Date: December 28, 2021 11:24 am Title: Banging Tunes and DJ Sets
I'm just really enjoying watching young Jim and Pam bond. I always enjoy a good callback to Michael's Birthday and their ability to make simple errands fun when they're together.
Date: December 28, 2021 08:05 am Title: Please Enjoy Your Party
This makes a little curious about what Canon Pam’s college experience was like - I see her facing some of the same challenges, but obviously without Jim there to help. Glad she had him around to help her through this...
Date: December 27, 2021 06:34 am Title: Cool It Off Before You Burn It Out
Ah, classic college fic. Very nice. Natural, organic, but still like there's a little bit of magic underlying it all.
1 [Report This]Date: December 26, 2021 02:33 pm Title: Cool It Off Before You Burn It Out
Jim, Pam and Greggs. What more could a girl want?
1 [Report This]Date: December 24, 2021 10:09 pm Title: ... Honey, Honey, How He Thrills Me
Really enjoying young, shy, clearly enamored Jim and Pam here. They're too cute!
Date: December 24, 2021 07:37 pm Title: ... Honey, Honey, How He Thrills Me
Still in love with the way their friendship is forming. Clearly they're both smitten with each other and it's a joy to read. Jim being kept up all night seems to true and all I gotta say is, poor guy. Maybe a nice set of noise cancelling headphones are in order.
Seems like he did a little cyber stalking of his own. Though with how they're reacting to each other it comes across as sweet. Lovely job keeping this one going. Can't wait to read more.
Date: December 23, 2021 08:36 pm Title: If Everybody Had An Ocean
Tons of fun with the text messaging. You've found a great voice for the Jim and Pam banter we know and love. Looks like Pam is just as smitten with him what with the Facebook stalking. Loved it. Also we're very blessed to get a double update on this one. Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you Warrior! Your reviews are ALWAYS much appreciated
1 [Report This]Date: December 23, 2021 06:09 pm Title: If Everybody Had An Ocean
Congratulations on posting not one but two chapters! Your description of their walk home was lovely. Their text exchange was cute.
I'm really glad your chapter title was resolved with your last line though I've never considered the UK a hot spot for that particular sport!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
surfing isn’t a massive hit in the uk but I definitely know quite a few people who people who go surfing.
There might even be a third chapter coming within 24 hours..
1 [Report This]Date: December 23, 2021 04:45 pm Title: If Everybody Had An Ocean
I love Pam’s Facebook stalking here. But now I have that song stuck in my head. Must stop thinking about an 18 year old Jim
Author's Response: You are welcome ;)
1 [Report This]Date: December 23, 2021 04:42 pm Title: Sometimes I Get Nervous
This is so cute. I’m so glad they found each other. I love that Creed has made an appearance, it suits him totally.
1 [Report This]Date: December 23, 2021 04:02 pm Title: If Everybody Had An Ocean
It is now officially a crime we never saw Pam cyberstalk Jim. I don't make the rules.
Author's Response: Hahahaha this made me chuckle!
1 [Report This]Date: December 23, 2021 04:00 pm Title: Sometimes I Get Nervous
This was some real nice Jim and Pam banter here!
Date: December 23, 2021 01:58 pm Title: Sometimes I Get Nervous
Super cute. Glad to know Jim didn't just leave her there. Loved the image of him walking her home and that he already thinks so much of her. The goodnight outside her door was a treat as well. Glad to see an update for this one.
1 [Report This]Date: December 06, 2021 10:32 am Title: How Can I Resist You?
Oh Jim, where have you gone?! And what was the blue drink?? Love that you have the dork in there already. Looking forward to more of this story!
Date: December 06, 2021 10:28 am Title: Aw, man, I shot Marvin in the face
I always love a college AU for Jim and Pam but excited for this to be a Uni AU! I’m really hoping there’s going to be lots of freshers fun!
1 [Report This]Date: November 26, 2021 11:18 pm Title: How Can I Resist You?
Oh yes I love a good college AU! Love it already!
Date: November 22, 2021 05:14 am Title: How Can I Resist You?
Cute way for Jim and Pam to meet up like this. Things seem to be going really well too. They're joking with each other, dancing, calling each other dorks. Yet where did he go? Hope we won't have to wait to long to find out cause I'm really curious about that. Nice job with this one.
