Date: July 31, 2021 04:42 am Title: Fourteen years later...
Big time jump. Nice to see Cece and Phil. Eloise seems darling. Kinda hard to read about Jim and Pam like this. Big S9 feels that's for sure. I really hope something changes. I was about to wonder about Julia. But there she is. Karen insists she have her own room and stays the first week? Kinda sounds like Karen is living up to her name.
Like I said a little heartbreaking to see Jim and Pam like this, but good writing nonetheless.
Author's Response: thank you for the review and the compliment, I'm glad your enjoying the story so far. And yes, Karen is 1000% living up to her name.
1 [Report This]Date: July 23, 2021 04:21 pm Title: Stars
Oooooof. The scene of him looking through the photo album is a GUT PUNCH.
1 [Report This]Date: July 21, 2021 07:29 pm Title: Stars
First off, the photo artwork is gorgeous! Second, YES! I'm so here for a sequel!
Jim running off to Paris to find her? Hell. Yes! And for them to reunite? Even better!
1 [Report This]Date: July 21, 2021 01:15 am Title: Stars
Nice to get Jim's perspective on everything here. You really get the sense that he's had a rough go of it with the divorce and everything. He tried to get over both of them, but Jim being Jim, he just can't. He still has Julia to think about as well.
However this fills in a lot of the gaps as to his reaction when Pam shows up. For years he'd been suffocating. Finally she shows up and new life is breathed into both of them. Nice way to bring that about. Should be interesting to see where we go from here.
1 [Report This]Date: July 20, 2021 07:22 am Title: Stars
I was so happy to see this, what a great surprise! I loved five Years and was left wanting to know more about your Pam & Jim and how things would progress. You write so beautifully and describe their thoughts and emotions in a way that feels authentic to the characters. I like this couple you've created Nice to get Jim's POV about Pam's return. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: this review melted my heart! thank you so much for the compliment on my writing, and I'm glad that this fic was a "great surprise for you". hopefully you will continue to enjoy this story as it goes on!
1 [Report This]Date: July 20, 2021 06:38 am Title: Stars
Yay!
I’m so glad you decided to give us a sequel.
Why did Jim give Karen full credit custody of Julia? He’s a good dad, and that’s a separate issue from being in a loveless relationship.
I liked seeing things from Jim’s POV.
It showed his depression pretty well, and that
he and Pam really are two peas in a pod.
Please update soon.
Author's Response: i'm so happy you enjoyed it! You put it so well, Jim an Pam are two peas in a pod. I also wanted to let you know that Karen does not have sole custody of Julia, they have joint custody.