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I really enjoyed this collection of stories. I could totally see them saying and doing everything as you described it. I liked all of them, of course, but my favorites were without a doubt Jelly Bean Day, Casino Night, and Halloween II. I hope you will get the inspiration to write more,

Thank you for writing and sharing these with us!

So there was a Caffeine Corner fic after all...you sneaky devil.

So I'm old as a vampire so some of the pop culture references were lost on me but I knew exactly what a reach extender was even without the link.

Wish that Erin had gotten a monster perm to look more like Merida.

Believe it or not, I do know Blackadder (Mr. Bean too).

The best part of this fic was imagining Jim as Mr. Incredible, but seriously you really touched the mummy in me in that the family went as The Incredibles. It so just warmed my heart  - it's one of my kids favorite movies still and I have video asking "Jeffery Dahmer" (only you know who I mean) as a little kid if he was fast like Dash.  And Cece trapping Dwight in a force field - be still my heart, how adorable. 

I know why Dakota is featured and why she goes as Tes McGill - again because I'm from the dark ages.  SHould I spoil it for all - naw you know I know. Let them look it up.

I also caught the good at Jellos - and Clark dressed as HP and was there a nod with the phrasing 'like a traveler' or am I just overthinking as usual? 

Gotta tell you the Incrediperts had me howling.

And really the reason Angela goes along on this prank does track. 

Fun stuff - thanks for posting!! 

Yeah I could see this as a way to get Jim in costume. Pam started wearing him down with Popeye and he's found it's a lot of fun to make the two best girls and guy in his life happy. And prank Dwight at the same time.

Erin being all about the costume and her and Pete still going strong was great fun too. Same with all the other costume descriptions. Dwight going through HR staffers seems to track. Not that he was as antagonistic to them as Michael was, but almost as if he's trying to out-to Michael in his disregard for things HR.

The best part though was Cece forcing Dwight into a force field. Love how that came across.

Great job and Happy Halloween!

Author's Response: Jim's love for his family, and perhaps more importantly his love for pranking Dwight, would make him do far worse things than dress up for Halloween.

Erin's sheer joy in things always makes her fun to use. And I had *way* too much fun thinking up costumes.

I think that's about right... Dwight isn't *purposefully* hateful towards HR guys the way Michael is, but he's certainly not going to let an HR guy prevent him from doing anything.

There should be more Cece-Dwight fic.

Thank you, and a very happy Halloween to you!

Wow, Toby's doing a really good job of covering his tracks. Got everyone all convinced, planted evidence, everything.

That all being said, great voice for everyone through all of this. Creepy Gabe, self important Dwight, Pam and Angela sniping at each other, Kelly ready to rock her interview, Kevin not picking up on what Oscar is saying, Jim feeling out of place that there was a threat so close to his family, Michael being distraught. Really good work with this one.

Author's Response: Toby's Netflix show is going to be *epic.* (I *think* what's going on here is there have been *two* serial killers stalking Scranton at this time, like LA in the 70s and 80s, and Toby is hoping to palm off/seeing some of his murders being attributed to Luke.)

Thank you so much! And thanks for taking the time to review!

This was so incredibly good, totally played out like a real episode in my head. I love Mom Detectives too, I hope they do something with it once they finish the rewatches towards the end of next year.

Author's Response: Thank you! And they absolutely should. Get Hollywood on the phone, dammit.

It's always fun to see you expand one of the Discord quickies into a real live fic. The meta connection of this one while trouble for your timeline, also makes it so. I don't know why, as I sip my much needed AM coffee, but the Darryl one really landed for me.

Kelly's seems very Kelly. I'm totally seeing Gabe fanboy over having a serial killer's signature and getting banned for his SK glorification.

But I totally see and hear Toby in this one. 

Fun stuff!

Happy Early Halloween!!! 

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Well Shana Tova Jim! And Shana Tova DJC!
The idea of Jim doing Taslich here is really nice, and I love how you included pretty much EVERYONE (including Sara-without-an-h). Maybe Dwight could have snuck in there though hehe
Very cute of Pam trying to make the meal the next day
Would love to see Michael's attempt at Yom Kippur for next week (joking, but kinda not, chop chop)
Have a jellybean while you can still eat it!!

Author's Response: Shana tovah to you, my friend!

Well, Jim has a lot of wrongs to think about. He's casting a wide net here.

Pam is a good egg. She's doing her level best here.

I shudder to think what Michael would do with Yom Kippur.

Thanks so much, and thanks for taking the time to review!

It's the morning after my personal new year and the morning of the one of my people. Like Jim, I'll be heading to synagogue myself soon. Is that why this fic got me so verklempt? A bit, but even without my personal attachment, this one was moving and very sweet.

Thank you for the birthday wishes and fic. I am touched by it. Thank you also for the image of Jim above the water. I can't help but think he might have been thinking of some other moments by the water as they pertain to Pam, on their boat trip where he could not find the words, and after the beach games, standing ankle deep in it as he maybe finally starting coming around to the 'right decision'. It conjured up other similar ritual images, him fisting his chest, reciting more general sins and (I borrow these words but it fits so well here) defibularating his heart to awaken a better self...one that Pam helped bring about.

Now Jim can just… be. And wouldn’t you know it, it turns out Pam loves him just as he is, unfiltered and unrestrained. Because Pam loves him. (Pam loves him!) - this was beautifully written.

Cute that Pam calls him out on his selective devoutness and I so relate with the uncomfortable folding chairs - (see Pam, many people become more Jewish around this time, so much that extra chairs need to be brought out). We've had to sit in them many times - hard to get two young boys dressed for temple (plus fancy myself up, since we all know that looking around to see everyone is what we all do) - and get to synagogue in time to get a seat in the pews.

