Date: December 23, 2006 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like these little vinettes about Jim's feelings for Pam. I felt he seemed uncharacteristicially bold in the first one (with his hand on her cheek), but then I thought that they were probably both a little drunk (Pam a lot drunk -- I love the details in that story, too, heh) ... and I have to admit that I've been there, having someone do something like that even though it was too much at the time, and then questioning whether it really happened. I love these.
Author's Response: Thanks. Actually when I wrote this story, I had it in my head that he hadn't actually done that, but that they were so close and the fact that Pam was drunk and angry at Roy, she'd imagined it and it felt real to her. It was just sort of a picture I couldn't get out of my head. Thanks for your review!
Date: December 18, 2006 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was so beautiful. I love the line where you said she'd let his words swirl around her.
Date: December 18, 2006 11:44 am Title: Chapter 1
Just lovely!
8 [Report This]Date: December 17, 2006 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was really great - I like that it's a Pam POV but it's very clear what Jim is thinking as well.
10 [Report This]Date: December 17, 2006 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww, so sweet!
9 [Report This]Date: December 17, 2006 10:19 am Title: Chapter 1
she’d wanted desperately to know what it was called, when he looked at her like that, and she’d wondered what color she’d use if she could paint a picture of it.
That line literally made me catch my breath - very beautifully phrased. This whole thing was wonderful - lovely little glimpses into three very charged moments.
(Although, I have to say, I'm not a fan of the different font... slightly hard to read)
10 [Report This]Date: December 17, 2006 07:25 am Title: Chapter 1
I loved this. Little glimpses of before, mixed with Jim's crush and Pam's kinda knowing are just so sweet. "The tall guy", indeed.
10 [Report This]Date: December 16, 2006 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love the idea behind this fic. Pam and Jim have a lot of gaps to fill and you did a nice job. I would loooooove to see a show and tell day at Dunder Mifflin, wonder what they would bring in...
Date: December 16, 2006 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Some how I feel like show and tell was Jim's ruse to learn more about Pam... very nice. I love them sharing such intimate things with each other. A beautiful image.
9 [Report This]Date: December 16, 2006 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
He’d just gone back to tilting his face towards the stars, searching for something that she knew they’d probably not find. She remembers now that that was when she had known for sure (it had been something about the way he’d said her name).
I loved that line. And I love reading something just...sweet and well written and free from the Season 3 angst-fest. It just built up a great history in my mind for them. :)
Date: December 16, 2006 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is great -- and I love that it free of all the current episode-related complications. Simple and beautiful like a single snowflake.