1 [Report This]Date: January 10, 2024 08:30 am Title: Chapter 1
Hi, I really enjoyed this, was a really entertaining read.
If you get a chance, I saw a couple of typos - "groyne" I think should be "groin" (the former is used to reduce wave action/erosion on a beach, pretty sure Pam wasn't looking at that) and at the end you said "grin" but may have been "green" (or even "grinning")?
Author's Response:
LMAO ur right about the typos, i wrote a lot of this at 5am and google docs auto corrects a lot of stuff that doesn’t need to be corrected. thank you!!
and thanks for reading!!
Author's Response:
LMAO ur right about the typos, i wrote a lot of this at 5am and google docs auto corrects a lot of stuff that doesn’t need to be corrected. thank you!!
and thanks for reading!!
1 [Report This]Date: January 09, 2024 08:58 am Title: Chapter 1
So, this is just all sorts of amazing. I love this post S3 summer of amazing you've got Pam going through here. All the growth she went through for the past year comes to blossom in this story. Being more confident in herself, being more open with Jim, realizing her own worth, it's all great. She's taken the best parts of herself and improved them while shedding aspects that were only holding her back.
The rewards are amazing to witness. The way she improves on her relationship with Jim. Bringing new sides of herself out in her appearance and art. It's all a joy to read and witness.
Outstanding job with this one.
Author's Response:
thank you so much!! this is so kind of you!
i stayed up stupidly late to finish this one but it was definitely worth it, i love exploring Pam’s development because i love seeing her become a more confident person in season 4, mostly thanks to jim, but also i think because she learns to take more risks in life after realising she’s free to do so.
Thank you for reading!!!