1 [Report This]Date: December 19, 2020 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 2 Four Days Before
I like the choice here to have Scranton just be absolutely saturated by Jim's memories of Pam.
The way these two approach dealing with each other is appropriately frustrating - avoidance at every turn. Get it together, guys.
Date: December 19, 2020 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 2 Four Days Before
Poor Jim and Pam. There's still clearly a lot of feeling between the two of them. Feels like fear being the chief amonst those feelings. It will be interesting to see what happens when they finally see each other. Will there be tears, anger, reconciliation? Seems like time will tell. Yes a short chapter but one filled with a ton of emotion.
1 [Report This]Date: December 19, 2020 08:32 am Title: Chapter 1 The News
Welcome to MTT! I have to say, I am a big fan of angsty stories that deal with them fighting or breaking up or going through something heavy, because I think that’s how real relationships are. We saw some of that in the show, but in my opinion not enough. I like my ships to be a bit broken before they get put back together, you know? So this is right up my alley. It’s so sad that Michael is dead! I think you handled all their reactions to that news very well, though. And I loved the interactions between Jim and Dwight and Angela and Pam. Looking forward to more!
Date: December 18, 2020 02:01 am Title: Chapter 1 The News
This looks interesting! Looking forward to more.
Date: December 17, 2020 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 1 The News
That's an interesting set up to be sure. I think it's a possibility considering Jim and Pam didn't have any kids. Though it does break my heart a bit to even think of Jim and Pam breaking up once they got together.
Sad to think that it's Michael's passing that might be the thing to bring them back together. Like Pam has said, he's had chances to contact her but hasn't. Should be interesting to see where this goes.
1 [Report This]Date: December 17, 2020 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 1 The News
Wow, this is definitely a *very* different premise to take on. It feels like there’s a lot to explore between a Jim and Pam who still very much love each other and couldn’t make it work the first time. I’m looking forward to seeing how you get them through this.
Welcome to MTT and congrats on your first story! (Cool user name, by the way!)
1 [Report This]Date: December 17, 2020 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 1 The News
They're divorced???! That breaks my heart into a thousand pieces, but I honestly love what you've set up here. There aren't that many fics on here that start like this so I'm excited to see how you show their interactions moving forward.
Welcome to MTT and Jam fanfic writing! It's a great community full of supportive writers so I'm sure you'll love it here!