1 [Report This]Date: August 07, 2021 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 9
THAT ENDING! THAT KISS! Ugh!
1 [Report This]Date: August 07, 2021 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 28
Michael and Dwight WOULD ruin Jam’s date. Like, very canon they would do that.
JAPAN. JAPAN. JAPAN. JAPAN. TPB… HOT TUB SMUT?! UGH YOU HAVE KILLED ME. I am now deceased. You can have Lego House now, I’m dead-dead…
But seriously, you have SUCH a gift for writing, please NEVER STOP!
Author's Response:
*smirks proudly*
Date: August 07, 2021 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 12
“I would have blown my brains out if you hadn’t been there“ No, Pam. He wanted to BLOW YOUR BRAINS OUT!
Ugh I loved every second of this! I LOVE first-time Jam smut, and this is now probably joining my top 3! UGH their “I love you’s” at the END THOUGH! UGH MY HEART!
1 [Report This]Date: August 07, 2021 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 16
“C’mere,” JUST SHOOT ME ALREADY!!
This was utterly AMAZING, TPB! The “I want to taste you” was just *chef’s kiss* PERFECTION! What a great, smutty chapter of Jam on the third planet. LOVED IT!
1 [Report This]Date: August 07, 2021 12:01 am Title: Chapter 12
Now I think that's my favorite ending I've come across so far. And also probably where I'll end my explorations of this story for the night. Really a lot of fun to see them figure out where the signals came from and then for them to also figure out their feelings for each other.
Taking some time for just kisses while all the UN stuff was going on seemed smart. However once all that was done it was great to see them come together like that. Even more so with their confessions of love for each other. Just beautiful!
Date: August 06, 2021 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 11
Yay I found the source of the signals. And Jim and Pam are getting on well. Really like the descriptions of things like the sunset. Nice work.
Date: August 06, 2021 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 10
Time for more exploration. Still really enjoying this.
Date: August 06, 2021 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 4
Wow! So that's a trip! Nice use of canon lines too. Might have to back up a chapter or two and see what else there is to see here.
Author's Response: I honestly wasn't planning on using the dialogue from the show until I was halfway through writing the scene, and I realized it fit perfectly. Thanks for checking out the story!
Date: August 06, 2021 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 3
What would an Office story be without Jim and Pam pranking Dwight. Always great fun for sure.
1 [Report This]Date: August 06, 2021 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 9
Wow! So yeah, that was interesting to say the least. Really nice way for them to have a reunion. Though Michael walking in on them like that would have been a bit of a mood killer for sure. So that it for the first time through this. Feels like there's just so much more of course.
Date: August 06, 2021 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 8
Ok I really didn't expect that. To return so quickly. And now Jim and Pam are heading apart and we're not sure if Pam will be back. Only one way forward to find out.
Date: August 06, 2021 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 7
Nothing like some danger and excitement to forge some more bonds between the two of them. Still great fun.
1 [Report This]Date: August 05, 2021 08:49 am Title: Chapter 22
This is so incredible!! I obviously need to go back and do another adventure now, because this can’t be how it ends, but: the creativity here and the seamless blending of sci fi with stuff from the show is just amazing. And so is the way you’ve written Jim and Pam and their chemistry (I didn’t realise that could even be done for a choose your own adventure story). Michael and Dwight are also hilarious and so them - ‘stay fucking calm’ and Dwight bringing up that time Michael wore a woman’s space suit made me laugh out loud. I’ll be back off to chapter one: this is a masterpiece!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm honored that you checked out my little labor of love, and I hope you enjoy the other adventures!
1 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2021 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 9
The sadistic part of me wanted Michael to die. Lol. Aww, I was kinda hoping I'd still get to go on another adventure even if it was six months later. Guess I'll be re-exploring the other choices.
Author's Response: Haha I could never kill just Michael. He's my favorite. Thank you for reading!
Date: August 04, 2021 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 15
*They’re permanently written into the space between you, an unspoken poem punctuated with laughter and tears and touches that last just a little bit longer than either of you are expecting.
You hope the poem has two authors. But it might just have one.*
Okay girl, you KNOW I'm going to gravitate to the angstiest part. This was beautiful.
I'm having too much fun and now I have to go to bed. More tomorrow!
1 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2021 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh my god I died! (Michael flipping out was hilarious, btw)
This is so much fun, I'm gonna go pick something else. Jellybeans for the convo about God, which was *chef's kiss*
Author's Response: I'm glad you had fun even if you died. XD
Date: August 04, 2021 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 2
SAVE MICHAEL
Author's Response: This is my favorite review
1 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2021 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 5
Okay, I love how much Pam brings up the prairie dog research. Hahaha it's great, flirtatious banter that feels really true to character.
And so many great nods to canon! I'm loving this.
Author's Response: Haha thank you WW! I wasn't sure if the prairie dog research fit so I figured the best thing to do was have Pam make fun of it whenever she could haha. Glad you like the story!
1 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2021 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
First of all, Michael and Dwight? Spot on. Loved it.
Second of all, AHHHHHH!! I know how much you have put into this and I'm so incredibly excited to read through the different adventures.
Give me ALL the Space JAM.
1 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2021 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
I’m going to leave one massive review for now, and continue to come back and keep reviewing:
TPB THIS IS UTTERLY AMAZING! I’m so HAPPY you are finally able to present this to the world! I just love your hard work and dedication to this fic, and am in awe of how it came out! I can’t wait to continue reading and get new scenarios each time!
Author's Response: Thank you em! Your support has meant so much to me through all of this!
1 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2021 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 5
Still loving the JAM banter lots of great fun with that one. Sadly I'm going to have to step away from this for now. Not for lack of interest, but because it's bed time. Looking forward to more adventures soon.
Date: August 04, 2021 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 2
Loving all the little ways you're incorporating canon into this one. Jim and Pam seem to be hitting things off too. Their banter seems to be on par for everything. Really liking nerdy science chick Pam too.
1 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2021 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
This also feels like a combonation of the the start of the movies "Arrival" and "Contact" with a dash of "Intersteller" thrown in for good measure. Which is to say I'm 100% here for it. Love me some good sci-fi and this is shaping up nicely. As per directions, onto the next chapter.
Author's Response: I was totally inspired by Arrival in more ways than one, and I'm not ashamed to admit it!
1 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2021 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 20
I was getting real scared there for a moment with them running out of fuel and crashing and everything. But I just got some of the CUTEST and SWEETEST Jam moments ever, so my life is fulfilled. This is amazing, tpb.
1 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2021 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Interactive scifi! I'm stoked already cuz I know the writing is gonna be good.
I'd been missing you. Now I know why!
Author's Response: OMG this is such a kind review! <3