1 [Report This]Date: September 02, 2023 06:30 am Title: Egregious
WooHoo! Marvelously well done!!!
1 [Report This]Date: June 16, 2022 12:10 pm Title: Egregious
Wow, such a perfect combination of sweetness and smut. I love how they can bring levity everywhere. If your headcanon is hign-fiving after sex, mine is that Phillip was absolutely conceived here.
Author's Response: Yay, you found me! I totally agree that Philip was conceived here 💗 thanks so much for the review!
1 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2021 09:25 pm Title: Egregious
I should have known even your smut would be written so poetically and with so much depth (and now I'm thinking of that word in quite a different way)
I'll finish when you do... Um. He will get her there. He always does. Hot.
She an feel him smiling, triumphant, absolutely proud of himself.
Aside from a sex scene that I did appreciate, there was a story with its own climax too TWSS. And it was well placed and fit together so well TWSS again.
I'll read you smut any day.
1 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2021 08:47 pm Title: Egregious
Kind of? This was smutty in the best way possible!
I absolutely loved this! It's a very Jam thing to do, being up against either of their desks while doing the dirty.
And even the angst in this fit so well!
And your headcanon is amazing, I can totally see it.
Great job!
1 [Report This]Date: June 11, 2021 11:06 pm Title: Egregious
This was delightful. The idea that they finally "went for a walk" was great. Same with all the thoughts going through Pam's head during everything. Her sudden slip there once they were finished seemed fairly true to the situation. Especially since they're both probably feeling the effects of their lunch. However I'm glad they were able to have another moment of honest connection there. Great to see them in a very strong place with each other. Great job with this one.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: June 11, 2021 10:01 pm Title: Egregious
Damn! So so good, this had everything it was hot, and yet angst and sweet and funny. Honestly I don't know how you do it!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
1 [Report This]Date: June 11, 2021 09:31 pm Title: Egregious
Ughhhhh I loved this so much! So hot and so sweet and so funny and just all. the. feels.
"It hurts, but it’s the very best kind of hurt; the kind she’d be willing to get fired for."
DEAD
"She knows without a doubt that, in his mind, there are no ifs, ands or buts about it… he will get her there. He always does."
DEAD AGAIN
Their conversation was just so, so well-written. I actually love this kind of angst, and you did it perfectly. And then Jim hiding her panties like that. How dare you. ;)
Brilliant as always my friend!
Author's Response: Thanks for being a sounding board, I'm so glad you liked it!
1 [Report This]Date: June 11, 2021 08:29 pm Title: Egregious
Um. Wow. Okay. Hot.
I usually don't review fics that are pretty much just smut because I never know what to say but this might very well be my favorite PDA fic. You got right into it from the beginning and didn't slow down (that's what she said). And then throwing in a Pam insecurity there towards the end? Perfection. Couldn't have done better. Please write more. Immediately.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
1 [Report This]Date: June 11, 2021 07:57 pm Title: Egregious
Jeez. Gabe really set up a romantic day for everyone but himself, didn't he? :D
Things I really enjoyed about this:
-Pam maintaining enough discomfort about this whole thing to not be able to get across the finish line, and Jim immediately knowing what she's doing
-Pam drawing something from Jim clearly not thinking it's as weird as she did
-Jim having stopped to prank her in the middle of this
-the brief acknowledgement that this might well be how Phil was conceived
And yes, Jim and Pam are 100% the couple who high-five after sex. That's a major part of their charm.
This was delightful.
Author's Response: Glad you picked up on those things, thanks as always for your thoughtful review! :)
1 [Report This]Date: June 11, 2021 07:56 pm Title: Egregious
Yes, you wrote something kind of smutty and believe me I am here for it! When Pam thought she "hopes she isn’t accidentally shipping paper somewhere it isn’t supposed to go", I almost had diet coke shoot from my nose!
Loved it!
Author's Response: Haha thanks so much!