killed me and this Isabel is a fave. I LOVE this story so much, Sprinkles!
1 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2020 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 4
You nailed the banter. Can't wait to see what's next!
1 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2020 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
“An elf with great tits!”
That's it. That's the line.
1 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2020 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 4
Okay, Jim messing with Pam when she sends him pictures of the lingerie was amazing and very in character. I loved it. Haha
The whole thing was great and I love the build up you’re creating before their date! So happy to see this one updated!
1 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2020 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm really enjoying the process of seduction here, and Pam finding her bravado with the assistance of wine, Isabel and texting. It makes a lot of sense to me that this would be a lot easier for Pam in a scenario where she has a second to think about how to respond and doesn't have to look Jim in the eye.
I enjoyed the moments of Jim having second thoughts as to whether or not he can handle this and Pam knowing him well enough to know he'll like the forest green.
1 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2020 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm so glad you updated this!! I love this story and I LOVE how bold Pam is being! I can't wait until Friday night and seeing Jim's reaction to her whole plan.
1 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2020 11:35 am Title: Chapter 4
They are the cutest! I am in love.
I really really loved the text exchanges. They felt so in character and like a very real elevation of their banter and progression of their relationship now that they’ve admitted their feelings to each other. And I love that you addressed that feeling of awkwardness or worry in those early stages of a relationship that especially come up after you make a bold move. I remember that feeling so well and you captured it perfectly.
I also loved Isabel! She’s my favorite type of friend. Gotta love a hype woman who also brings wine!
And the little hints of sexy stuff were excellent, lady. I cannot wait to see what you bless us with next!
1 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2020 11:06 am Title: Chapter 4
Well worth the wait. This was just a ton of fun. Tipsy Pam going forward with everything was a delight to read. Espcially with Iz right there to encourage the shennaigans. Jim's world being rocked? How about my world being rocked! I mean the fact that Pam would actually send those pics to Jim! Holy crap! Then all the banter but dialed up all the notches!
It's also fun to see Jim returning fire. I think the tally is still in Pam's favor, but he's not backing down. Great update and I can't wait to see where we go from here.
Date: November 02, 2020 06:41 am Title: Chapter 3
I am so enjoying this - I really hope there are further chapter(s) on how this pans out!
1 [Report This]Date: September 26, 2020 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 3
This is absolutely delicious. Jim is going to be blown away--and I can't wait to see it happen!
Date: September 12, 2020 07:35 am Title: Chapter 3
What does it say about me that my reaction was exactly the same as Isabel's? Like, you've already done 99% of the work of seducing him, Pam. This is just getting across the finish line.
1 [Report This]Date: September 03, 2020 11:25 am Title: Chapter 3
Loved Pam's reaction there at the start. Seems very fitting for her. To be all flustered, especially by Jim.
Then the kiss-and-leave, yeah Iz is right. Pam's going to have a MUCH easier time with all this than she thinks.
Speaking of Iz, delightful to have her in on all of this. I love that she's there to offer encouragment and support for Pam.
All this sounds like it's going to be a lot of fun for both of them. Can't wait to read more.
1 [Report This]Date: September 03, 2020 06:14 am Title: Chapter 3
Aww, friendship. Look at Pam being vulnerable and Izzy being a good friend. Also a nice setup for some excellent jam.
1 [Report This]Date: September 03, 2020 03:34 am Title: Chapter 3
Do I remember when Jim asked Pam to seduce him? Like I’ve thought about anything else for weeks?!
“shrine-boy” The love I have for this Isabel.
“This is just foreplay now” I rest my case. Isabel = the greatest.
Oh this is just perfect! Jim is gong to be so damned seduced he may just implode...