1 [Report This]Date: October 26, 2020 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like the universe you're creating here with this set of Jim and Pam, exploring how her anxiety plays out against the background of their relationship. And you've created some very sweet moments with this one - Pam trying to push herself to be part of every aspect of Jim's life, Jim reassuring her she absolutely doesn't have to.
I'm kinda with you on horror movies, btw. I'm not sure what's supposed to be fun about purposefully triggering your fight-or-flight instincts.
1 [Report This]Date: October 26, 2020 11:00 am Title: Chapter 1
Very cute. It also fits in nicely with your other stories. Pam having panic attacks and also the private nickname of Mouse. I really like it when authors incorporate things like that. It adds a lot of depth to their writings.
I commend Pam for trying. She's stepping out of her comfort zone. This is a bit to far out though so also good on her knowing she needs some help. Also good on Jim to just be there and reassure her that he's there, he loves her, and things are going to be okay. I really like the image of them cuddled up on her couch with Jim running sooting hands through her hair and across her back. Likewise when they also switch to "Hercules." Great choice. It's just fun and easy. the perfect thing to calm down.
Nice job.