10 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2006 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
She looks away, and gives the start button on the copy machine a good smack as she wonders why she feels guilty spying on the man she’s sleeping with comfort another woman.
Oooh. I've totally been there. The moment when you realize you're standing in the way of something better. Brutal. Very good.
And Karen getting a clue? I'll drink to that!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
9 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2006 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
"He suddenly lets out a cough and steps back a bit, and her arm drops from his coat. At the same moment, she sees Pam shuffle from one foot to the other and tug at the belt on her coat." - ugh, painfully awkward!
I really loved this, great job.
Author's Response:
Akward is as painful to write as it is to read in other fic or watch in an episode. Ugh…I feel for all of them.
Thanks for the review!
9 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2006 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved that. I hope Karen gets a clue SOOOON
Author's Response: Don't we all. :) Thanks.
10 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2006 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Really enjoyed this, I just love these 5 things stories. My favorite part was the going away party for Karen.
Author's Response: Thanks! I like the 5 Things stories and I thought it would be a good format to do my first fic in.
9 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2006 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love that you incorporated so many little details: weird Christmas presents from Creed, the little "Question" Dwight joke,... Pam finding out about Karen and Jim by her none too subtle remark about getting Jim to take her home? Awwwwkward. Well done! :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2006 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very cute, if only it would play out that way on the show;)
Author's Response: Thanks!