Date: January 12, 2025 07:24 am Title: Chapter 57
This was absolutely lovely 🥺
Date: January 11, 2025 07:56 am Title: Chapter 51
1. Is it bad that i wanted more of a moment between her and Murphy? Not in a romantic way I just loved his character and how much he liked Pam and hated Roy lmao
2. That confrontation gotta be so cathartic for her im so glad
3. Michael and Dwight omg precious, silly bumbling idiots
Date: January 11, 2025 07:49 am Title: Chapter 50
Damn the tension!
Im a bit concerned though about her hurting herself :(((
Date: January 11, 2025 07:43 am Title: Chapter 49
Your one liners on the end of each chapter is just awesome so well written
Date: January 11, 2025 07:25 am Title: Chapter 48
I can sort of understand how it takes someone a bit far more removed from it all like Betsy to be the one to get a bit more onto Pam like that with the "normal" remark, cuz for everyone else who's much closer to the damage it isnt normal shouldnt be normal but yeah. That was a nice touch.
Date: January 11, 2025 03:31 am Title: Chapter 47
1. That was a chilling repurpose of the infamous "i cant" omg
2. The physical toll because of the mental and emotional toll is a lot to get through, i think youre writing it just fine considering she had to endure it for YEARS...damn
3. ive been thinking abt it since the start of the story that Jim, while he's trying his absolute darndest, is still woefully unprepared to handle and help Pam in the ways she needs, medically at least, and it's not his fault but yeah calling the ambulance was a good idea.
Date: January 11, 2025 03:08 am Title: Chapter 46
That was poignant; "what goes around comes around" and in relation to the cycle of abuse that affected all of them. Damn.
Sorry if i keep saying that but truly there's no other way to put it.
Poor Pam. So much ground still to recovery and every step is heartbreaking
Date: January 10, 2025 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 43
Agreed to everyone else's review, these are scenes that we need even if they are long i dont mind.
It's scary at times how accurate youve portrayed these challenging scenes and situations of what it's like in a courtroom for abuse.
Date: January 10, 2025 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 42
Need everyone who's just there to spectate and talk sh*t to get h*t with something omg?
Date: January 10, 2025 08:26 am Title: Chapter 39
Oh that stare down was SO GOOD OMG
Date: January 10, 2025 08:16 am Title: Chapter 38
God my heart is in my throat for the cross omg
Date: January 10, 2025 08:07 am Title: Chapter 37
1. Splitting it up was the right move, the suspense was great
2. You did great on Roy's attorney, we love cliches in this house there's a reason it's so common; truly it's not easy seeing how anyone could represent such filth
3. I really like Murphy
4. The realization about her good memories was really well written
Date: January 10, 2025 07:33 am Title: Chapter 36
Here we go.
The moment with Pam and her dad made me tear up god.
Date: January 10, 2025 06:46 am Title: Chapter 35
I hope Roy's attorney slips and falls on something 🫶
Date: January 10, 2025 06:31 am Title: Chapter 35
That first part with Pam reading the article absolutely gutted me because it was so real...i had to stop reading for a minute and take a breath
Date: January 10, 2025 05:35 am Title: Chapter 34
So the jury saw that outburst again right? He's gonna hang himself as he should.
This was so hard, like ive read what happened but having it be recounted is almost more painful
Date: January 10, 2025 05:15 am Title: Chapter 33
Jesus Dwight's testimony didnt disappoint, it may be one of my favorite moments in this story. Especially that last part. Damn. You wrote that so well. And im glad Pam is finally letting that anger run through her. Sometimes it's frustrating that this is getting dragged out but in actuality your pacing for this one particularly is really good. It's believable. I feel like im experiencing the time like Pam does. And so nothing seems out of place like how this is one of the only times Pam is feeling anger even though the story is taking place in months.
Also i hope the prosecution doesnt get a chance to question Dwight about Jim and Pam's relationship EEK
But OMG the fight of their lives coming up damn. Im excited
Date: January 10, 2025 04:47 am Title: Chapter 32
Omg dwight pull it together 😭😭😭
Date: January 10, 2025 04:03 am Title: Chapter 31
Unfortunately and fortunately (?) for Pam, that little outburst for sure hurt Roy's case i hope the jury saw lmao glad she has everyone around her now. I cant wait for Dwight's testimony
Date: January 10, 2025 02:49 am Title: Chapter 30
That last moment with the picture was so precious
Date: January 10, 2025 02:18 am Title: Chapter 28
OMG that was beautiful 😭 such a great milestone again for her im so happy
1 [Report This]Date: January 10, 2025 01:02 am Title: Chapter 27
Im so very sorry to read what you went thru and what was said to you. Unfortunately it is a realistic thing ive seen people, women say. Always misunderstanding and wrongly thinking that they'd never be victims themselves bec of this and that. It was scarily accurate. This entire story has been amazing, it takes a lot to write such a heavy topic so thank u and for not shying away either from showing the damage this can cause to a person.
Date: January 10, 2025 12:40 am Title: Chapter 25
Im excited and extremely nervous for the court precedings omg but we're in the homestretch huhu
Date: January 09, 2025 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 20
Oh damn...will they never know peace 😭 (i know they will im just being dramatic)