1 [Report This]Date: July 11, 2021 07:49 pm Title: Nightmare
Well you weren't kidding about angst! But honestly--fuck Roy here, so it's for the best she's got a clean break.
Author's Response: I never kid about angst, also yah, Roy is the WORST!
1 [Report This]Date: July 10, 2021 05:53 pm Title: Two AM
Ugh, this fluff within the angst and sexual tension. God, I love this!
This was great! I hope there's more fluffiness where this came from!
1 [Report This]Date: July 10, 2021 10:56 am Title: Two AM
Awwwww. Accidentally!Domestic Jim and Pam is always adorable. Enjoyed this chapter a lot!
Date: July 09, 2021 10:21 pm Title: Two AM
She may be still lamenting the fact Roy is gone, however Jim's right there. Love the idea that he'd just come over and they'd watch home makeover shows till they fall asleep. Nice to see them like that. Nice job.
1 [Report This]Date: July 06, 2021 07:57 pm Title: When life gives you lemons...
Aw! That onesie giving Pam home!
I feel her pain, with Roy coming by and taking the ring back and all. But, I love that Jim saw right through it!
Those cake pops DO need warnings though. Maybe moreso one stating "Warning: One isn't enough"
Great chapter!
Date: July 05, 2021 06:06 am Title: When life gives you lemons...
Of course Roy calls at 3am drunk asking for his stuff back. Then doesn't say anything while packing up. Really good way to paint him as kind of a dead-beat man-child there. Good on Pam to send him on his way.
Jim of course is the perfect answer to that. She calls, he's there. Seems like he knows to follow her lead about when and where to talk about everything. Love that. He knows she's going through a tough time and so it's best to just be there for her. Though the offer about asking his mom for help really seemed to touch her.
One slow step for Pam with the onesie. Good job Pam. That's all it is. One step at a time. Great way to see her starting down that kind of path.
Author's Response: she's taking the slow path, still trying to wrap her head around it, but I think that's the beauty of it. one step at time.
1 [Report This]Date: July 01, 2021 05:22 pm Title: Nightmare
Whoa. This is an interesting AU you're setting up here. On one hand, I want to slap Roy across the face. On the other hand, I'm curious to see what becomes of Jam here. Can't wait for your next update!
1 [Report This]Date: July 01, 2021 03:27 pm Title: Nightmare
This is such a great premise - I'm already hooked! I love Jim's reaction here, it's so sweet: can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I lov the premise too, and I'm happy you enjoyed Jims reaction (it was my favorite part to write!)
1 [Report This]Date: July 01, 2021 01:23 pm Title: Nightmare
That's one helluva set up to be sure. I kinda figured Roy wouldn't take it well. But getting mad at her like that, demanding she "get rid of it," yeah dump his ass in the gutter and don't look back Pam. I know it hurts and she's scared, but it was 1005 the right decision. I also get why she goes to her mom first. A much longer and bond due to family than anything she's had at the office.
However Jim is right there when she needs him. Good job Jim. Keep it up.
So where do we go from here? Should be really interesting to find out, that's for sure.
Author's Response: her leaving Roy was so satisfying to write, so I'm happy you enjoyed it. and yes, it should be an interesting ride.
1 [Report This]Date: July 01, 2021 08:26 am Title: Nightmare
Great start! I love these AUs.
I can’t wait to read where this story is headed
Author's Response: I'm so happy that your enjoying the story so far!
1 [Report This]Date: July 01, 2021 06:38 am Title: Nightmare
I'm hooked already. This chapter did an excellent job setting things up. I'm looking forward to seeing how the story progresses!
Author's Response: Yay! I'm happy your enjoying it so far and I'm excited to see where the story goes too!