1 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2021 07:13 pm Title: How Can I Resist You?
"His eyes remind her of travelling to Scotland with her family in the summer before high school - too old to be believing in the Loch Ness monster, but too young to let it go." I love this line.
Love a good Abba reference. And don't worry, Pam. Something tells me you might just run into this Jim character in his Pulp Fiction shirt again...
If unrequited love doesn't end up producing good writing, what on Earth is the point of it even? Might as well take advantage of it.
1 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2021 02:38 pm Title: Aw, man, I shot Marvin in the face
Okay, I must know the story behind Jim’s shirt. Very intrigued 😂 Welcome to MTT!
1 [Report This]Date: October 01, 2021 04:46 am Title: Aw, man, I shot Marvin in the face
This sounds like fun. Pam as a fish out of water rooming with Kelly and Angela. Now Jim (hopefully) shows up. Nice set up for things going forward.
Welcome to writing. Glad to have you here as a writer as well. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, Warrior!
I thought I could have fun with the contrast of Pam, Kelly and Angela!!
Everyone on this site are so blooming lovely, thank you for being so welcoming for a fanfic newbie :)
1 [Report This]Date: October 01, 2021 04:13 am Title: Aw, man, I shot Marvin in the face
First off welcome to writing here - big step always making that first post so bravo.
With the title a line right out of Iris, I take it we are in for some angst and a little bumpy ride and I'm here for that. I do like how you took the lyric from the title and matched it with the idea of the chapter title and Jim's tee shirt. Jim's a little PF fan huh?
The opening lines were strong and you had a good set-up here.
As one who went to university (in US) years ago you brought me back to thinking on those first days. As one who also spent a semester of school at a British Polytechnic in Nottingham, you also brought me back to the nightclub scene.
As a huge Jam fan, I smiled at their first meeting and looking forward to where you go with them and seeing about this movie theme?
Good job and welcome again.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
The title is a line out of Iris - I have some ideas which will link all these themes together, this will be shown in a chapter or two. I'm really influenced by film and music - both my passions in life so thought it's best to write about what I love.
University's in the UK are MESSY. The night life has shook me to my core as someone who isn't particularly a party go-er!
So glad you enjoyed their first reaction :) Once again, as a fan of film a good old meet cute warms my heart!!
Date: October 01, 2021 02:26 am Title: Aw, man, I shot Marvin in the face
Another Brit then! Always nice to have one of our own. This pleased me as I went to the “other” Uni in Bristol albeit rather a long time ago. So I hope we’re going to have some recognisable Brissle landmarks in this story!
Well done for posting, the first one on a new site always a bit nerve-wracking.
Author's Response:
I thought this site needed to be 'Britified' a little ;)
I've been to Bristol a couple of times and absolutely loved it, will definitely add in some Bristol landmarks just for you!!
I go to a Uni further south of Bristol in a pretty boring city, Bristol is a lot more recognisable and so I can play with the beautiful area.
Thank you so much :)
Date: September 30, 2021 07:55 pm Title: Aw, man, I shot Marvin in the face
Congratulations on your first!
Two things I loved.
"I really want my mum."
Uma Thurman's eyes (and boobs) on a tshirt. You will most definitely need to explain how he came by that shirt.
Good onya
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, Once!!
So glad you loved those two, I chuckled to myself as I wrote them. Uma Thurman's eyes (and boobs) will be explored in the next one :)
1 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2021 05:24 pm Title: Aw, man, I shot Marvin in the face
I thought the idea of Pam, who we know is not that confident, being deeply homesick on that scary first day was a good character note. And I *adore* this vision of freshman Kelly as the self-appointed social chair... I really enjoy a good Pam-Kelly friendship, so I'm interested in seeing where you go with that... and in seeing the rest of her and Jim's first meeting!
Congrats on your first story here! We're glad to have you among the ranks of MTT writers, and I'm looking forward to reading where you take this one! Always like a good college AU...
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading! I also love a college AU. When I was thinking about what kind of story I should write I knew it was a no brainer!!
Kind of pulling from a personal experience with the homesick element and will definitely continue writing what I know - maybe I'm using this as a form of therapy??
It won't be too much of a wait for the rest of their interaction, I am working on it as we speak :)