1 [Report This]Date: January 24, 2021 05:52 pm Title: Air VI
Awwww! That's amazing.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: January 24, 2021 02:49 pm Title: Air IX
Feeding on crumbles feelings like a great description of Season 3 Pam.
I'm sorry to hear about the diagnosis - that sounds awful. I hope it goes easy on you and please keep us posted on how you're feeling.
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope it'll go away without any complications...
1 [Report This]Date: January 24, 2021 02:08 pm Title: Air IX
I have been loving each of these posts! Feel better soon Dernhelm.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: January 23, 2021 04:39 pm Title: Water IX
This just feels really psychologically true to how she would have been feeling.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad to hear that :)
Date: January 23, 2021 03:49 pm Title: Water IX
Lovely metaphor. I'm sure she could have stood against the wave herself, but she's even stronger with him there. Very nice.
Author's Response: Thank you! I agree that she could, but I like the idea of them making each other stronger :)
Date: January 22, 2021 09:31 am Title: Earth V
Ooooooh. I really like this one. Partially because it feels like a Witchy Pam sighting, and also it's just leaning into the bit really well.
Sorry you're not feeling well... keeping my fingers crossed it's just a cold...
Author's Response: You know how much I love Witchy Pam, so I'm especially excited to hear that! Thank you!
Date: January 22, 2021 08:44 am Title: Earth V
Feel better and good luck. You get a pass on the streak.
Author's Response: Thank you very much, Once!
Date: January 22, 2021 08:42 am Title: Fire V
This one was really good. It hit home. I think I need to dance more.
Author's Response: Thank you! And I agree, there should be more dancing :)
Date: January 22, 2021 08:23 am Title: Earth V
The playful, wistful, bittersweet banter of S2. Great job bringing out those feelings.
Hope you feel better soon.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Warrior!
Date: January 21, 2021 12:27 pm Title: Fire V
Oh I loved this one. Pam running across those coals is such a great moment for her. You did it justice with this one.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much!
Date: January 21, 2021 12:09 pm Title: Fire V
This feels like the end of a longer fic!
Author's Response: Thanks! That's a good thing, right?
Date: January 21, 2021 09:34 am Title: Water VIII, Fire IV
I created a account to tell you these are really great! Keep it up!
Author's Response: Aww, you're too sweet! Thank you so much!
Date: January 20, 2021 06:08 pm Title: Water VIII, Fire IV
This is such a nice image of Pam. Thank you for giving her this night in what must have been a pretty crappy summer.
Author's Response: Thank you! I guess I gave her something that I might have needed in a similar situation...
Date: January 20, 2021 03:50 pm Title: Water VIII, Fire IV
Yeah, that seems to fit. Easy to see Pam could go out for anight like that at this time. Nice job.
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad that it looked like a canon-compliant piece.
Date: January 20, 2021 10:30 am Title: Air VIII, Water VII
Congratulations!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: January 19, 2021 11:23 am Title: Air VIII, Water VII
I love this - both for acknowledging there would be some pain in the post-The Job world and for the metaphor.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm grateful to you for your amazing feedback, they really mean a lot to me.
Date: January 19, 2021 09:39 am Title: Air VIII, Water VII
I'm out of ways to say how great this is. It feels so perfect for the moment. Something new and wonderful is dawning after the longest night ever. Beautiful.
Author's Response: Awww, you're so kind, Warrior, thank you!
Date: January 18, 2021 07:29 pm Title: Air VII, Water VI
The parallel structure here is a nice touch!
Author's Response: Thank you so much :)
Date: January 18, 2021 03:58 pm Title: Air VII, Water VI
Excellent take on how they're frozen when it comes to really talking about what they truly feel. There will be warmer days ahead.
Author's Response: Thank you! And I'm going to write something about the warmer days too :)
Date: January 17, 2021 09:06 pm Title: Air VI
This is a lovely image - it feels like a really good fit with the canon moment of them lying in bed watching Cece and marveling at how they weren't kids anymore.
Author's Response: Thank you! I love that moment in the show, and it's nice that my piece also fit :)
1 [Report This]Date: January 17, 2021 08:46 pm Title: Air VI
These are truly poetry. You could bind them up and sell them and I for one would buy a copy to keep on my shelf forever. You have such a talent, my friend. Thank you so much for sharing it with us!
Author's Response: I've never been praised that high for my writing, and, honestly, I'm speechless. Thank you!
1 [Report This]Date: January 17, 2021 08:44 pm Title: Earth II
Oh, Dernhelm. I was going to read them all and review at the end when I was caught up, but I just had to say that this was beautiful and aching and to say thank you for sharing it with us.
Author's Response: Thank you, BT. This really means a lot to me.
Date: January 17, 2021 05:47 pm Title: Air VI
Yes, all the yes. New Daddy Jim and the image of him cradeling Cece is just all the yes. Damn, I'm out of jellybeans. This one deserves one though. Loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Warrior!
Date: January 17, 2021 05:46 pm Title: Air V
This is just so great in so few words. Somthing that almost doesn't exist. Almost being the key word there. It's still there, it's just going to take a bit to get there. Great job.
Author's Response: Thank you! I feel like Pam might paint Jim even before they became a couple, so here is my take on it. Glad you like it!