Reviews For Cupid's Sparrow
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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07, 2022 10:36 am Title: Ryan Howard

The idea that Ryan and Kelly are the result of a cosmic error is amazing. "Don't drink and matchmake" indeed. And I love Cupid being stuck on Ryan going blonde.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07, 2022 09:50 am Title: Ryan Howard

Very interesting take on Ryan. Almost like he got sucked into the whirlpool that is Kelly and was never able to get out of it. I also liked the addition of the other Greek and Roman gods. Does this mean that Aphrodite gets the party on Feb 13 and Venus gets the party on Feb 14? Still a good look into Ryan's character when it would be really easy to write him as a caricature.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07, 2022 09:46 am Title: Stanley Hudson

This is a perfect description of Stanley. How he's stubborn enough to keep all those relationships on the hooks. Also feels like you gave us a good reason why Stanley hightailed it down to Florida.

Reviewer: emxgoldstars Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2022 06:48 pm Title: Stanley Hudson

Stanley is a mess. Cupid really had his work cut out for him.

"...but thanks to the wildcard that is Michael Gary Scott, Teri most definitely found out." - At least Cupid acknowledges that Michael meddles in his work!

I loved this!

Reviewer: nicemorningtoo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2022 01:10 pm Title: Stanley Hudson

I lovedddd this chapter hahahah poor cupid. Stanley doesnt even know the pain he’s put him through lol

Reviewer: ThePinkButterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2022 11:06 am Title: Stanley Hudson

*And you know, I think maybe Florida was Stanley's true love all along.

Whatever.*

HAHAHAHA.

Reviewer: emxgoldstars Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2022 11:05 am Title: Phyllis Lapin Vance

“…years later they are still finding a plethora of ways to disgust those around them…” I mean, isn’t that the goal?

Lol bring on the PDA 😂 Does that mean Michael’s next?!

Reviewer: emxgoldstars Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2022 11:04 am Title: Creed Bratton

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA YES 😂😂😂

Reviewer: emxgoldstars Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2022 11:04 am Title: Oscar Martinez

I love his brother’s response, lol!

Aw, I wish Eric would have worked out for Oscar, that sounded sweet and it would have been nice if he had his partner hidden while working at DM (not like he didn’t already with Gil)

“ Two people may have received it due to their workplace proximity. But I'll get to that later.” Please do, I can’t WAIT to hear that story!

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2022 09:26 am Title: Stanley Hudson

Teri, Cynthia and Lydia forming a book club together is EVERYTHING. As is Teri being misled by Stanley actually apologizing because he knew he was wrong.

"Florida was Stanley's true love all along." 100% correct.

Reviewer: Once Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2022 02:13 am Title: Phyllis Lapin Vance

This is wonderfully inventive, insightful, astute, and funny.
Good onya!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05, 2022 06:35 pm Title: Phyllis Lapin Vance

I like this one. Short and to the point but with a lot of meaning. Reading between the lines it seems like there were some struggles for both Phyllis and Bob along the way. However now that they've found each other, why worry about anything else? Nice work.

Reviewer: nicemorningtoo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05, 2022 03:09 pm Title: Phyllis Lapin Vance

The most traumatizing and yet one of the iconic couples of the show. Honestly, not surprised Cupid could only tell their tale when it came to Phyllis’s love story. However, Im gonna have to disagree on the whole “bring on the PDA.” I loved this!!

Reviewer: nicemorningtoo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05, 2022 12:13 pm Title: Phyllis Lapin Vance

The most traumatizing and yet one of the iconic couples of the show. Honestly, not surprised Cupid could only tell their tale when it came to Phyllis’s love story. However, Im gonna have to disagree on the whole “bring on the PDA.” I loved this!!

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05, 2022 09:59 am Title: Phyllis Lapin Vance

I think this is a nice way to capture how we all feel about Phyllis and Bob Vance (Vance Refrigeration). A beautiful thing you just... don't want to look at anymore.

Reviewer: grc73 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 04, 2022 03:27 pm Title: Creed Bratton

Hahahahahaha 🤣

Reviewer: tinydundie Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 04, 2022 02:43 pm Title: Creed Bratton

😆😆😆

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 04, 2022 11:17 am Title: Creed Bratton

HA! Genius! When I saw who this chapter was about and how short it was? Bravo!

Reviewer: ThePinkButterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04, 2022 10:47 am Title: Creed Bratton

Yeah, I’m not sure I want to know about everything that happened in the mud and the rain. Thanks for sparing me.

Reviewer: nicemorningtoo Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 04, 2022 10:44 am Title: Creed Bratton

HAHA! Im dead. This chapter deserves a dundie on its own.

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04, 2022 10:19 am Title: Creed Bratton

Rude.

Reviewer: Invisiblecynic Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 03, 2022 07:16 pm Title: An Introduction

This is a Cupid that I'd love to have drinks with, maybe slip a sparrow or two in my pocket.

The way you slip canon in, fill in their backstories, tug at the heartstrings and make it all hilarious is brilliant.

Reviewer: ThePinkButterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03, 2022 01:39 pm Title: Oscar Martinez

You've heard me say this before, but I can't get over how funny you are.

*For a man who loves facts so much, it really took him a while to embrace the fact that he was attracted to men.*

Dying.

You introduced the Oscar/Angela/senator love triangle in such a clever way, and I'm so excited to read Angela's chapter now.

Reviewer: grc73 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03, 2022 12:28 pm Title: Oscar Martinez

Sheer brilliance!

Reviewer: nicemorningtoo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03, 2022 12:17 pm Title: Oscar Martinez

“For a man who loves facts so much, it really took him a while to embrace the fact that he was attracted to men.” I died.
-5 points for not including an *actually* somewhere in there but +100 points for the setup to the story about the senator. Freaking genius.

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