Date: December 13, 2006 10:16 am Title: Sunshine
Lovely - all of it - especially the paragraph that made you blush.
You had me blushing too.
I've adored every one of these series that you've written - this one was NO EXCEPTION. Thanks so much for sharing.
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks xoxoxo!
10 [Report This]Date: December 13, 2006 07:37 am Title: Sunshine
Hmm... looks like my first review got eaten by the Great Beyond, or something. But I just wanted to say that just like Color Wheel and Language Barrier, I loved this one as well, and I thought it was brilliant.
Author's Response: Thank you! And thanks for coming back!
10 [Report This]Date: December 13, 2006 03:54 am Title: Sunshine
Each of your story cycles has been so damn good, and this one is no exception. Love how you gradually worked through their history and then:
He's going to have to say something, soon, or learn to live with nothing, for good.
And then re-wrote history in the nicest way! Of course Phyllis would know. And the bit of heat in this last part was just enough, and very effective. Yum. The marriage proposal was also ingenius...so glad she asked him too. Wonderful story.
Author's Response: Thank you, Colette! (I'm glad the "heat" works.)
10 [Report This]Date: December 13, 2006 01:01 am Title: Sunshine
I love you. Just so it's established before you call the cops on me.
The beginning paragraph? Niiiiiiice. <3
Author's Response: I love you, too, so I promise not to call the police. I do, however, reserve the right to carry weapons grade pepper spray, just in case. Thanks for the reviews!
10 [Report This]Date: December 13, 2006 12:59 am Title: Snow
Aaaaand now I'm melting. Wow.
Author's Response:
Hee!
10 [Report This]Date: December 13, 2006 12:55 am Title: Wind
Aaaaaand now I'm bawling. Way to be. *fist*
Author's Response: I know. Sorry. But I really wanted Jim to stand up for himself a little.
10 [Report This]Date: December 13, 2006 12:53 am Title: Thunderstorm
I'm reading through this NOW and I had to stop and say CRAYONS. I LOVE JIM AND HIS CRAYONS. Seriously. I had to. It was a knee-jerk reaction.
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you liked it!