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Reviewer: MrsKHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07, 2023 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 29

Yay you’re back! Loved this. So sweet Helene and Holly discussing how Jim is the key. And Michael buying the painting!
Im not sure how I feel about your end note there 😬

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2023 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 28

I love how excited Jim is for her. The first thing he can say is this thing that's so important to her. Yes, she's hesitant, bit it doesn't feel like she's as scared as she might have been prior to meeting Jim. Nice touch with her adding her signature. She has the confidence to take ownership of what she creates. Lovely detail there.

Author's Response: That you so much, I appreciate it!

Reviewer: Receptionitis15 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03, 2023 05:02 am Title: Chapter 28

Yay! So glad she is doing the art show. Their pinky promise was so cute as well.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: MrsKHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2023 11:23 am Title: Chapter 28

Yay you’re back! I’m excited for the art show, but I’m bracing myself for a world full of angst 😭😭

Author's Response: Aw thank you!! Don’t worry too much, although I would brace yourself a little 😂 

Reviewer: AmeliaHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2023 06:45 am Title: Chapter 28

My squee of excitement that this got an update is only overshadowed by twinge of gut worry that the art show will be hard or Jim’s parents won’t bring him….. fingers crossed our little sweeties are okay!

Author's Response: Awww so glad! Don’t worry, it all works out!

Reviewer: WithaY Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2023 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 21

I love Dwight. He’s just so sweet in this!! And perceptive! It’s so Dwight to distract Karen with beet stories too! And Betsy… love Betsy so much! She is parenting Jim so well! I love Pam’s courage and Jim’s return to the right thing and Dwight’s perception… this is so good. And also a nice explanation about Karen that she’s not just a bad person. Love!

Author's Response: Aw thank you! Felt Karen had more to her!

Reviewer: WithaY Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2023 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 20

Oh what a darling chapter! Even though Jim sat on the bus with Karen and Pam sat alone, it was still wonderful to see how in awe Pam was at the art museum! I hope Helene is as impressed with how far Pam’s come as much as I am! Love this so much!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, so glad!

Reviewer: WithaY Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2023 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 19

As always, such great insight! Of course it’s easier to read Sharpie (Karen).. but is it as meaningful or fun as invisible ink (Pam)? Love that Jim didn’t forget though… of course he wouldn’t! How sweet that Jim have Pam the hair clip— and what a profound realization that her hair being pulled ba k allowed her to own up more too! Hope she starts to wear it more again— we love that Pam! Such a good chapter!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Love playing with symbolism!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2023 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 27

Awww, this is so sweet. Pam being able to let her creativity flow like this is adorable. She's also letting go of some anxieties too. I get the sense that had she tried something similar prior to meeting Jim she would have been hung up with staying inside the lines. Had even one brush stroke gone awry she would be been beating herself up. Now however with the bits of confidence she's getting, she's finding it's okay to have some flaws and defects. She doesn't have to be perfect. She can be beautiful in the ordinary. Mayhaps that will be the key to banishing that Keeper of Words from her while out of the house.

Jim being excited for Pam, especially about her art, is always a wonderful thing. He gets so enraptured that he has this special little window into her mind and he can't help but keep looking in. Delightful.

Author's Response: I’m so glad you enjoy it! Somehow you always seem to have more insight into my story than I do! 

Reviewer: MrsKHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2023 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 27

I love how excited Jim is here! And Pam painting the swings! 😍

Author's Response: Aw thank you so much! I’m glad you were able to tell it was swings… was a little nervous able out that!

Reviewer: AmeliaHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2023 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 27

Raspberry...you make me long for my watercolor supplies, long gone from me now...you managed to capture how entrancing it is to let the colors flow on to the paper and how easy it is once the paper isn't stark white anymore. I cannot wait to see where Jim and Pam go with the art show ...SOOO much love for them!

Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! Watercolors is so relaxing, you should certainly pull them out again! I think your going to enjoy the art show… there is a lot planned!

Reviewer: Receptionitis15 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24, 2023 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 26

Yay! Little Pam progress! I like 'the reception of her busy mind' nice link. I love the pace of Pam's progress as its not a sudden 'oh she's all better' but a realistic journey of her learning to cope.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Hoping to make it realistic!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24, 2023 06:22 am Title: Chapter 26

Loved the use of the speed limit metaphor to start out with. I've often found people having anxiety issues to say they feel like their thoughts are racing ahead at 10,000,000,000 miles an hour which only makes their anxiety worse. For Pam to have Jim stand up for her like this and bring her thoughts to down to a normal speed was a great way to picture things. Same with the lifeboat image. The thing about a lifeboat is that yes, it can still be tossed around by wind and wave, but it can set its own coarse and move on its own to safety by its own oars or or motor. It's a chance for self rescue that's a much better chance than hanging on to a life ring or piece of debris. That lighthouse I talked about a while back feels like its getting bigger on the horizon.

