Date: October 27, 2023 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOVE this story.Please come back sooooooon!
Date: September 02, 2023 05:31 am Title: Chapter 5
Omg this story is great! Can’t wait for the next update d84;a039;
Date: March 22, 2023 11:10 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh I was so happy to see this was updated!
"She nodded and waved and tried very hard to not think too much about how top you sounded in Jim’s low, rich voice." I am dead.
"Penny got called to the stage then and wouldn’t you know it, she stumbled a little on the sticky bar floor and fell against Pam, who lurched forward and had to clutch Jim’s dark denim clad thigh in order to steady herself." Rent free. Rent free in my mind.
"Because didn’t she have a fancy new life, too? Maybe not quite as impressive as Jim’s, but she’d had the same ten years to grow into a version of herself that had always existed, just tucked underneath cardigans and nylons." Okay, I absolutely love this version of Pam and it's so easy to envision the Pam we see in the show (especially in the early seasons) becoming this more confident, older version of herself away from Jim.
I'LL. REMIND. YOU?! Ughhhhhhhhh you're a freaking murderer, BT.
I loved this so, so much. The sexual tension was off the charts and written in the best way. I also loved what the skepticism from SK brought to it all. A little turmoil amongst all the hotness.
BT, I missed you. Please don't take too long with next chapter! Let's be honest, I'd probably read your shopping list and ask for a next chapter of it, but I have really been loving this one.
Date: March 21, 2023 09:03 am Title: Chapter 5
You've really captured the sheer mind-fried horniness of Pam confronted with Jim in all his glory in the beginning here, with just the right amount of hints that a third-party observer could see his eyes are popping out of his head too.
"and quite possibly fabric softener" My heart.
"(but not too close, as the probability of that whole lap straddling thing increased as the distance between them decreased)" my sides, from the chuckling
Again, the use of twitterpated here is amazing. As is this whole interaction. “But I’m not complaining if you aren’t.”
I love Pam seeing Jim in a different light... both as someone who's changed and as someone who was always a little different than she got to see for herself. And how she grasps that something similar has happened for her.
"He secretly wants me." "Can't say I blame him." Tuna. Are you kidding me.
"Just catching up and clearing the air and maybe some mutual orgasms." BEESLY.
Four Non Blondes is an inspired song choice. And feels perfectly in character somehow. Also, this part: "She realized that she desperately wanted Jim to have fun, wanted him to have a good response from her friends and the rest of the bar, and she felt her stomach twist in anticipation." A very Pam sentence and also just such an emotionally clear thread from who she is now to who she was and what they are to each other now to what they were then.
"She caught herself before she could ask what other articles of clothing he’d be responsible for knocking off before the night was over." Probably for the best. Even 10 Years Later Jim probably isn't surviving that.
THE PARKING LOT. THE CASINO NIGHT DIALOGUE. *I* AM MIND FRIED.
If you don't update for another year and a half there will be riots. I don't make the rules.
Date: March 21, 2023 07:44 am Title: Chapter 1
Rereading this in prep for Chapter Five, and since my original review is lost, I feel the need to again flag the brilliance of this line: "Nothing. Why would you say that? I’m not being weird. How am I weird?"
Date: March 19, 2023 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 5
Holy hell that was intense! I mean the hell with a knife, you'd need a chainsaw to even come close to cutting through all that sexual tension. Not that many would want to try that is. The fact they're both humming so perfectly in tune with each other, flirting like that, it's amazing to read into. Then Jim saying he drove all the way back up just to be with her and then that kiss and lines from canon? For the love of all things JAM please to not keep us waiting! Outstanding chapter!
Date: March 17, 2023 10:06 am Title: Chapter 5
Ive told you this countless times but I’ll tell you again. I love this story. The end with the casino night moment kills me. And Penny tripping onto Pam to make her get closer to Jim. Ugh.
You better not leave us hanging for that long again. Please update asap as possible.
Date: March 14, 2023 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 5
Please, please don't take another year to update this story ... it is awesome!!
Date: March 14, 2023 01:32 am Title: Chapter 5
It’s SO GOOD please please please keep going
Date: March 13, 2023 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ahh you’re back! This story is back! Couldn’t be happier! I love how you write Jim and Pam. They are different people now, but you manage to capture their essence. I love the whole dialogue at the parking lot in the end. I need more! Maybe next week? ;)
Date: March 13, 2023 09:33 am Title: Chapter 5
Pls no.....( Re: waiting another yr for an update) 😭
Date: March 12, 2023 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
VERY interesting direction and way of telling the story. Can’t wait to see where this goes!
Date: March 12, 2023 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
I positively squealed with happiness when I saw the update. This is one of several unfinished stories that have never left me and seeing a new chapter gives me hope for other surprises.
You really delivered with this update. The tension between Jim & Pam builds deliciously. It's great that, at least for now, they're on the same page.
Still concerned about "heartbreaker", 'playboy" Jim's story the last 10 years. Also, now SK has me wondering about the pool story too. Jim could've gotten her info if he had really wanted to.
Be careful Pam!
