1 [Report This]Date: September 10, 2020 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'll review in full at some point, but I'm thrilled you decided to bring this over (I was the one who left the link in the comments on FF.net).
Author's Response: Thank you so much xx
1 [Report This]Date: September 10, 2020 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
I’m so glad you decided to bring this to MTT. I loved seeing this story on FF, and I hope you’ll also upload the sequel here too.
Date: September 10, 2020 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 3
That's not a peace offering Pam. He's still controlling and abusing you. Part of me is kinda glad there's already a bunch of chapters posted. Having to sit and wait for an update for this fic would be real nerve wracking. Which again is a tribute to your skill as a writer.
Really hope we get a glance of some light coming into Pam's world sometime soon.
Date: September 10, 2020 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh Pam. This one hurts. No Pam, you didn't fall down the stairs. You didn't do anything. None of this is your fault. Dear god this Roy deserves the hardest of ass kickings. Any male (I refuse to call them men) that does this to anyone deserves every single book thrown at them.
I just want to jump into the page (screen) and tell Pam none of this is her fault. She can get away from him. Real men don't treat anyone like that. Take courage, stand up for yourself.
Great writing to bring that all out.
1 [Report This]Date: September 10, 2020 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, okay that went dark quickly. There's a few abusive Roy fics on here. It's always an interesting tactic to take. That Roy being like this is the reason Pam stayed with him for so long.
Anyway, you could feel the dread in Pam's thoughts here. That she's to scared to do anything about her situation. That her only refuge is her time with Jim. Heartbreaking to read, but you wrote it very well.
Onto the next chapter.
Date: September 10, 2020 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love Jim's prank! It totally seems like something that would have been in the show. It's always fun to mess with Dwight's desk in some way.
Jim's reaction is excellent, very true to his character. We get to see how his characteristic indecision plays out in a more serious situation. His battle between his heart and his brain comes to a head here, and I think the severity of Pam's situation realistically prods him to action earlier than in the show. Well done!