Date: April 26, 2024 09:16 am Title: A Famous Landmark and A Human Heater
I absolutely live the real life callbacks like the standish and kodak ad. I cannot wait for the next chapter!
1 [Report This]Date: April 25, 2024 07:23 am Title: Mr. President and Madam Secretary
Great flashback! It's nice to compare the rocky times with present time, it takes me a little by surprise every time.
Date: April 24, 2024 01:31 pm Title: Pam Pong and An Impossible Shot
I love the way involve interactions from canon, but not in the exact setting (e.g. Jwight hug). It sparks some realistic visuals, but doesn't derail the story.
Date: April 24, 2024 06:08 am Title: A Horror Film and A Rom-Com
I'm definitely feeling the heat in this story and I'm more intrigued than ever to see how it unwinds!
1 [Report This]Date: April 22, 2024 02:00 pm Title: Brownies and A Leaky Faucet
This was such a great chapter! Starting with awesome alternating text chains and looking more into Jim's history... Cannot wait to read how it develops!
Date: April 21, 2024 01:41 pm Title: Pickles and Swiss Cheese
Bad boy&Good girl, adjacent apartments, fale dating... this story has it all!
Date: April 21, 2024 11:26 am Title: Slow Train from Philly
Ooh, this angst is spot on!
Date: April 21, 2024 09:27 am Title: Hottest in the Office
Never apologise for a long chapter, when it's full of great stuff!
1 [Report This]Date: April 21, 2024 08:29 am Title: Photocopies and Jellybeans
I burst out laughing at your "Mark Sloan" comparison. I really hope it helps with my perception of Jim. Cannot wait to read the rest!
1 [Report This]Date: February 02, 2024 12:26 pm Title: A Famous Landmark and A Human Heater
Ugh ok loved this please immediately write more. LOVE the addition of Carmy cousiinnnnn and the little revelation of what Jim had said about bringing a girl here. Absolute HEARTS. The coat cuddle? Hugely adorable, I am obsessed. I love how Pam is learning all these new things about Jim and getting to see a different side of him. Have a pizza flavoured jelly bean.
Date: January 31, 2024 10:31 am Title: A Famous Landmark and A Human Heater
This slow burn you've got going with them is killing me! Really feels like Jim's defenses are getting worn down. He fumbles with the receptionist when he'd normally be pretty suave with her. Likewise he takes her to the special pizza place. Not even to mention all the flirting they're doing with each other.
Feels like a fairly big revelation for Pam too. Her finding out that Jim would reserve such a special place for a special woman. She may have gotten treated like a princess before, but something tells me that this date would be quite a bit more romantic.
I do wonder what it's going to take for them to finally get over themselves and realize how much they like each other. Of course there will probably be a few landmines that go off in that regard, but seriously, they can't hide their feelings for each other forever. Especially now that that they're telling people they're in a relationship. K
Date: January 31, 2024 08:01 am Title: A Famous Landmark and A Human Heater
You know what the problem with this story is? The chapters, no matter how long you make them, are just never long enough!!! Eugh, why couldn't you just carry on writing for forever?
This was such great update, and that end? OOOF, I can't wait for the next update to find out how they navigate Pam knowing that snippet of information!!
As always, my love, a pleasure to read and leaves us wanting more!
p.s well done on updating before the time limit I gave you in my last review! Kudos!
1 [Report This]Date: January 31, 2024 07:23 am Title: A Famous Landmark and A Human Heater
You know I love it, now hurry up and write more please
Also, sorry for making you write about a show you've never seen.
1 [Report This]Date: January 28, 2024 08:52 am Title: An Explosion and Chocolate at 1PM
Yes let’s go Jam in New York! Pam’s little flares of jealousy are so fun and her eventually touching his bicep. Who wouldn’t?! Like he knows she wants to an and needs a good excuse to do it. His support of her art is so cute, hopefully it is enough to alleviate her doubts and give her some confidence. This jellybean is grape soda flavor.
1 [Report This]Date: January 28, 2024 08:49 am Title: A Horrible Date and Some Magic
This is my favourite chapter (so far). You have given them a very interesting dynamic where these past events and misunderstandings come into play well. Love the random kiss and Jim’s admission/lie to Kelly - way to make things complicated!
1 [Report This]Date: January 28, 2024 08:39 am Title: Sprinkle of Cinnamon
And there’s the McSteamy towel moment. As it lives rent free in my mind, I am sure that moment will live rent free in Pam’s mind. I love the weaving in the past with present and how they link together, it’s good stuff. Interesting how in his personal space his photos reveal a very different side of Jim than he puts on (and curious about this R silver box)! Have a jellybean, it’s not vomit flavoured I promise. Poor Pam.
1 [Report This]Date: January 28, 2024 08:32 am Title: Photocopies and Jellybeans
Okay, McSteamy Jim?! I’m a fan. Stellar. Don’t even mind that he’s kind of a jerk. Danny Cordray? Much less so. However I love Pam’s “hate” for Jim - only fun things can come from this kind of relationship! (Also, yea, I’ve read this chapter multiple times, but I’ve done an entire reread so here we are)
1 [Report This]Date: July 19, 2023 09:05 am Title: An Explosion and Chocolate at 1PM
Lovef this so much!! Please can you update sooon!!!
1 [Report This]Date: June 23, 2023 06:59 am Title: An Explosion and Chocolate at 1PM
Woooo, you updated! As ever, I should hate manwhore Jim but I don't ...and I guess Pam feels the same way!
Date: June 14, 2023 08:04 pm Title: An Explosion and Chocolate at 1PM
OMG OMG OMG… cannot wait for more!
I absolutely adore their banter, gimme gimme!
Date: June 14, 2023 07:55 pm Title: An Explosion and Chocolate at 1PM
So the tension is starting to ratchet up that's for sure. The one thing I'll say about Pam is she's good at denying her feelings. Yes, she was being jealous, yes she does think Jim is attractive. Danny might treat her nicely, but Jim keeps her on her toes. After all even she admitted to herself that it's because of Jim not anyone else that she's even on the road for an interview at Pratt. Should be really interesting to see what the trip brings.
Though if they are going to go through with this whole fake relationship thing, Jim needs to start pulling his head out of his ass and stop flirting with any woman he sees. We know he has feelings for Pam. If he turned back the jerk and kept his normal charm where it is, it feels like it could prove more than worthwile.
Date: June 14, 2023 05:38 am Title: A Horror Film and A Rom-Com
Oh, the push and pull between Danny and whatever she is feeling about Jim… so good!
Date: June 13, 2023 07:42 am Title: A Beard and A Blonde
Write all the chapters you want about his beard! I think it has its own fan club at this point!
Date: June 12, 2023 09:22 pm Title: Brownies and A Leaky Faucet
Oooooo… so much intrigue and questions as we head into the next chapter!
Date: June 12, 2023 08:19 pm Title: Photocopies and Jellybeans
Beyond happy to see this one updated. I still want to bang Pam & Jim's heads together and I wouldn't mind Danny & Cathy taking a long walk on a short pier. Looking forward to NY and seeing if I can really get past slutty Jim's constant sexcapades of the last 6-7 years. Pam probably deserves Danny, but I still always want Jim/Pam in the end.