1 [Report This]Date: November 02, 2020 03:03 am Title: Chapter 1
This was incredible! Wow...
Author's Response: Aw, thank you!
1 [Report This]Date: November 01, 2020 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
This writing is just beautiful. I’d love to hear from Jim’s perspective, maybe in winter? I like the seasonal part to it. :)
Author's Response: Ooh, that is a great idea! I actually think that, unlike Pam, Jim actually does remember almost everything. That would definitely be easier to write, so maybe I'm just trying to avoid difficult tasks, lol. But I would love to do something fall/winter themed from Jim's perspective. Thank you for the suggestion and your review!
1 [Report This]Date: November 01, 2020 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay sis! This was excellent! I feel like a proud mom. I feel like you definitely captured the emotions that a first time with someone you love can bring, as well as that euphoria of floating through those early days where it all kind of runs together because you’re just enjoying being with each other. I think you did a great job! And if you wanted to expand any of those times Pam didn’t remember a detail or two, I mean, you’ve got your audience right here!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :') I'd love to build on this idea more, maybe when I have more than just one other idea, lol. I welcome any input on other experiences Pam doesn't remember!
And girl, if you want to be my fanfic mom you totally can <3
Date: November 01, 2020 09:18 am Title: Chapter 1
Very well written. There's never anywhere in the writing where I thought of bailing out on the story. I had to read right away without distraction. Great job.
Author's Response: I am glad you liked it, Astro!
1 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2020 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was lovely. Lots of huge emotions. The feeling of it all just blending into one big pile of love is a great way to deal with all of this. I'd say more, but there doesn't seem like more needs to be said. Wonderful job.
Author's Response: Thank you, warrior! I definitely had a harder time with this as it's not like what I usually write, so I'm so grateful for your kind review!
1 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2020 08:59 am Title: Chapter 1
wow. This was sooo good!! I'm honestly a little speechless, I loved this so much. You know I'll be thinking of this fic every time I watch that episode from now on.
Author's Response: What a kind review! Thank you so much~
1 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2020 07:33 am Title: Chapter 1
Quite simply, beautiful. Straight into my favourites.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I am honored :')
1 [Report This]Date: October 30, 2020 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like the idea of this summer just sort of blurring for Pam - this does feel like the kind of experience where you remember what it felt like more than what specifically happened, and this sense you're describing that she's just sort of overwhelmed by the sheer firehose rush of stimuli coming at her feels very real. I like this one!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad it seems realistic to you, that's what I was aiming for!
1 [Report This]Date: October 30, 2020 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was just beautiful. Seriously, it almost had a whimsical feel to it and was so sweet. I loved it so much!! The “less is more” approach in regards to their intimacy worked perfectly for the feel of the whole thing. Excuse me while I go read it three more times.
Author's Response: Thank you for supporting me while I wrote it! I must confess, I have read it a few times since posting it. Probably not supposed to say that out loud (on screen?), but oh well. ;)