1 [Report This]Date: November 28, 2025 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 3
Why wait for the bed when the couch is right there and they're already there too? Very sensual with how it was all described. We can really feel all the pent up emotions in Jim leading up to and during this moment. Then after to have him relaxing in her fuzzy pink robe like that, lots of fun too. Shows they can still be playful with each other. Great job.
Author's Response:
Bringing levity to the moment, maybe, that robe.
Thank you again for your support. :)
1 [Report This]Date: November 28, 2025 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 2
Look at Pam being pretty forward there! Looks like now that she knows what she wants, she's ready and willing to go after it. They both reap the rewards for it too. Delightful to see them just diving in like this.
1 [Report This]Date: November 28, 2025 07:35 am Title: Coffee?
this is my first time encountering your work and WOW. I’m blown away by your creative writing style that is also so easy to follow. Looking forward to reading more of your stories!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I appreciate that! I know my writing style takes a little adjustment for some.
1 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2025 12:46 am Title: Coffee?
Oooh I like this, great start!
1 [Report This]Date: July 20, 2025 02:23 pm Title: Coffee?
Great start pouring all of that into the kiss! Looking forward to more!
1 [Report This]Date: July 17, 2025 11:16 am Title: Coffee?
Now there's a recap for you! There's still so much lingering over them at this point. Yes Jim has just come in with the whole sweep her off her feet moment, and they've had their "first" date, but now it's just them. Memories and emotions are high and you brought that out really well. But this time, there's no running away. It's great to see them here. Almost as if they're standing on a precipice and can't decide if falling over it is going to be a good thing or a bad thing. But they'll be together this time around which makes all the difference. Can't wait to see where we go from here.