1 [Report This]Date: March 11, 2023 11:12 am Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely adorable and sexy! Well done…b29;a039;
1 [Report This]Date: February 19, 2021 10:04 am Title: Chapter 1
Yeah, it feels like there has to be some backstory for that moment - they clearly weren't planning on getting pregnant that close to the wedding but they also don't seem particularly thrown by the reveal. The fact that Michael was functionally right about how it happened - and that he's in some ways directly responsible thanks to the MSPC - is a great comic note.
I liked the contrast between her attitudes towards the possibility of an accidental pregnancy with Roy and Jim - on some level she really knows she and Roy aren't ready to be parents together, but with Jim it just doesn't worry her as much.
Congrats on your first fic! Welcome to the ranks of MTT writers! Can't wait to see more from you.
1 [Report This]Date: February 19, 2021 06:27 am Title: Chapter 1
Congratulations on posting your first fic. It's quite a nice sensation isn't it.
I really like this for its realism, the way things go down in real life and not like they do in romcoms and tv shows (strangely meta as this is tv show characters we write about)
But I also like how you show how different Pam and her relationships with Roy versus Jim.
Well done. Hope to see more from you..
Date: February 18, 2021 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hey! This was a fun read! A very realistic situation and you’ve captured it, and them, well.
Date: February 18, 2021 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Congratulations on your first fic here. Excellent revelation of Pam's nature, both in being prepared (every office has that one person who can always be counted on) and her reaction to the pharmacist. Birth control in our modern time is presented so well.
Good onya
Date: February 18, 2021 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thanks so much for the feedback lazyloris and warrior4! Love reading your work so it means a lot! :)
1 [Report This]Date: February 18, 2021 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
love this explanation!
1 [Report This]Date: February 18, 2021 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
First of all welcome to writing! It can be intimidating posting that first story, so well done on taking the plunge.
Very interesting concept here. The comparison in how Pam approaches things seems very much in character. She tries but is never seems 100% comfortable with Roy, thus the fanatical devotion to her routine.
However with Jim, she can relax knowing this is truly the person for her. Regadless of what happens, she knows he'll be there for her. And of course he is in every way. Great way to bring that out.
Again well done on posting your first fic. Hopefully we'll see more from you in the future.