Date: March 12, 2023 08:12 am Title: Chapter 9 - Groggy
Don’t panic, Pam!!
Author's Response: Not going away anytime soon… bear with me ;)
Date: March 12, 2023 07:26 am Title: Chapter 6 - Her fear
Poor Pam can’t catch a break! I’m enjoying this look into her personality. She was always rather anxious in the show and going into this really give a reason to why and her inability to tolerate uncertainty, making her apathetic and unable to take any chances.
Author's Response:
The clues to me were always in her very careful responses, how she thought her mom and dad had a good relationship, how she got back together with Roy and even still had a ‘nice’ talk with him after… there was so much more there.
Date: March 12, 2023 07:20 am Title: Chapter 4 - The stretcher
Oh poor thing! I love how this gives a glance that she has experienced this type of panic before. Go find her, Jim!!
Author's Response: Oh, he finds her…. Not the way either wanted though …..
Date: March 12, 2023 07:18 am Title: Chapter 3 - Be OK
Oh I love how you write, you can really see how desperate he is for her through it!
Author's Response:
Pulling in some of the same panic I imagined when I wrote Safe (after Dwight’s fire stunt).
thank you so much for the compliment!!!!
Date: March 12, 2023 06:35 am Title: Chapter 2 - Pam's panic
Wow the panic attack was so real, I loved how you were able to get us to feel the anxiety that was rushing through her. This was such an accurate look on panic attacks, this is amazing!
Author's Response: Tried my best to incorporate pieces of my own experience as well as knowledge from my profession, glad that came through.
Date: March 12, 2023 06:32 am Title: Chapter 1 - It begins with Jim
OH I LOVE THIS
Author's Response: THANK YOU!!!! I hope you continue to like it :)
1 [Report This]Date: March 11, 2023 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Jim thinks
Wow, an intense batch of chapters!
I liked the use of ‘Pammy’ as a code word, that was a clever touch.
I don’t think Ella was too tough, It’s good to give Pam options on this scenario, despite Jim wanting to save the day with a big Jim gesture.
And yes, Jim Halpert definitely loves moms 🤣
Author's Response:
Hehehe… couldn’t not give a nod to the live of moms 🤪
so much more coming, can’t wait to share!
1 [Report This]Date: March 10, 2023 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Her fear
Real feel for Pam here, and over the last couple of chapters too. Seems so afraid, and you've written it really well.
Author's Response:
Thank you ♥a039;♥a039;♥a039;
Pam was always seen as quiet and cute, but I have always felt there was SOOO much more under there. Going to explore it, hence the heavy warning and the MA rating.
1 [Report This]Date: March 10, 2023 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Be OK
Wow. Karen is a dick. You captured her perfectly 🤣
Again, great work on the panic and tension here
Author's Response:
Hehe. I really thought she was just awful and a little ‘one note’ in the show. I went with that here.
I ADORE Big Tuna’s reasoning in her AU The Unicorn… that Laren was always masking her own queer self, taking it out on others.
1 [Report This]Date: March 10, 2023 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Pam's panic
You really built the tension well here, you feel just how panicked Pam is. I hope she's going to be ok!
Author's Response:
She is going to be okay 💕
promise d84;a039;
1 [Report This]Date: March 10, 2023 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 1 - It begins with Jim
Oh this is so clever how you've tied Pam's reaction to being terrified in this case to the same way she was on Casino Night. But now Jim sees it!! Looking forward to seeing where this is going
Author's Response:
Another story, up all night thinking about it. Could not wait to get it out of my head!!
Can’t wait to share more ♥a039;