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Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2021 11:37 pm Title: Glasses

Jim surprising Pam at her apartment is all sorts of sweet. Finding her in her dressed down comfy clothes and glasses is fun too. That Jim likes everything about her, glasses included, just hits home so well. Kisses and ice cream help in that regard too. Loved this one.

Reviewer: Basscop69 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27, 2021 02:35 pm Title: Glasses

A happy chapter! This was so adorable, I loved every moment of it: Jim surprising her with ice cream, her dancing round the kitchen with her glasses on (also, excellent song choice), him falling even more in love with her because of it, and his happiness just at getting to see her like that…this is basically everything I could ever have wanted from a backstory about Jam and those glasses 😍

Reviewer: tinydundie Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 24, 2021 09:12 pm Title: Glasses

I love everything about all of this. These were all so fantastic!

Reviewer: tinydundie Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 24, 2021 09:05 pm Title: Prank

*He knows his job is to talk to clients about paper and prices and everything he never actually wants to talk about. He knows that his job is to make phone calls, reply to emails, fill out paperwork. But most days, he feels like the most important part of his job is getting Pam to smile at him like she is right now.

“Absolutely we do.”*

MY HEART

Reviewer: tinydundie Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 24, 2021 09:04 pm Title: Hot Sauce

Headcanon accepted!

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24, 2021 05:14 pm Title: Glasses

Yeah, I'm a sucker for "Jim discovers Pam's glasses" stories and him being ridiculously pleased that he's the only one she's comfortable seeing like that and Roy having made her feel bad about it. Thank you for delivering.

Reviewer: ThePinkButterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24, 2021 03:22 pm Title: Glasses

Aly, stop, this was adorable.

“He leans down and kisses her, because he can and that’s normal now too.”
MY LIL FLUFFY HEART EXPLODED

Reviewer: WanderingWatchtower Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 24, 2021 01:51 pm Title: Glasses

Um, hi. This is adorable. I love these little moments and I love how Jim still marvels at how he's able to just be with her after so long of only dreaming of it. Ugh. Cute.

Reviewer: Basscop69 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 28, 2021 04:30 am Title: It Felt Far

Oof, this was painful to read. And brilliantly written. I feel like this bit sums up so much of season 3 so well:

‘But then the awkward silence creeps in and they’re stuttering, and they’ve never had trouble just talking before. The past is now haunting him, the future terrifies him, and the right now feels suffocating.’

And then the ending is so bittersweet - poor Jim. This was so good!

Reviewer: BigTuna Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 26, 2021 08:11 pm Title: It Felt Far

Hi, I’d like the other eleven chapters immediately, thank you!

Reviewer: emxgoldstars Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21, 2021 07:34 pm Title: It Felt Far

UGH EVEN MORE ANGST!!!!!!!!!


But I love this angst! Please keep it going! I love this scene in the show, and how they slip back into their banter so easily, regardless of how hurt they both are.

You captured this scene perfectly!

Reviewer: emxgoldstars Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21, 2021 07:33 pm Title: Casino Night

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAND here's the angst!

But GREAT angst at that! Poor Jim...I always find myself saying that.

"he loves her a little more after tonight, because she doesn’t deserve anything less." ouch my heart!

Reviewer: emxgoldstars Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21, 2021 07:32 pm Title: Sleeping

MY. FEELS.

Alyssa, you're putting me in my feels!

Reviewer: emxgoldstars Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21, 2021 07:31 pm Title: Prank

UGHHHHHHHHHHHH! Aly! This banter is amazing!

Reviewer: emxgoldstars Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 21, 2021 07:30 pm Title: Hot Sauce

UGH Aly! I loved this! I love that we finally get to see these moments come to life! Cannot wait to read more!

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 14, 2021 03:51 pm Title: It Felt Far

This is just a very well-done Jim POV on this conversation.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 13, 2021 07:41 pm Title: It Felt Far

Oh if only Ryan hadn't come in when he did or if Pam had clarified things a bit more. You really got into the feelings of this one. Just for a moment they're them again. They laugh, they banter, it's fun. Of course it can't go any farther with everything still unsaid between them, but oh how we wish it could have. That's the feeling you captured really well with this one. Great job.

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 13, 2021 05:01 pm Title: It Felt Far

Poor Jim. Of course, I'm assuming that he'll still do all of S3 here...but this is very sweet.

Reviewer: grc73 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 13, 2021 03:33 pm Title: It Felt Far

This one made me happy and sad at the same time. Beautifully written though. :)

Reviewer: ThePinkButterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13, 2021 03:13 pm Title: It Felt Far

The chapter title was enough for me to hurt, and then I read the chapter. Ouchyyyyy. Jim’s cautious, self-regulating enthusiasm at Pam’s responses to the phone call and to him are just spot on. I honestly didn’t even make the connection of them having a hard time talking until I read this chapter (although that’s probably because I try to forget season 3 ever happened.) Team Halpert, aly! You crushed it.

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2021 07:58 pm Title: Casino Night

Ouch. I really like how you turned this into an increase in love, because of how it makes all of S3 that much angstier.

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2021 07:56 pm Title: Sleeping

Good treatment of a classic moment. I think you did it Justice which is hard!

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2021 07:56 pm Title: Prank

Even sweeter! I love Pam here. Jim's great too but this is such early season Pam. Wonderful.

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2021 07:55 pm Title: Hot Sauce

Aww. Love references to the teapot. This was so sweet!

Reviewer: WanderingWatchtower Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2021 02:43 pm Title: Casino Night

"Maybe it was all of this and every other thing she has done – pranks, lunches, drawings, breathing – within the last seven years that has him confessing to her."

Ughhh I love this. Sorry I have sucked at reviewing these, but please keep posting them. Hourly if possible. Thanks. Appreciate it.

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