10 [Report This]Date: November 30, 2006 12:59 pm Title: Toby - Mardi Gras
I like the way you used individual drabbles that are moments in themselves, but build together to tell one story. Always impressed when someone plays with the 'usual' narrative structure. I thought the last 3 or 4 were particularly well done - tapping into Jim's thoughts especially. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked the different structure - I was hoping that the drabbles would connect well and still be whole enough to stand alone.
10 [Report This]Date: November 30, 2006 12:31 pm Title: Pam - Sway
What are those italic quotes that start each chapter, they looked meticulously selected, or else you wrote them in which case, amazing. And if you didn't, amazing. I. Loved. This.
Author's Response: The quotes that start each chapter are from songs on my office/Jim&Pam playlist, I've got a whole list of ones for further drabbles....I am a dolt and completely forgot to add what songs they were from in the author's notes. I'll go back and do that now. Thank you so much for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: November 30, 2006 11:36 am Title: Pam - Exhiles Among You
What a neat twist - I never thought about Pam opening up about things to Toby. These were really well done - I hope for more!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm toying with a couple more right now, and hopefully after tonight's episode I'll get some new ideas. I think that Toby could give good advice...he must be in HR for a reason.:)