1 [Report This]Date: March 05, 2023 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 10
EXCELLENT ending and fabulous world created! b29;a039;
1 [Report This]Date: March 05, 2023 08:07 am Title: Chapter 7
Mmmmmmm…. Some smoky Pam and Jim sex to start the day… nice 🥰
1 [Report This]Date: March 05, 2023 07:56 am Title: Chapter 3
Enjoying this. So much more real and I genuinely feel that is exactly how it went for Pam, the weekend of thought and breaking up, that was always a ‘dumb Jim’ event when he did not give her the time she needed to process.
Date: March 09, 2022 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 10
Sweet way to put a cap on this one. And I absolutely buy that domesticity and commitment are a turn on for Pam.
1 [Report This]Date: March 09, 2022 10:31 am Title: Chapter 10
Ahh glad it all worked out for them in Stamford!
Omg Dwight and Isobel 🤣
Cute, and smutty, ending to this one, nice job :)
Author's Response: Thank you! 😄
1 [Report This]Date: March 09, 2022 07:29 am Title: Chapter 10
Nice fluffy way to end this one. Great to see them blossoming into what looks like a great couple. Just goes to show that when you say screw it to the fear and doubt amazing things can happen. Good job!
Fortes Fortuna Adiuvat
(Fortune Favors the Bold)
Author's Response: Well said! Thank you!
1 [Report This]Date: February 23, 2022 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 8
WHat I loved about this story (not sure if it is done since it is not marked complete) was it was as much about Pam finding herself and following her own dream as it was coming together with Jim.
Great job bring about both with your storytelling.
OH and welcome to MTT!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I’ve received a warm welcome here. I’ve admired all of your work for a while. 😊
Date: February 22, 2022 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 9
Very nice
Author's Response: Thank you!
1 [Report This]Date: February 19, 2022 07:49 am Title: Chapter 1
Really enjoyed this!! Also loved how I didn't have to wait for updates and could read it all in one go :) Welcome to MTT and congrats on your first story. Look forward to future stuff if you decide to write more!! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I’m looking forward to your updates on “Beloning” 😊
1 [Report This]Date: February 18, 2022 11:56 am Title: Chapter 9
Congrats on your first story here. Great bit of smut :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I really enjoyed reading your story as well! 😁
1 [Report This]Date: February 17, 2022 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 9
This fic was such a great take on post-Casino Night! I really liked the lead up to Pam’s break up with Roy, how you took us on this mental journey with her. I thought you also conveyed Pam’s utter heartbreak at seeing Jim’s empty desk really well. And, of course, it’s great to see Jim and Pam together without any of season 3 in the way. Great job with this fic! I’m looking forward to more from you.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I’m glad you enjoyed it!
Date: February 17, 2022 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 9
Figured they wouldn't be able to keep their hands off each other for very long once he got back in town. Quick point of order, the BBQ where she looked at his yearbook was less than a year ago in the run of the show compared with Casino Night and the immediate aftermath. Just something that caught my eye.
Looking forward to further updates.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all of your positive feedback! It’s greatly appreciated.
Date: February 17, 2022 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 8
In for a penny in for a pound it seems. If she's already in the midst of huge life changes, what's another one to be nearer to Jim? I like it. Not only because it gets Jim and Pam together, but she's also building a life for herself. I really like that.
Date: February 17, 2022 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 7
Very hot. Again, great description of everything. Very easy to see how well they connect like this. The feelings they've kept inside for so long just add to everything when they're finally completely together.
Date: February 17, 2022 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 6
Get it Pam! Yup, figured she wouldn't let this chance get away from her. Not the way she's been keyed up all weekend really. Delightfully descriptive as they get going on the couch. Nice work.
Date: February 17, 2022 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 5
Lovely way for them to start to reconnect. How they admitted they made some rash choices on Casino Night, but now that they're finally being honest with each other it's all going great.
Pam being so attuned to his touch and all the sparks flying is also wonderful to read.
1 [Report This]Date: February 17, 2022 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 4
Yeah that's about what I figured Jim would do. Get out of town as quick as he could. However here comes Fancy New Beesly with the courage to start talking to him about everything. LOVE IT! Then again I always live a good "Pam finds her courage early," story so there's that.
You can hear the anxiety in Jim's voice at first, followed by the relief and joy when he realizes what she's saying.
Pam's thoughts about how things might go in the hotel room are great to read too. Looking forward to seeing where we go now.
1 [Report This]Date: February 17, 2022 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 3
Feels like a chapter for Pam to get back on her feet for sure. I like it. That Izzy is already looking at Dwight tracks pretty well too. The one thing I wonder about is Pam's plan for the card on Monday. I just hope Jim hasn't skipped town for Stamford already. And if he has what her plan will be then.
Date: February 17, 2022 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 2
Well, the breakup was at the same time easier and harder that I might have figured. Roy stop hanging out with your brother. Nothing good has ever come from that. Not that it would have helped matters considering that Pam's mind was already made up. Still really glad she stood her ground. Especially in the face of Roy's unfaithfulness.
Always love it when Izzy comes in as the supportive friend who's also a great voice of reason. Really glad Pam's got someone like her to help her out right now.
1 [Report This]Date: February 17, 2022 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Welcome to writing on MTT! Always great to have a new writer her.
Loved this insight to Pam. How the veil is finally pulled away and that she's finally ready to admit everything she's been feeling for Jim. Not only that but also realizing the relationship she doesn't have with Roy. He won't reciprocate her affection, is gone more often than not, leaves all the wedding planning to her, and seems to basically be using her as his live in maid while he hangs out with his brother and buddies.
I also liked the fact Pam has been using Jim's fabric softener for a while. Something Roy wouldn't care about, but it means something to her.
1 [Report This]Date: February 16, 2022 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Saw this posted all in one batch, so read the first chapter, got hooked on the excellent writing and read all of the 9 chapters having my morning tea!
I really like the start of this, this is definitely a “putting CN right” but there’s a clarity and vigour about how you set our this chapter that I really liked. Great start.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words! I’m glad you enjoyed it!
Date: February 16, 2022 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 9
I love this little taste of domestic JAM here. Those two kids really have been together in all but name for a long time...
Congrats on your first MTT story! Looking forward to seeing what more you have for us! (Just make sure not to leave your cheesy pita in the toaster.)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I’ve admired everyone’s work here for a while. So happy to see you enjoyed my story!
Date: February 16, 2022 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 8
"Are you saying last night was... geriatric?" LOL.
*sigh* Jim's sudden closeness to NYC does feel like it would have opened up a lot of opportunities for Pam. *grumbles more*
Author's Response: Yes!!!
Date: February 16, 2022 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 7
EEEEP.
Date: February 16, 2022 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 6
"After all these years of watching each other from across the room she has full access to him and she's not going to waste it tonight." *Kevin voice* Nice
Author's Response: The Kevin voice made me laugh out loud. 😊