1 [Report This]Date: April 04, 2022 05:21 pm Title: Like Clockwork
So curious about this one, this opening is so strong — any chance you’ll write more soon? Hope so!
Author's Response: Despite what it looks like I haven’t completely abandoned this story. I’ll work on another chapter soon, just for you :) if there’s not an update by September I owe you a bag of real jelly beans
1 [Report This]Date: February 09, 2022 02:43 pm Title: Like Clockwork
Yes! Cannot wait to read the rest of this!
Author's Response: Soon!!
1 [Report This]Date: January 06, 2022 12:12 am Title: Like Clockwork
Really good introduction. I love your writing style. Feel like this is teeing up something big and I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! More coming soon
1 [Report This]Date: January 05, 2022 02:32 pm Title: Like Clockwork
Ooooh, I liked this intro a lot. Very good details, very effective building of the hyper-aware, hyper-stressful environment she’s living in. Looking forward to seeing where you go with it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: January 04, 2022 04:32 pm Title: Like Clockwork
Thanks for your response to my review.
When you mentioned the trigger warning for abuse I had a feeling it was Roy, but the mention of Austin just threw me off. It makes much more sense now. I look forward to seeing where you take it. 🙂
Author's Response: All shall be revealed soon.. maybe.. it'll be when it will be :)
1 [Report This]Date: January 04, 2022 03:29 pm Title: Like Clockwork
So that's a powerful set up to be sure. Pam keeping track of every minute, everything has to be just so. Makes me wonder what happened to her that she has to keep track of things like that? There's a feeling of dread here and based on the characters you have listed I have a feeling who it is she's thinking about right now.
Guess we'll see as this story progresses. Good job on an intro for sure.
Author's Response: Thank you warrior. I really neglected this fic for a second but mrsk is making sure I bring it back, watch this space..
Date: January 04, 2022 02:37 pm Title: Like Clockwork
So Pam is with Jim in this story, and she’s
going to leave him?
I’m sorry but this is a bit confusing.
You mentioned Austin at the end of the story,
but the story summary said that the character was Roy.
Author's Response: Oh no! I’m sorry it’s confusing, she’s with Roy at the moment. I’ll try make it clearer in the next chapter. Thank you for letting me know :)