Date: March 12, 2023 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 5
Keep calm... this amazing story is updated!!! To answer your question, you COULD not post for another year and a half because now Jim and Pam have kissed and acknowledged the crazy sexual tension between them and are now spending the night together so they could very well live happier ever after... but I do hope you post again because this was SO WORTH THE WAIT!
I'm just so blown away by how you can write this palpable sexual between Jim and Pam... how it builds and then gets interrupted... Thank God for Penny! She's definitely pushing for Pam to reconnect with Jim and I love it. I love that Pam is loving this roller coaster of emotions too!
Rolando in this story is just perfection. I love his song choice, and his clear message to Pam. But what is SK's deal? It seems more to me than a concerned friend. It also seems that as much as Pam kinda seems convinced that she's just gonna make this about a few orgasms, that's just probably not going to happen...
I loved your flirty texting with Jim and Pam making eye contact in the same room--so believable and also a little bit less intense way to broach some tough topics, like what was going on while Jim was in the bathroom. And it also allows them both to be a little bit flirtatious too...
Great callback to 27 seconds in 27 Dresses and yes, that was such a great scene where they sang Benny and the Jets at the bar in the rain! But the parking lot was fantastic. Jim being super sweet and holding his hand out to Pam, both of them feeling each other out about where the other thinks this night is inevitably going, and when it's so sweetly confirmed--that KISS! Well, Jim, you have no idea how long we've been waiting for that to happen too! Ugh, this is excellent. Please continue! It's sweet and sexy and funny and just so well written!
Date: March 12, 2023 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 5
“I’ll remind you.”
I’m sorry, but what gives you the right? But also, thank God you are writing again. I literally gasped.
Seriously, this encounter was everything and I knew you would kill me with the perfection of it. Please give us more.
Date: March 12, 2023 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 5
For some reason I hadn’t read this before, so obviously I’ve had to read all 5 chapters in one go, and jeez this is good. Please please don’t leave it a year and a half to update. I neeeeed this Jim in my life
Date: November 07, 2022 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 4
Pleeeeease tell me you’re still writing this!!! The sexual tension is soooo palpable— and what’s the deal with Sarah Kaya? I don’t love her meddling. But clearly Jim and Pam are still attracted to each other, and now that it’s out that Pam wanted him to know she called off the wedding and that Jim didn’t block her number, what will happen now that they’ve had some alcohol and are lusting after each other? I can also never, ever fall for a beardy Jim Halpert… can’t wait to see this one continue! And I adore the sassy commentary of Pam’s friends! Great AU!
Date: November 07, 2022 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 4
Pleeeeease tell me you’re still writing this!!! The sexual tension is soooo palpable— and what’s the deal with Sarah Kaya? I don’t love her meddling. But clearly Jim and Pam are still attracted to each other, and now that it’s out that Pam wanted him to know she called off the wedding and that Jim didn’t block her number, what will happen now that they’ve had some alcohol and are lusting after each other? I can also never, ever fall for a beardy Jim Halpert… can’t wait to see this one continue! And I adore the sassy commentary of Pam’s friends! Great AU!
Date: February 19, 2022 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
I can’t wait for an update on this one. I have a feeling it’s gonna be fire! I love grown up Jim and Pam reconnecting.
Date: November 19, 2021 10:04 am Title: Chapter 4
This is a fantastic story, and I'm gripped!!! Desperate to hear what happens next... (that isn't me trying to bully you into a quick update or anything, because that would not be kind. However, a quick update would certainly be very welcome :o]
Date: November 17, 2021 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 4
Wow! I can feel the sexual tension between Jim and Pam through my phone screen and they've barely even touched. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: November 17, 2021 07:21 am Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter full of tension of the sexual & conversational varieties. It's a good thing SK brought up the text. Pam & Jim would've avoided the "why didn't I ever hear from you again" discussion for ages. I'm still a bit nervous about "Playboy Jim" & his backstory causing issues.
I am also concerned about SK. Her reactions seem to possibly go beyond being protective of Pam. Even Pam's reaction to SK saying ok, invite Jim makes me nervous, "Pam felt a simultaneous lifting and falling of her heart. She didn’t really know what that meant..." Does she want more from SK?
Still such an obvious connection between Pam & Jim, their finding their way back to each other is always the end game I'm pulling for.
Can't wait to see how it all plays out. The chemistry is still there but they live on opposite sides of the country & Pam seems very content with her life.
Date: November 16, 2021 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 4
I’m with Penny, that *was* like watching porn. Dayum. Can’t wait for the next installment!
Date: November 16, 2021 09:50 am Title: Chapter 4
So despite ten years, the feelings are still there. Lots of fun to see how Pam reacted to Jim being there. Same with Jim. He seems to be just as magnetically draw to Pam as she his what with all the hand holding, hand on her back, and knee touches that is. SK's reaction is interesting to be sure. I get she's the voice of pessimistic reason. However as you've said she and Pam have history. Maybe some jealously creeping in considering how Pam's reacting to Jim.
Finally the truth comes out about that text from so long ago. So in that regard it's nice that SK is there to cut through the usual dance around hard topics route Jim and Pam usually take. Great job as always.
Date: November 16, 2021 12:35 am Title: Chapter 4
The last part of that chapter? I'm with Pam's friends on that. I felt like I needed a cigarette and I don't even smoke. Wowsers.