Now the section where he atones via bread thrown in the water for all those he had wronged, that just got me. You got me starting with Karen (who as you said he had a lot to be sorry about).

Bread for his mom, and how sad he saw his own sadness made her. “A mother is only as happy as her least happy child,” she always says, and that’s been him for a long damn time. OH HOW TRUE THIS IS. More so as they are older since its no longer silly stuff, but real troubles that we moms feel as strongly perhaps as they do. I feel for what Betsy must have gone through during his darkest days following Casino night.

Of course he must atone for Dwight, even if he will be back to it by the next work day.
And for Roy, this was so poignant - the line about coveting...you don't often think about it how it was that, but for years he was breaking the 10th commandment. Not to mention how he upended what Roy had with Pam, even if he didn't appreciate it like he should have.

'For taking the olive branch she offered him after the pepper spray incident and snapping it over his knee. For the week she had to wait for him to come back after her Beach Day speech.' - another line that just got me.

The ending was just so sweet and perfect... the taste of the honey on her lips..delish.

And I love the justification for your continuity discrepancy. I say if GD (that being Greg Daniels) can do it, so can DJC.

Thanks you again for the birthday wishes and the fic. A Sweet New Year to you and all.

Author's Response: Well, verklempt was definitely my goal here, and I'm happy to take credit for the work of the calendar. A happy and sweet fresh start to both of your new years.

The latter images were very much intended, and I'm glad that came through. The comparison to all the Jim-and-Pam-by-the-water moments hadn't occurred to me and I wish I'd referenced it now!

Season 4 Jim is really fun to write sometimes. He's just so giddy.

The plight of the High Holy Days-only synagogue attendee is REAL.

I think, or at least hope, the pain he caused Karen is very much on his mind at this point in the story, not yet knowing that she's getting her happy ending.

Hmmm. By the way, if anyone non-Max is reading this and agrees, you really ought to read "Sleepless Nights."

He is sorry! Just not sorry enough to in any way restrain himself!

It's kind of hard to define what Jim did to Roy without getting into touchy questions about what the "theft" of a person is... I think coveting covers it pretty well, though.

Pam really does take it on the chin a lot from Jim in Season 3, and while I am a staunch Season 3 Jim defender or at least explainer, I think he would've been cringing at a lot of his behavior with 20/20 hindsight.

The ending mainly came about because I thought the "you get more Jewish when there's worked to be skipped or food to beaten" line, while funny, was maybe a little meaner than Pam might be and I thought she'd feel bad. She's a good egg, that Pam Beesly. Glad you liked it!

Continuity is for mortals.

You are very welcome, and thank YOU for being born.

Hahaha... ! I can totally see Creed and Joe cruisin' Syracuse in a stolen Cadillac.

I've been looking forward to catching up with this , and you haven't disappointed. These chapters have all been great, and I can really hear the characters talking.
Super stuff!

Author's Response: Oh, the Joe Biden and Creed shenanigans would've been a whole documentary unto themselves.

Thank you so much! Really appreciate your kind words and you taking the time!

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Well, that was lovely. I feel genuinely emotional, and I'm glad you managed to fit in a happy ending. Great insights into both of their states of mind, at that point in their story.
Super!

Author's Response: This may well be my favorite thing I wrote last year tbh, so I'm really glad to hear you liked it!

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You're great at painting vivid pictures with these scripts (if that's the tight word for it?) You really bring them to life. I particularly liked seeing Jim trying to fill his time at reception, and your clip package with the abused microwave. Oh, and happy Stanley with his pretzel!
Thanks!

Author's Response: I don't know why that microwave gag amuses me so much, but I've gotten a lot of mileage out of it. And it is always a treat to write happy Stanley.

Thank you so much! I do think John and Jenna are doing most of the work, but I appreciate it.

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Oh... this is very moving and insightful.
The clash between Jim's role in Pam's life and his actual hopes and intentions always grabs me, and I liked this bit which sums it up very well:
"Jim freezes, because if he can’t give her this, than what good is he to her? And there are moments when he is not the funnest most super awesome source of entertainment, there are moments when he can’t come up with some new game,... there are moments when he just wants to drop the act he always puts on for her and just be honest, be a man and not a playmate, and he’s… He’s got it."
I also really liked:
"The odds have always been against him. The idea that Pam was secretly harboring feelings for him, enough that she might leave Roy, while also dragging Roy kicking and screaming to the altar? It just didn’t make sense."
On the one hand we have the received truth of Jim's cowardice / weakness. But we're probably being more than a bit unfair, because, yeah, he spends his days being confronted with a bit of a Pam paradox. He thinks he can see that she has feelings for him, and he sees that Roy makes her unhappy, she sees it too and complains about him... yet she's the only one in that relationship who's actually invested in getting into a church and wed. You've illustrated his dilemma very well there, and the direction his thoughts would likely be taking in the run up to his big moment.
Great stuff!

Author's Response: Thanks for bringing me back to this one - trying to create a Season 2-style Jam moment that felt like it had something to say and wasn't just a carbon copy was a challenge.

I maintain a lot of sympathy for Jim (up to and through Season 3) for just that reason - without the awareness of the genre of show you're in and everything we're seeing of Pam's reactions without him around, he's wrestling with a lot of information that just doesn't fit what he wants things to be.

Thank you, and thank you for taking the time to review!

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This was absolutely hilarious. I have to be honest though, my favorite line was the one in your end note: "The latter of which is funny to me because Meredith has definitely never voted in her life."

I need to stop reading your fics while in class and on camera.

Author's Response: It's weird to think of Kate Flannery being her own person sometimes. And I wish I could say I'm sorry to be a distraction, but that would feel dishonest.