1 [Report This]Date: December 18, 2024 06:22 pm Title: Second Ending
That was fun. Loved how they get the guitar and dollhouse back. Maybe bad Juju for Creed and Angela, but just right for Jim and Pam. Great fun throughout everything. Love the picture of the crayon box sled too. 100% Pam for sure.
Thanks for bringing this one to life. Happy Holidays!
Author's Response:
Writing Creed was a blast. Did some deep diving to view the younger him on the vinyl. Also discovered the clown is by a real artist, Marian Stachurski who created circus posters. The original says Cyrk. How'd you like how I connected the clown art to the Halperts pranks?
I'm glad you enjoyed my holiday fare. Looking forward to reading yours.
Wishing you music, gifts you can use, the love of family and lots of GOOD juju for the new year.
1 [Report This]Date: December 18, 2024 06:11 pm Title: Ending
I didn't see it coming in the first chapter, but I did fairly early in this one. Those two really are just destined for each other. I liked how they went about researching all the various ways to sell the dollhouse and guitar. Then when the gig was up on Christmas it had a good feeling of wholesome-ness. They realize how much they're alike and not mad at the other one. Looking forward to seeing where we go from here.
Author's Response:
I figured that you would. It was written with many clues. Did you know the story it mimics? That was hinted at in many ways from the very beginning?
But glad, you enjoyed their planning phases...I really leaned into what was happening in the season in that part.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
1 [Report This]Date: December 18, 2024 05:51 pm Title: Beginning
Really liking the set up for this one. They're both starting to think of things that have fallen by the wayside a little bit. Things that have meant something in the past, but life got in the way to keep going. I'm really liking it so far. Great details and imagery with it all too.
Author's Response: Thanks. As you know from my stories I like to create some behind the scenes elements and stories the the cameras didn't catch. This is no exception. Glad you are liking it.