Reviews For Smoke Stacks
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Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2021 11:35 pm Title: Smoke Stacks

You know when I first read this one I thought of the more recent Michael Bay Transformer movies where Optimus dies but is then revived. Took me a minute to remember the earlier movie where, yeah Optimus dies. Deduct one nerd point from me. Anyway, nice of Jim and Pam to have a heart to heart here. Shows they have a good connection. Really good to read that.

Author's Response:

Appreciate it!

Yeah, there've been a lot of those movies so I completely understand the confusion LOL.  And writing the two just talking is always fun.

Thanks for the review! 

Reviewer: Basscop69 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 28, 2021 01:32 pm Title: Smoke Stacks

Aw, I loved this! Childhood Jim is very sweet, I love the way you’ve written their dialogue here and him reminiscing on this moment with Pam. And then Pam buying him a transformer! (Also lol at Dwight’s reaction and Michael crying at that movie too, presumably when he was quite a bit older than Jim…) And now I need to add All I Need and Temper to my reading list :D

Author's Response:

Thank you!  And appreciate your interest in All I Needed!

I really enjoyed writing just the two of them sharing one of those little moments of their childhoods.  The best part was that Michael was in his early 20s.  And that “worth more than your car” moment in “Women’s Appreciation” was perfect to allude to.  I also wanted the childhood story to be realistic to Pete (and subsequently Tom) so that they’re brothers rather than more intense Michaels.

Thanks for the review! 

Reviewer: tinydundie Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 26, 2021 08:32 pm Title: Smoke Stacks

This was very sweet (and you absolutely nailed Dwight).

Author's Response:

Dwight is such a treat to write.

Thanks for the review! 

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 25, 2021 05:50 am Title: Smoke Stacks

Okay, this backstory is simply adorable. And I love how good a read they've got on Dwight and Michael!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  Dwight and Michael aren't difficult reads, but the couple know them almost too well.

Thanks for the review! 

Reviewer: Merria Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 24, 2021 09:47 pm Title: Smoke Stacks

Lovely

Author's Response: Thank you!

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