Date: November 23, 2020 09:50 am Title: Chapter 16: For Forever
Aww... that was extremely sweet.
Thanks!
Date: November 23, 2020 06:29 am Title: Chapter 16: For Forever
This is an absolutely amazing proposal and I love it.
Date: November 23, 2020 06:06 am Title: Chapter 16: For Forever
Every chapter kills me a bit more and this one was no exception! It's amazing, sweet, full of love, and just the best kind of fluff! I'm sad to see this ending, but I'm also excited to see what you write next!
Date: November 23, 2020 05:43 am Title: Chapter 16: For Forever
*Injects himself with one of his cyber insulin shots*
Okay maybe now I'll be able to make it through this review before I go full on catatonic.
Okay so to say this was lovely is to cheapen that word. Because this was everything that word could say, feel, or mean.
As soon as Sasha walked in with that rose I figured where we were going and the grin didn't (and still hasn't) leave my face. Even as a guy I can apprciate when a guy wears a nice suit and that image was great. Especially for what he intended here. However there's one thing here...
*starts getting catatonic due to fluff again, quickly jabs himself with another dose of cyber insulin, perks back up*
That's better. Where was I? Or right. The thing. The thing with the sign. The thing with the sign and the "this is the wrong sign." The thing with the sign and the "this is the wrong sign," and the lines from canon. That thing. I DO NOT CARE how over the top cheesy, fluffy, embarresing, or romantic that was. It was cute, it was fun, it was a prank, it was them, it was perfect. Same later with the toast to no cavities. The humor and wit between these two is just so great.
I know I keep saying this, but I REALLY wish I still had some jellybeans to award.
Magnificanet job WW. This was par excellance.
Date: November 23, 2020 03:45 am Title: Chapter 16: For Forever
Only one word for this chapter. Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
Date: November 22, 2020 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 16: For Forever
I was so late to this story, and now I cannot believe it's almost over. Every chapter has been a true delight to read. English Jim is now and forever will be one of my favorite types of Jim. The way they loved each other so fiercely is amazing and you described it beautifully. The proposal was spot on. You know Jim wouldn't be able to go without a small joke somewhere in there. The fake promposal was genius, though I am a little sad that we won't get to see them go to prom together. I guess spending the rest of their lives together is more important though. Maybe. (;
But really, this story is fantastic and I can't wait for the last chapter. But also take your time so I can relish in English Jim a little longer.
Date: November 22, 2020 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 16: For Forever
Okay. Okay, okay, okay, lemme calm down for a second. The proposal being disguised as a prom-posal? HERE FOR IT. My goodness, that was absolutely perfect. I loved the way in which you took us through Pam’s brain before, during, and after the proposal. It was so easy to get really lost in the story. Sad it’s coming to a close, but what a happy ending it will be. And we all know this butterfly *really* likes happy endings.
Date: November 20, 2020 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 15: Stage Right
This is just high quality Jim and Pam banter!
Date: November 19, 2020 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 15: Stage Right
THAT ENDING. I might actually cry from how freaking sweet that was! I loved every bit of this. Their banter was so funny, yet so canon-like. If you ever decided to do a sequel to this I would support that 2000%.
Date: November 19, 2020 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 15: Stage Right
This was adorable. I wish I had more jellybeans to give, but I ran out a long time ago. Their banter was delightfully on point. As was Andy. The fake out proposals from canon were a ton of fun too. Exactly the kind of playful banter we love to see out of them. Wonderful job as always. Can't wait for more.
Date: November 19, 2020 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 15: Stage Right
Awww! So cute!
Date: November 19, 2020 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 15: Stage Right
I feel like there aren't enough words in the English language to describe how much I love this. From Beauty and the Beast being the musical (I love that movie) to Jim dragging Pam out of the theatre. Just amazing. I could read this over and over again. Ugh. Did I already say I love this? Because I love this.
Date: November 19, 2020 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 15: Stage Right
Okay EXCUSE ME WW. As a HUGE BATB fan (my username outside of MTT is BeMyGuest, take a guess why), this just made my DAY! The sexual tension, the cuteness. The ENDING?! AH! This has my heart d84;a039;
Date: November 19, 2020 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 14: Pam's Condo
Wow! Such a great, powerful chapter. I think it's very on character that Pam leaves to handle this on her own... and that Jim is having none of it. Wonderful!
