1 [Report This]Date: August 16, 2020 11:22 am Title: The Store In Scranton
I would like to see this continue. There are bits that take me out of the story (moving from NYC to Scranton he'd have more money, since cost of living is lower; Albany/NYC is 100% not a doable commute for a marriage, though I suppose you could use that as a reason it failed). But I like Cassie and I'm interested in where this might go now they've yelled at each other enough to get some truths out.
1 [Report This]Date: August 10, 2020 09:39 pm Title: The Store In Scranton
I like the premise of the story... Jim and Pam meet after 5 years and both have a lot to discuss about their lives since Jim left Scranton. The Pam had a child with a one night unknown man is a different take and not what we see from typical Pam. On that note, the whole conversation in the store seems rushed, too soon, and in a very awkward place; and for me, it doesn’t feel realistic or organic. That conversation seems like it would be talked about in a more private setting or not so out in the open, in a future meet up and perhaps after a few drinks.
I am VERY interested to see where this story goes so please continue on and post the next chapter soon. I look forward to their next meet up and how their discussion continues!
Date: August 10, 2020 07:53 pm Title: The Store In Scranton
Well that covers a lot of ground in one go. Kind of shocking really. Karen and Jim are split up and Pam has a daughter from a one night stand, then they just hash it out there in the grocery store in front of Cassie. Like I said a kind of shocking way to start. It's a uniquie take on this particular story line I'll give you that. Should be interesting to see where it goes.