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Reviewer: Yellowberry22 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 14, 2021 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 1

“Don’t just wear a basketball jersey,” he warns me.

“I wasn’t going to do that.”

“Yeah, you were.”

Yeah, I was.

This part makes me chuckle everytime

Reviewer: tinydundie Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2021 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 16

“It’s all come down to the Pacific showdown,” Pam says in a deep announcer’s voice. “Jam versus Mark and Erin—”

“What’s Jam?” I interject.

“That’s our ship name.”

“Oh. Dork,” I mutter under my breath.

oh my GOD you went there, lol

You’re such an OC girl and I love it. This fic has made me so nostalgic for college (CSUF alum)

Reviewer: tinydundie Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2021 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 14

Props for writing such a great Dwight.

Reviewer: tinydundie Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2021 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 11

Daaaaamn they really fucked in her parents’ house 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

Reviewer: tinydundie Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2021 07:30 am Title: Chapter 10

This is just the sweetest most adorable fluffy fluff. They are just precious.

“You made me your lock screen” is the cutest thing ever, I cannot

Reviewer: tinydundie Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 31, 2021 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 6

“ And I’m sure life continued on around us and the world continued to spin, but I’ll never know, because in that moment, my entire world was in my arms.”

🥺🥺🥺

Reviewer: tinydundie Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30, 2021 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 4

“And I think Ryan is taking a gap year, but he’s acting like college is beneath him, so I wonder how many “gap years” he’s actually taken.“

random but i loved this

Reviewer: tinydundie Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 30, 2021 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 3

Our first kiss was soft and sweet and exploratory, but this one is slow, deep, dare I say loving, but I don’t want to put words in his mouth. My tongue is already there.

OH MY GAWD

AND THEY ARE AT THE GAS STATION

IT’S THE CUTEST

Author's Response: That is literally my favorite line in the story so I’m so happy you commented on it! Thanks for reading! 💗

Reviewer: tinydundie Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30, 2021 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 2

I love that they both feel out of the other’s league. i felt that.

Reviewer: tinydundie Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 30, 2021 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

okay, i’m hooked. darn you lol

Reviewer: BigTuna Signed [Report This]
Date: March 10, 2021 10:03 am Title: Chapter 17

Okay fluff queen, these last two chapters were sweet and adorable. I laughed out loud at the Justice Beaver nod in the last chapter, thought the birthday was so cute, loved how he helped her out with her assignment. And the photo book! Adorable. Great job, lady, looking forward to the next one!

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18, 2021 10:23 am Title: Chapter 17

Awwwww. What a great birthday for Pam!

The apple juice joke is going to haunt me.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18, 2021 10:22 am Title: Chapter 17

This was delightful. From the nice morning to Jim being there to help her figure out her assignment. I also love that Pam is an old school console girl. N64 came out back in 1996 but it's just another aspect that makes this story so much fun.. I still have my N64 actually. Always fun playing Star Fox or Rogue Squadron. I digress.

The suprise party was just the sort of thing Jim would arrange for her. Even if she kind of caught onto it. Really looking forward to seeing what they have in mind for Dwight.

Reviewer: emxgoldstars Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 18, 2021 09:41 am Title: Chapter 17

I will gladly forgive you for not putting a bday chapter in Ultimate now. TPB! I loved this!

This literally reminded me of how my own birthdays would go in college, and it warmed my heart.

It wouldn't be Jam if they didn't wake up to some steam for her bday, right? Loved it!
Poor Pam, that class sounds sucky, however, I would have done the same to get out of a math class.
The picnic, her present? I LOVED IT!

This was adorable, TPB! Great chapter!

Reviewer: nicemorningtoo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18, 2021 09:32 am Title: Chapter 17

This was amazing and adorable from the very start. "Hey birthday girl" I don't know why but that just melted my heart. And then the hotness that followed was just perfection. I also loved their picnic and Pam complaining about homework. It's easy to forget theyre still in college when you get caught up in the adorableness that they are, but this was a great way to remind us all. Very realistic, I loved it. And then I also loved Jim's gift to her. "That's our ship name: JAM" and then the pictures of them at the beach. Ugh. Where is my college Jim?? And then I loved how hard Jim tried to keep the party a surprise, but he kept accidentally letting on that something was happening. And the fact that he threw a perfect party, one that she wasn't sure she could plan better for herself... ugh. Amazing. I loved this chapter, TPB!

Reviewer: WanderingWatchtower Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18, 2021 07:34 am Title: Chapter 17

I know I say this every chance I get, but I just *really* love College Jam. You are the queen of fluff and write it so, so well. They are freaking adorable together. And I love the title of the photo book! Hahaha and their banter in the car was amazing.

Sooo...you're posting the next chapter ASAP as possible, right?

Reviewer: Once Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18, 2021 05:52 am Title: Chapter 17

Nice birthday morning, too.
I'm really glad this is back. I'm in the midst of the Polar Vortex with rolling power outages. All my water pipes are blown. This is my first smile in a week. Thank you.

Reviewer: beth9501 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18, 2021 05:30 am Title: Chapter 17

I have so many favorite pics of this chapter:

1)Pam complaining about computer science and programming... girl, same. I'm telling myself you wrote that for me. It's like you know I pulled an all-nighter on a programming final to create a game haha. So I feelt this to the nth degree

2) The picnic blanket. We stan a man who had his ish together.

3)Collage boys know nothing. Lmao I died. That was funny.

4) Jam: That's our ship name was SOOOO cute. I absolutely loved that tidbit. I loved that he's so thoughtful for her in general, but also on this special day.

5)Dwight's jump scare comment was so on point for him. Dumb comments that make you think, "huh, that probably would be important to know?"

6)AN...I completely forgot this was why we kept her bday out of Ultimate. Totally worth it.

I woke up and saw this update and was so happy. You always do a great job and this update was nothing short of amazing.

Reviewer: beth9501 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2021 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 11

This chapter is so freaking good and I hate that I never reviewed it.

The way they so perfectly fit into each other's lives with their families just warms my heart.

I love them kissing at midnight and how she's just slightly lifted off the ground and breathless. It's that "everything can feel new and different this year and because the clock has changed I feel a little different too" feeling that is just so lovely.

I love it!

Reviewer: Sam Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 26, 2021 01:43 am Title: Chapter 1

I really like college AUs too, and this looks like it's going to be great fun. Really looking forward to reading the rest of it.
Thanks!

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19, 2021 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 16

This WAS fluff, dammit. A very cute outing! And you wrote some great Dwight moments in, too.

Reviewer: Merria Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19, 2021 08:12 am Title: Chapter 16

Glad this story is back. What a fun day at the beach! I didn’t want the chapter to end. Hope you post another chapter soon

Reviewer: WanderingWatchtower Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19, 2021 07:09 am Title: Chapter 16

AHHHHHH I love college Jam!!!

I’ve missed these two. And this chapter was perfect. The sunscreen, the Dwight-isms, the Erin-isms! And I especially loved that Pam calls them Jam and says it’s their ship name! Hahaha loved this, girl!!

Reviewer: beth9501 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19, 2021 06:07 am Title: Chapter 16

So precious! I love it!!! You did an amazing job!

Reviewer: Once Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19, 2021 01:58 am Title: Chapter 16

I am so glad you updated this! I had to look up Salt Creek as my stomping grounds were Newport and north. It is pretty. I haven't been home in a long time.

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