Date: November 19, 2020 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 15: Stage Right
GIRL. Love love love this so much. The bit with Andy and Oscar and the book made me crack up. “Rainbow trout” oh that is totally his name for Oscar! Loved the references to Chair Model and the fake proposals. I’m sad this story might be ending, but maybe we can get a sequel? ;)
Date: November 19, 2020 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 14: Pam's Condo
I really liked this chapter! Kinda shows how on the same page they are by the end - as scary as this is, these are two people who are very much looking forward to a future together that incudes kids. And such a great contrast between Caring Jim and Complete Jerk Roy.
The last line is fab.
Date: November 19, 2020 11:03 am Title: Chapter 14: Pam's Condo
This was a very moving chapter with the situation being what it was. I know they are in love and have thoughts for a future but I’m sure they had a different timeline in mind for a family.
I will say I was a little surprised she felt she couldn’t go to him right away. She did seem to know well who he is and what to expect from him but the history with Roy sheds a little light on her reaction. That and the emotions swirling around. So many when you are trying, I’m thinking a whole lot more when you are not.
You did a wonderful job getting all those emotions across. And of course they are both a bit sad.
But I’m most pumped for what comes next.
Bring it on.
Author's Response: Thank you so much Maxine!! I’m glad the emotions came across how I wanted them to.
Date: November 18, 2020 11:18 am Title: Chapter 5: Homecoming
Love the prom and post-prom scenes - and I can totally see Dwight with a chainsaw at a school dance.
Thanks!
Date: November 17, 2020 10:50 am Title: Chapter 3: The German Room
I'm really enjoying the world you're setting up here - can't wait to see where you take it!
Thanks!
Date: November 17, 2020 10:22 am Title: Chapter 14: Pam's Condo
Such a great chapter!!!! Keep them coming. I love this story.
Many, many jellybeans!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!
Date: November 17, 2020 10:20 am Title: Chapter 14: Pam's Condo
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww is the overwhelming feeling I have after reading this!
It honestly astonishes me how many times people make me dislike Roy! Haha!
Author's Response: Hahaha I know! There are many ways to make him the worst. Thank you!!
Date: November 17, 2020 08:03 am Title: Chapter 14: Pam's Condo
I love how Jim wants to spend his summers traveling with Pam. SO adorable and romantic. And I thought it was very telling of both of them that they were a little sad. You can really tell they both have the future on their minds.
I'm always excited for the next chapter, but after reading that last sentence, I'm *really* excited. ;)
Author's Response: Who wouldn’t want to spend their summer traveling with Pam? ;) Thank you, as always!!
Date: November 17, 2020 07:23 am Title: Chapter 14: Pam's Condo
Ok, I meant to leave a review but I don’t think I did. I wasn’t sure about reading a fic where the office characters don’t work in the office, but this is actually really good! Jim and Pam fit so well into their roles. And so do the other characters! Stanley as a careless history teacher? Angela as a librarian? I mean, come on.
This chapter was probably my favorite because of how much it revealed about Pam’s past with Roy. You can clearly see how Roy treated Pam, even if there’s no explicit conversation between them.
Basically, I love this fic. Keep up the good work!
BlindManCassidy.
Author's Response: This review made me SO happy! I love hearing that people love it even when they think they might not initially. Means I’m doing something right! Haha thank you so much for reading!! I’m glad you’re enjoying it. :)
Date: November 17, 2020 06:51 am Title: Chapter 14: Pam's Condo
Kinda figured it was going to be this kind of thing. Good for you Jim to be calm and understanding with Pam during a question about pregnancy. As if there aren't enough emotions a woman has to deal with during a time like that, being scared her partner would take it bad is one no woman needs. Especially with Pam's history here. As if we need another reason to dislike Roy. Some might make an excuse for him like they were just stupid teenagers, but no, that's wrong. Pam here was clearly smart enough to see the huge red flag that was and broke up with him over it. Good for her.
I get why they'd both be scared. While a good foundation is there, I also get why they'd want to hold off on kids or anything like that just now. Enjoy being young and in love. However it also looks like Jim has a conversation in mind. Good for you Jim. Do things right.
Good job on the emotions with this one.
Date: November 17, 2020 12:31 am Title: Chapter 14: Pam's Condo
This was SO GOOD. I don't even know where to begin. Pam's feelings are so, totally validated. I know she would be scared to tell Jim because of how Roy acted in the past, even though she knows they're nothing alike. And Jim picturing their future together with a little baby was perfect. And then the ending, how they were both a little sad to not actually be pregnant? I teared up a little. You can tell how much they truly love each other and how they are so ready to start a future together, even if this wasn't the right timing for this specific step of their future. And then that last line? I hope you have the funeral home on speed dial because my heart is about to explode. SO GOOD, WW.
Author's Response: Thank you!! 😭 I actually wasn’t planning on that last line at all but it popped in my head and I couldn’t pass it up. Haha