Jim's view of chances is refreshing too. Feels like an extension of him telling Pam she needs to take a chance on something sometime from canon. Goes over better here too.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I always look forward to your thoughtful comments! Thank you!!

Reviewer: MrsKHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2023 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 26

Definitely still enjoying your wonderful story! You write it so beautifully. Don’t apologise for any mistakes! But if you do want a beta, feel free to give me a shout on Discord and I’d be happy to help!

Author's Response: Oh thank you so much, that is so kind! So glad you are enjoying it still!

Reviewer: AmeliaHalpert Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2023 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 26

He is SUPER brave, and SUPER sweet and SUPER kind.... I just adore this classroom and your world....I want to go and read stories to these littles!

Author's Response: Aw! Im so glad! I love writing sweet Jim

Reviewer: WithaY Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2023 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 18

Oh my gosh! What a darling chapter! I just love young Dwight! What a heart he has in this chapter! And I love his thought that someone must have given Pam cooties! This just warmed my heart!!!

Author's Response: Oh I’m so glad!!

Reviewer: WithaY Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2023 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 17

I would absolutely love to see Michael be an elementary school teacher! Though he’s probably not entirely as organized as they should be, I can only imagine the joy he’d bring to teaching new things to an attentive class of young ones!

I love this sweet development of Dwight and Pam’s relationship! Even though I know Pam is going to be on those swings with Jim soon, it’s good to know she has Dwight in her corner too!

Reviewer: WithaY Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2023 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 17

I would absolutely love to see Michael be an elementary school teacher! Though he’s probably not entirely as organized as they should be, I can only imagine the joy he’d bring to teaching new things to an attentive class of young ones!

I love this sweet development of Dwight and Pam’s relationship! Even though I know Pam is going to be on those swings with Jim soon, it’s good to know she has Dwight in her corner too!

Author's Response: Aw thank you! I love writing him, it’s always an adventure!

Reviewer: Receptionitis15 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2023 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 25

Ah so cute! I detested reading out loud in school too, words are annoying to have to read out, so I feel ya young Jim - but go him for stepping in and braving his fear! Wonder if this will help fuel Pam's battle with her keeper of words?

Author's Response: Aw thank you so much! You’ll see next chapter its effect on her!

Reviewer: MrsKHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20, 2023 12:20 am Title: Chapter 25

You were right, I did love it! Poor Pam being called on like that. But Jim jumping to the rescue? Of course he did, even though it was so hard for him. As a fellow dyslexic I know just how hard that is to do, so it was a HUGE thing he did for her. Can’t wait for more!

Author's Response: Aw I’m so glad! Please let me know if I misrepresent anything or say anything wrong. I don’t have dyslexia myself, but I do have a family member with it so I’m certainly no expert at it! Sorry!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2023 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 25

Figured there's be more of direct approach from Ms. Bennet with Pam. Of course that just sends her into deep waves of panic. But there's Jim to throw her a life ring by taking the attention of her and onto himself.

The fact Jim has his own struggles with words comes across really well here. Something that helps bind their relationship together even more. Lovely.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I used a bit of you life ring metaphor - I’ll be sure to mention that in the next chapter. I felt that Jim had so much understanding that he must have been through something similar, and for a long time I just couldn’t finger what!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2023 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 24

Awwww, this is adorable. Pam creating a comic book for him. Jim giving her watercolors. The sun peaking out of it all. I love everything about this. Beautiful to imagine every bit of it.

Reviewer: AmeliaHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2023 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 25

I just fistbumped the air at Jim being dyslexic!!!!! LOVE THIS!!! And we have all know. The jerk teacher who only cared about how THEY think kids should learn.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I felt like Jim was also using this to communicate and had so much meaning in it, so him having it just felt right! Of course we have the teacher who thinks they can fix everything haha!

Reviewer: Receptionitis15 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2023 09:39 am Title: Chapter 24

This was so cute!! A hug! Progress for Pam!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: AmeliaHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 18, 2023 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 24

AWWWW!!!! Can’t wait for Jim’s reaction to his gift!
And, having been 8 and tapped my thumb… I felt this on a visceral level.. haha!

Author's Response: Oh no! I actually broke my arm falling off of a play set at recess when I was seven and never told anyone… I probably should have because it was broken in a few places haha! I managed to stay the entire day in school!

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