10 [Report This]Date: August 13, 2008 01:31 pm Title: After the fireworks
good smut! You did just fine, haha, trust me!
Date: July 04, 2008 09:12 pm Title: After the fireworks
Your text/phone conversations are so great...and the smut's not bad either. Really looking forward to the next update!
Date: July 04, 2008 08:14 am Title: After the fireworks
A+ once again!
10 [Report This]Date: June 24, 2008 01:05 pm Title: After the fireworks
I loved it - short, sweet, hot, perfect
Author's Response: You've only commented on the smutty chapters. I guess you liked those best. I am certainly flattered, and you were the only one to comment on the celebration and punishment chapter. I'm glad someone liked it enough to drop me a line. Plus thanks for the stars. You brought me back up to five from four and a half. Love you for it!
10 [Report This]Date: June 24, 2008 12:59 pm Title: After the fireworks
yes, the phone sex WAS nice. You are TOO good at this. continue....
Author's Response: You are TOO kind! But thank you I'm blushing. I shall continue.
10 [Report This]Date: June 24, 2008 12:51 pm Title: After the fireworks
oh my my my, yes, you can write smut!and you need to write more now! excellent - can definitely envision Jim and John doing that... oh thank you. and don't stop !
Author's Response: Thank you. Writing smut is a new talent that I have discovered. I didn't relize I was good at it until all of you reviewers have been so kind to tell me. Thank you for the feedback. I really appreciate it. I hope you'll chime in with more reviews in future chapters.
Date: June 18, 2008 09:43 pm Title: After the fireworks
yay. I loved that little, "what do you want to do?", "...you." part
Author's Response: What a cute name you have. Thank you for leaving me a review. I hope you've liked it so far and will continue to let me know how you think it's going.
10 [Report This]Date: June 16, 2008 03:18 pm Title: After the fireworks
You keep me wantin more!
Author's Response: Awww I heart you I heartstanley. I hope you'll keep letting me know how you think my story is going.
9 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2008 12:30 pm Title: After the fireworks
Since you were so nice in your review of my story, I thought it was only fair to read your magnum opus. It's very good! My favorite parts were the new company slogan and "Jim-enese". Also, the smut.
Author's Response: Thanks for your nice review. I really appreciate it. Glad you liked the smut. There's more where that came from to come.
Date: June 11, 2008 03:34 pm Title: After the fireworks
Great Job!
B
Author's Response: Thanks B
Date: June 11, 2008 03:28 pm Title: After the fireworks
I got a comment for you...This chapter was Smutalicious!
Awesome,
You are very descriptive and great Imagination!
My cape almost fell off!
Batman!
Author's Response: Thanks, Smutalicious I'm blushing. You rock batman29. I hope you keep letting me know what you think.
10 [Report This]Date: June 11, 2008 02:27 pm Title: After the fireworks
You should be a writer you make me want more!!
Author's Response: I heart you iheartstanley. You are always so sweet with your reviews. I apreciate it.
9 [Report This]Date: June 11, 2008 09:57 am Title: After the fireworks
thought about it. i love it.
Author's Response: Thanks Ms. Krasinski.
Date: June 09, 2008 08:26 pm Title: After the fireworks
Short and smutty, just right. Hehe. I loved the motivation you gave for her, that he looked so tired and just needed to relax, and she wanted to help him with that. The actual smut part was excellent too; definitely along the lines of poetic in terms of the language you used. Nicely done!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm also working on a new story I hope to post soon. It is a first date story. Very smoldering hot with similar poetic themes. Thank you for your feedback. Now I know I'm on the right track.
Date: June 09, 2008 07:56 pm Title: After the fireworks
you need more smut in this story.
Author's Response: More? I guess that means you liked it. I aim to please. More to cum.
10 [Report This]Date: June 09, 2008 02:29 pm Title: After the fireworks
it was very niiiiice. [/borat]
Author's Response: Thank you I am prostitte for feedback. It is like whore in your country. (Borat)
Date: June 09, 2008 01:42 pm Title: After the fireworks
I have no complaints about the smut.
Author's Response: sweet.
Date: June 09, 2008 12:12 pm Title: After the fireworks
That was pretty hot. I've been keeping up with this story and I'm really sorry for not reviewing sooner. After posting a nearly unreplied chapter myself I can understand and you should definately plan on hearing from me more often.
Author's Response: Thanks for giving me feedback. It means a lot to know people are enjoying my story. This is my first attempt at fan fic. Everyone had been so kind. I will be sure to read your story.
Date: June 04, 2008 08:31 pm Title: After the fireworks
This story makes me want more so please do!
Date: June 02, 2008 05:48 pm Title: After the fireworks
Great job! I loved your descriptions of their feelings, Pam's feelings in particular. You really got across that she was full of doubt and even a little scared. I loved how Jim could sweep her off her feet though. Soo fluffy. Next chapter soon please!
Author's Response: Your continued reading and feedback on this story have been great. I really do appreciate it. It's so nice when someone takes the time to review your story, isn't it? You can never tell if people are into it unless they comment. I mean it looks like this story has been clicked on over 20,000 times but I only got feedback from 15 members. Thanks for appreciating all the emotion I tried to convey in voice over. I wasn't sure if it was soo over the top. Anyway more to come later ;-)
Date: June 01, 2008 09:01 pm Title: After the fireworks
I am really enjoying this! Good work.
8 [Report This]Date: May 30, 2008 03:19 pm Title: After the fireworks
Love this one! What a great idea; I love the saleslady's 'what a way to go.' It most certainly is. And I liked that you included the part about not upgrading the ring. I agree that it would mean more if she knew he bought it when he didn't have his nice new salary. Great chapter! More please!
Author's Response: Thanks so much Dundie All-star. I'm a jewelry artist and it occurred to me that this would be a great way to strtch out the prank proposals. Glad you liked it. Hope to hear from you again.
Date: May 29, 2008 03:45 am Title: After the fireworks
I love love love your story! All of it seems just like the show and whenever I read it my heart just turns to goo (in a good way if that is possible) because you have the best JAM moments! Please Please Please write more soon!
Author's Response: Awwwwwww. Thanks. More good goey bits to come promise.
Date: May 29, 2008 01:50 am Title: After the fireworks
loved it...love the idea of how he is going to propose, but maybe not drag it out for more than a week...idk...can't wait for more
Author's Response: I am so sorry and this might bring me trouble and bad feedback but it's going to be a while before Jim does it for real. But I have the idea all maped out and I think it will be worth the wait. Hope you can stand it.
Date: May 28, 2008 07:59 pm Title: After the fireworks
I love this so much! The idea of him getting the job works so well, it makes me wonder if they'll do something like that one the show! You do a really great job of including everyone in the story as well, so it's not all about Jim and Pam. I mean, you even got Creed in there! And I think I laughed out loud when Pam texted "kiboshed the shrine huh:-(" Magical. There were so many amazing moments in this, smut, humor, and awkwardness included. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you I am touched. Glad you are liking all the aspects. There's way more to go keep checking in. I really appreciate the comments.