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Reviewer: Graceface Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2023 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 2

I love this already! The idea of a modern day teen Jam is amazing! Already need Roy out of the picture with the bits of info on him we have so far! Pam can do better! Her being flustered by Jim was all kinda of funny/adorable! You've rocked this so far, can't wait for more! Xx

Author's Response: Thank you! So much fun to write a modern teen Jam and put them through the highs and lows of college life... even though it includes Roy! 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2023 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 2

So it seems like Pam and Roy are kind of a thing, but he's not around very much and is already starting to blow her off. The fact that Pam's mind is also wandering away from Roy adds to this. If she was in a really good relationship with her guy, why all the thoughts of Jim and sexy chef? Just my take on it.

Anyway, kind of fun to see into her world here. The clandestine artist. The budding friendship with Jim. How she views her friends. I also really like it that she has some close girl friends. Hopefully they'll be able to provide some perspective as everything unfolds.

Author's Response: Yes, it's been fun to paint a picture of their relationship before introducing Roy and interacting with him. We don't get to see much of Pam's friendships in the show so its a great space to explore them here, especially in college at an age where every decision feels so big. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: grc73 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2023 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 2

Boooo - Roy needs to go already and we’ve not even gotten to him yet! That was a fun chapter, looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Thank you! I feel that way about Roy too, and its fun dropping in hints of the state of the relationship before he's shown up in the fic. 

Reviewer: MrsKHalpert Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2023 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 2

Marina is baaaaackkkk!!! I feel she's gonna be a great influence in this fic.
Also, sexy chef yayyyyy!!! Also, another great influence
Love the Jam interaction here and how flustered Pam already is by Jim.
Can't wait for more old chap

Author's Response: She sure is back! Much fun was had adding in sexy chef. Maybe he'll feature again. Who knows? Thank you kindly good sir. 

Reviewer: WithaY Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 29, 2023 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oooh this is gonna be good!!! I love this AU! Can’t wait to see how involved Roy and Pam are, but hopefully not too much, because Jam has definitely made a connection!! I hope that Pam looks him up on social and makes plans to show him her non-virtual art. I loved that great caption she’s posting with the Jim sketch too… so excited to read more and see where this is heading— I’m loving this start so far!! Great job and thanks for sharing your talent!!

Author's Response: Thank you! It's a lot of fun playing with how far along a storyline each character is here, and especially being in the modern day there's a lot that comes into play with this! 

Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28, 2023 01:57 am Title: Chapter 1

This is a very convincing beginning, and I definitely want to read more.

Author's Response: Thank you! :) 

Reviewer: grc73 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 24, 2023 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ohhh I like this, haven't seen a college fic for ages. Looking forward to see how this goes! One question, is Pam actually with Roy at this point or is that just a memory of her having had a crappy dinner wit him?

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Yep, she is still with Roy at this stage, but wanted the relationship to be further along in this universe. 

Reviewer: MrsKHalpert Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 24, 2023 04:30 am Title: Chapter 1

Ok but this is awesome. It’s so stinking cute. I love all the details in it, but especially love that Pam has TimeHop

Can’t wait for more old chap

Author's Response:

TimeHop is always fun! 

Cheery pip lad.  

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 23, 2023 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

This looks like a lot of fun. Pam already starting to find her own way in art. Jim instantly seeing she's good and encouraging her. She's bored with Roy. Looks like we could have room for a lot of fun here. Really looking forward to seeing how this new relationship with Jim pans out. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: It was fun to decide on their starting off points in this world, even without too many specifics. Thanks for the review! 

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