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Reviewer: MamaLo Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 16, 2021 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

PEPPER NEEDS NEW SHORTS!

Ahem, I mean, this was lovely. Very well done.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 16, 2021 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

Lots of fun with this one. Also adding my kudos to you AG for being able to pound this one out so fast after the suggestion/poll in Discord. Great fun to see them let loose a bit more while at home.

Reviewer: grc73 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 16, 2021 08:17 am Title: Chapter 1

I think it was more gentle coercion by an appreciative support group. You know you wanted to really ;)

Can I just say this could be the dirtiest thing I've read in this fandom? :D And one of the best. I really am here for the romance of it, the way you write is like if they put the Office on HBO. Just brilliant.

Reviewer: ThePinkButterfly Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2021 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

Um hi I will second DJC's comment on how the heck you can write something this masterful in a short amount of time.

I would like to draw everyone's attention to this line right here because it kicked my ass so hard that I landed back on my feet: "This was his woman, tugging on his hair and tugging on her own nipple and damn near floating out of her body while his tongue cracked her open."

Like

My God.

Thank you for this. I will not hesitate to ever harass you again, because I now know that it pays off.

Reviewer: BigTuna Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2021 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

So hey when are you gonna write that Jim/Pam/Johnny Storm crossover you set up so beautifully?

Reviewer: FlonkertonChamp Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2021 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, I was hoping someone would take that deleted scene and run with it, and I’m SO glad it was you. *slow clap*

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2021 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

Okay. I love the idea that they need only made a sex tape the night before Did I Stutter but that it's actually crucial to the plot. HOW DO YOU WRITE THAT WELL THAT QUICKLY.

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